SS~ RAZAA~ PART 2/3/LAST pg/30/31/32 *edited* august 28th :)

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

it ended you soon
dont take things to ur bcoz of that sick people
I truly loved this story
plz atleast give epilogue

and about update
superb part
dev pammi kick out fromKM
maaneet happy

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

yaar when was geet pregnant...update mai aisa kuch nahi hey..
😕

Ha Geet pregnant thi tabhi toh woh ofice mein maan ko batane gayee n she got divorce papersfrom Maan. then confrontation.. & finally Maneet together..

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Don't knw who r bashing writers and y...pls if u don't wanna read it, leave it der only...

Lovely story...it was rushed I knw bt understand wht made u do dat...dev n pammi were kicked out n dats wht I loved...

Sapna shocked me...I mean in d jail after a yr...bt u r right...in jails it's very common...few out of choice n few r forced to do it...

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Smily

@angel_smily

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

awesome ss

a very diffrent concept

liked it

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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

a harsh truth u hv portrayed here buddy⭐️
nd writing such a reality tkes gr8 courage
like u i also rem bout such kinda girls in my hostel i was horrified knowing bout thm 😡😡😡😡😡😡
nd u hv written it truly
nd bout tht arjun too men like these xist in d society 😡😡😡😡😡😡
but thr r also men like maan who r thr nd u hv described maaneet's love so understandingly too 😃😃😃😃😃
i wud say brilliant on ur part to come up wid such topics
thnx fr d pm 😃

Edited by pixelflower620 - 12 years ago

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Very different story.. Geet was sexually harassed by lesbos... She saw every relation turned down in front of her own eyes...So it was difficult to trust on Maan.. But Still Maan's confession made her her realize that it was love.. not lust.. somehow he wanted to keep her close to him... Nice story..Harika.. loved it.😃

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Rupi_bains

@Rupi_bains

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

amazing part

but so sad it's finished

so quickly...love to read

what ever u write...great work harika

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dolly10

@dolly10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Nice update...but its ended abrupty😕

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

the way u ended the story tells how much u have hurt with the comments given by some people dont think about them. Any how coming to the part i didnt know anything about lesbians from this update i came to know how they interact the girls who live in hostels must have come across this type of people so with the knowledge u tried to tell through ur writing i am appreciating for ur thoughts.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

hi thanks 4 da pm n nice update! Maan marries her! She is depressed bt he assures her! Pammi n Dev kicked out! Maaneet begin their life! well written