NEW MAANEET FF D RING THT WASN'T MEANT 2 B MINE PART 2 PG23 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Intresting prologue nd title congrats for the new mg ff...waiting 4 ud
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow interesting prologue dee..will surely follow this one 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
loved the prologue
so the engagement ring is for some one else
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congrats for the new mg ff...
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awesome start 😊 waiting for next update
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congrats
will be waiting for updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Waiting to read another Wonderful story by u Didu 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
best friends like in season1.but maan is more sweet here.he proposed 2 her with a ring.waiting 2 know how this ring twists their life
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats on the new FF...
Interesting story line and very nice story...
Waiting for it to start...
Thanx for pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Maaneetians as promised I am back with the season 2 of Jaane tu ya jaane na with a fresh concept and a new way of understanding the true beauty of divine love. Here is the first part I hope you'll enjoy reading it

PART 1


"Look once with attention in my eyes my love; u will find your face hidden within me

You are the light and happiness of my heart, you are the eternal wealth

There is nothing more I know the only thing I know is

Look once with attention in my eyes my love; u will find your face hidden within me"

The musical rhythm of an angel's anklets were expressing the happiness of her heart as she danced her way from one room to the other dispersing the beautiful essence of true love with every graceful movement of hers

"Allow me to come within your arms

I long to melt within you

Allow me to look at you forever

I long to sacrifice myself for you"

Her long curls trailed the canvas of her milky white back as her gown committed the sin of slipping down from her mesmerizing form thus allowing the addicted breeze to drench her with the shower of naughty shameless kisses

"I wish I could fall on your body like a garland

I wish I could sail across the universe in your love

I wish I could lose myself in your entirety

I wish I could become your adorning temple of love"

The musical rhythm of raindrops appeared pine and thirsty as they got to witness the beauty of her curvaceous waist when she herself embraced the showering blessing of the sky allowing nature to beautify the sculpture of her mesmerizing body with its own hand

"You are my passion you are my heaven

You are my comfort you are my fragrance"

She was an epitome of innocence yet she had this wild side to her personality; the clouds got engaged in a battle of jealousy as they fought their way with the help of their rain pearls to enter her breathless passionate beauty as she lifted her dress with a sexy movement of her toes and exposed her flawless miraculous legs

"My nights appear to be a gift from you

Why has my everything turned yours...

My eyes are lost in yours

My arms embrace you in them

Nothing seems to be mine anymore

Wherever I might go seems I met you

It's about you... JUST ABOUT YOU"

As she moved her fingers from her forehead up to her lips cupid died a shameful death as no matter what it could never gain the authority to claim this playful naughty seductress as his own... oh she was indeed every man's dream

"I decorated you on my lips

I hummed you like a song

With one indication of your eyes

I know where my destiny belongs"

The wave like movement of her chest as she kissed the earth with the swaying movement of the body was setting every particle of soil ablaze such was the magic of her divine beauty

"Let's get drenched in the rainfall of desire

Let's get restless in the passion of boundless fire

Let's toss and turn and stay up all night

To write a never ending tale of burning wild desire"

Leaving her silent admirers of nature unsatisfied laughing her heart out like an innocent child scenting the dry earth with her fragrance she raced with the breeze and entered her mansion

"Innocent face, downcast eyes

Simple girl; elegant style

She is neither an angel nor a fairy

But it's her magic

She makes one crazy and add colors to life"

Destiny had named this musical blessing of divinity as "GEET". The tenderness of her face, the light of her eyes, the redness of her lips, the beauty of her breaths were just a simple reflection of the diamond like heart that this angel possessed

"My love for you will never decrease

To whom I love, to whom I worship

Let me see her, let me love her"

Her love was like a descending waterfall as well as a rising poem; wrapped with the fragranting colors of selflessness it possessed the strength to give birth to an epic story of two hearts

"In our eyelashes we carried a dream, we carried a restless heart

When we started walking the clouds of music started forming

These melodious songs that have started echoing made my heart victorious

Everything became perfect as u entered my life

Everything became complete when I made u my life"

She was head over heels in love with her best friend and business partner Maan but this love of hers was her biggest strength as she had no expectations from him. She loved him secretly and was in no mood to let him know this hidden love of hers she knew he was a person who hated to hate the word love

"I found happiness in your shade

Your will is my life

Take me wherever you wish to

In my eyes lies your site"

She had a strange liking towards kidnapping for reasons best known to her heart; she was an amazing blend of a shy beauty as well as a bold seductress but deep down her heart all she safeguarded was an innocent dream; a dream to become the love of her Maan atleast once before she breaths her last

"Oh beloved I have never been able to say it out loud

But my eyes always narrated the tale of my heart

You came into my breaths u stole my heartbeats

And today I am restless over you to such an extent that my soul is fragranced with only your name

JUST YOUR NAME"

Like a fresh gust of paradise scent Geet stepped out of the washroom covering her beauty with a short towel

"Your memories come back and cover my heart

Your dreams come back and intoxicate my laugh

Your sensuous touches that beautify my imaginations

Drench me in a shower of mesmerizing elegance"

She loved him beyond the boundaries of sanity; she knew the language of every silent breath of his; she was his best friend and he was her companion not perfectly compatible but surely inseparable

"Now that you are mine; these moments have frozen

Now that you are mine; all my grief has disappeared

Now that you are mine; I have learned to smile

Now that you are mine magic has taken over

Now that you are mine; I have learned how to live

Now that you are mine; I have attained God himself"

She was the serene calm moonlight; he was the unpredictable thunder of rain. A part of hers knew him perfectly well yet a part of his was shielded with a unique veil that took her by shock every time he mentioned the word "SURPRISE"

"Without you many nights

I thought of things about you

There is a strange restlessness; days trouble me

Nights don't pass; how do I live

Tell me where should I go"

Lost in his thoughts as she allowed the soft silky material to slip down her curvaceous secrets she found herself being admired by the admiring gaze of his name as his call alert flashed on her mobile screen

"Come embrace me come end these distances

Why do u crave and make me crave

Now that this heart is yours"

As usual Maan didn't allow Geet to speak and directly came to the point


Maan: Heya my sugar syrup your bitter drug has a surprise arranged for you come to the church at 5 pm today will wait for u till then a SUGARY BITTERY BYE


His unpredictable nature was a big headache for Geet she knew a storm was going to come but what nature this storm possessed was still under wraps atleast till the clock struck 5

"You are the first wish of my heart

You have become my life's meaning

It seems it's time for the hearts to meet

As a new love story is unfolding"

She closed her eyes and silently wished that the so called surprise of her bitter drug Maan would indeed be a good one for a change or else...

PRECAP: The church was decorated beautifully to mark the occasion of Maan's marriage 😲 🤢

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Heya guys I hope you'll liked the first part of jaane tu season 2 would just like to tell you'll that Maaneet of this story are different and the sole purpose of writing the first part in a poetic way was to make you'll understand that this Geet is completely different in short EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED FROM ME IN THIS FF 😉

Love- Divya (aka Piya)


Part 2: Page 23
Edited by piya- - 12 years ago

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