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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
too much emotional & painfull update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome part
maan drunk and beat that man too badly
geet waiting for maan
maan gonna regret in morning
plz do add me in your blog
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Posted: 11 years ago
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painful update
maan is in sooo much pain
and her fear is right
after loosing every luvdone wht will one do
geet is she mad still knowing tht the person she luvs doesnt luv her and one who luvs her soo much she is giving him pain
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update eagerly waiting for next one
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PART 3:

18+ ON THE BLOG!! rest here!!

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The next morning when maan woke up, he saw the worst sight of his life ... Geet soaked in his passion ... He forced her!! The mere thought itself ate him, he wrapped her body with the sheet and hugged her tightly with tears brimming down the eyes.



He woke up geet patting her cheeks ... utho geet ... utho ... He begged kissing her hair, he wanted to make sure she was fine, he didn't know that geet would go to such an extent to prove him that she truly wanted to live the marriage. And when she woke up to look at him and smile, it killed him ... stabbed him to no level. Damn he felt ashamed, for the deed he did ... dekha geet?? this was the reason I told you to stay away from me ... tumne suna nahi ... I ... I had taken your everything, barbaad kar diya maine tumhe, he said between the hiccups that escaped from his throat.



Tumne kuch galat nahi kiya maan, this is your right ... She said wiping his tears ... Ill be ok in a day, tum please khud ko takleef mat do, please ... that was when he felt like a dirt, like an angel she had taken his pain and now not even complaining on his devilish act. Maan backed off from her and that backing off had been so long ... backing off was for a month again.



Geet did try to tell him that it was ok but he couldn't forgive himself, drinking has become a habit on him to stay away from the deed he did to geet. He would only come at night and see his beautiful wife sleeping, and in the morning he would leave before she wakes up. It was only guilt that remained in his heart nothing else.




Geet did understand his feeling of staying away from her, though she would be awake when maan comes back in the night she pretends sleeping just to feel his presence around her for a little while atleast.




Happy birthday beta ... a message touched her phone at night 12'O clock from her mother, geet got up and checked the phone. She doesn't know as to why she was feeling tired since morning, and the nausea was making it even more tuff on her to relax on the bed. Once in an hour she would vomit, there was no one to tell her condition. She passed off not knowing when sleep over took her!!



The next morning geet got the reports from the hospital, she was on cloud nine for the revelation of the pregnancy. She thanked her babaji for the birthday gift he had given her, she called maan but he did not pick it up. Loosing her patience she decided to tell him about the baby ... She left to the office!!



@office,

Receptionist: mam ... maan sir is in the meeting, he knew that you would come ... He has asked me to give these papers to you ... And ya you can relax in his cabin till he finishes the meeting, the receptionist said leading geet to the cabin.



She opened the envelope to get the shocking news of her life, DIVORCE!! It took her a moment to gather herself and look back once again to see if she was reading right, to make sure she was right. Babaji has given them a chance to make their lives as normal as they could but maan's stupidity only spoiled it. That was her birthday gift from her husband ... an irony of life!! She sat in the cabin getting suffocated, waiting for maan to come back. And when he came geet looked at the papers in her hand, she lost the battle that she was fighting till then, no rational thoughts came into her ... All she wanted was to slap him and tell him that she wanted to live a happy life with him. What mistake did she do?? Giving herself?? Accepting him as her husband?? She slapped him tight across his cheek and held his collar, Aaj aapne hamare rishte ko yeh talaak ke kagaz deke ruswa kiya hai maan ... Was it my mistake to forget and move on with you knowing that rahul always loved sameera?? You feel I am a toy that you will free me now and ask me to go back to the same world where I found myself alone?? Fine ill but don't claim your rights later not on me neither on the baby!!




The baby!! By the time the word registered into his mind, he saw geet's retreating back. Damn she was really happy with the baby?? Was she really pregnant??



Outside maan's cabin,

By the time geet came out someone hugged her tightly saying Happy birthday doll ... Geet knew it who was it!! Now the hug disgusted her, she could never let someone else touch her. She pushed the man and inched back setting her ruffled hair ... She is now Mrs. Maan singh khurana!! And that's what she said to rahul who seemed to be lost in her. It was a gap of two months, uff ... It had been a day since he realized what geet meant to him and what sameera was for him!!



I love you geet ... maine tumhara diary padh liya tha ... and then understood how much you loved me, I was a fool that I could not make your heart ... Maan se maine sab keh diya, he promised he will give you divorce hum saath mein rahenge jaan, he again tried to hold geet into his arms.




Tumne maan se kaha ki tum bhi mujhse pyar karte ho?? She asked getting a shock with the events that happened, so this was the reason maan was giving her divorce. He wanted to give her the love she always craved for.



Yeh jaante hue bhi meri shaadi maan se ho gayi you want me back rahul?? Geet played with the papers in her hand as realization hit her, how foolish was she all the while that she thought that she loved rahul till now??




That's true love geet and I love you more than maan he answered angering geet, sacha pyar hai geet ... tumhari shaadi kyun na ho jaye ill cant stop loving you ... tumhara pyar mere liye kisi bhi sach jaanne ke baad bhi aise hi rahega rahul? Geet looked into his eyes, which were now getting confused at geet's behavior.




I really love you geet, I do ... and his confession made her even more strong to say out her mind ... fine then let me tell you something, maan ne mujhe chua hai, will you accept me now?? She smirked looking at rahul's face which lost the color ... we had a physical relation, you might call it as sex I would call it love!! Kaho kya tum ab bhi mujhe accept karoge?? She shoved the reports of her pregnancy on his face ... Ek bache ki maa banne wali hoon kya tum ab bhi mujhe waise hi chahoge??



Rahul lost his cool self looking at the pregnancy reports of geet which were positive, he would never accept her, he can never he thought, he stepped back throwing the papers down ... I cant geet he replied showing his back to her.




Tumme aur maan mein yehi fark hai rahul ... Agar woh tumhare jagah hote toh hassi khushi mujhe accept kar lete ... He freed me from himself knowing I loved you always, and if he touched me it was when he was not in his senses, hosh rehte kabhi woh mere paas bhi nahi aaye and you?? ... Mujhe meri shaadi shuda jindagi ki duhai dene ki jagah you forced my husband to divorce me?? Yeh tha tumhara pyar?? Love is giving rahul not snatching ... Aaj kehti hoon I love maan ... Main wait karongi jab tak woh mujhe accept nahi karlete ... just leave, she said walking out of the office.



That night,

Baby will your mother forgive me for the crime I did?? Main jaanta hoon maine gunah kiya hai, ruswa kiya hai hamare rishte ka ... But I love her more now, main uske bagair jee nahi sakta ... He hugged geet through waist who was sleeping, well like every normal night ... maan came to geet to see her for once. And she was wide awake waiting for maan and she giggled with his confession, she got up and pulled him to face her ... Mama bhi papa ke bagair jee nahi sakti ... I love you too maan, she said hugging him.



I forced you geet and this child ... she placed her finger on his lips stopping maan to speak further, its love maan, forget what happened, you were never wrong bas haalat galat the, geet hugged maan not wanting to continue with his apology.



What happened next was a passionate night, and then their official marriage!! They lived happily ever after!!


PREVIOUS PART:

PART 2


Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
oh god..maan is out of control..the pain of lossing geet made him sooo lost..pls dnt update in blog..pls pls update in GF..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part-2

Painful part for both Maaneet.Maan burning in fire of failed love where he cant even claim Geet as his wife,in front of the society.His past and present both haunting him.

And Geet he is already defeated in hands of fate,now has to see her husband in this weak and defeated state of mind,where he is forcing her.Tho Maan stops at correct time but then Geet gave in save their relationship fm further more damage.

Gr8 part.Waiting for morning reaction of Maan.
Edited by sweetsampa39 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Its completed :(
bht jaldi kham ho gya
bt koi nhi loved this OS so so much
maan ne jo kiya wo nashe mai kiya bt jb geet hi koi regret nhi kr rhi to maan kyun
ab wo rahil kya lene aaya tha acha hua geet ne bhaga diya usse huh bloody cheapo kahin ka
bada aaya true love dikhane wala
uski himmat kaise hui maan ko ye kehne ki wo geet ko divorce de de
ghatiya men

nd tht maan coffesstion is so cute
love the way he confess nd apolozise
Edited by shalinimg - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow that was a very nice "Happily ever after" for our troubled Maaneet.

Maan was bound to regret the passionate night but that night gave Geet the seed of her future.She forgave Maan as she realised that her husband's love is real and pure,not that selfish Rahul's.

And the night part when Maan came to apologise to Geet,its awesomely beautiful.


Loved d story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Awesome story yar...
Nice n different concept ..
Read both the parts...
Felt bad for maaneet...
Majboori mein shaadi tho karli par finding it difficult to run the marriage n splly maan... :-(
Felt thier pain..
Ab kya hoga... Maan drunk .. He is defo gonna regret later...
But i think geet ll not... ;-)
Waiting for next part... :-)

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