MG FF: Mending hearts #2 last pt pg 139 jan 5

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#861

I will be waiting for sequel of this story...

but please create different story...I will tell u true what my heart feels is that reading same story again will make me bore...when we already know whole story then it don't create magic again...

awesome update...

they are bounded by seven vows now...

thanx for pm...

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#862

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

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gurti30

@gurti30

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#863

beautiful end

finally maaneet got married😊

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Rosmitha

@Rosmitha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#864

nice ending...

plz pm me the MH Sequel...

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#865

Hi Suhana,

Hope you know me..if not, myself Cherishh Jinna from FB😳

I have started reading your story, Mending Hearts, just tonite and I am literally hooked up to it

When I read the prologue/CS, I was all set to see a very ruthless Maan, i.e., MSK, but seeing him in a very calm, controlling way around Geet was such a bliss, though I am sure as I move ahead reading the story I would defo get to see the real MSK, of course not around his Mishty

I was kind of really scared when you said he is a womanizer and gets what he wants and this time it was Geet and was dreading imagining Geet's condition and all, but this story really brought a very unique and interesting track of Maneet.

All the emotions were beautifully written or say brought out by you.

I loved Geet's characterization. We have got to see Geet's innocence in some stories, but was very delighted to see freshness in her character portraying innocence in your story, which defo is a highlight of your writing I felt. The combo of innocence, naivety and lovelinesss is charming for sure and I was all like "lucky Maan"...kudos to you👏

Coming to the story, yes I was kinda confused in the first couple of updates as to whats going on but as the things started to unfold, it just made me fall in love with it.

Maan all lost in Geet, first with her beauty and craving for her & then learning about her pain and then the biggest thing her being pregnant and he sure its being his child followed by which we got to see a loving and caring yet angry, which doesn't last long😉, Maan.

Geet bringing calmness, smile and kind of comfort & peaches and mostly love and care in Maan's life so easily with her presence and her antics, doings shows the beauty of her Character.

Then their bond getting strong unknown to them in a sweet way, her bossing and his patience but having both of theirs care and love was beautifully pen down

Geet is a sweetheart...her love, care and wanting good for others, especially Maan and even left him for that touched me.

I wonder how she gonna take the truth of her life, the danger that is still lurking around her (well I haven't read the story completely so am saying so)

Loved the sweet and simple office moments...her cute cribbing and talks with the baby

The sweet and adorable love they have for their baby is so wonderful to read.

OMG...hate word for Brij is also less I feel...he is a disgusting being. I was scared at first that did someone did something to Geet apart from Maan and then Brij accepting to Naina about his deeds against his sister was the hardest part to digest, but was so relieved to know the real fact...though Naina has done enough damage, I am glad she helped Geet.

I always love Maan more in whatever shade or character I read, but in Mending hearts I am beyond totally fida on Geet.

Thanks for such beautiful work yaar. I just couldn't stop myself reading after the first 2 parts and read along to the nite and writing down my view out here. I am off now to bed, will catch up with the rest tomorrow evening again...to see MSK in action and hoping dadi coming back and some moments of her with Geet

🤗 for this amazing story...

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tammana

@tammana.m

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#866

Lovely <3...5naly maaneet get married.:-) i thot m gna mis dis FF..Bt now m eagerly wait 4 sequal...

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sravanthi

@sravanthi93

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#867

amazing part..

Plzzz if u are writing a sequel... plzz add me in the list... Would love to read it!!!

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#868

kind of sad that you ended😭😭 this was the first ff that i read of yours and liked it 😊 anyway thanks for the wonderful story, 😊
i am glad everything was sorted out 😊
ofcourse interested in the sequel, let me know when you start

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#869

so maan ask geet for marriage and poor geet , telling about brij ,beautiful she is nave but true with heart love this update , maan have so much faith and trust on geet, their love ,relation ,emotional update thanks dear
maan teaing geet our nave geet cribbing he will acted as hero come vilan true geet and maturity two other pole things 😆she is so innocent don't get meaning of his love confession wow beautiful update 👏

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