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Inertia14

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Posted: 12 years ago

LOST IN TIME

Time is a treacherous friend
It never stop by when the time of happiness embraces you
But it sits back and look when you suffer from pain
But does time still knows When to stop by
Does it stops by at true look of love

Because that is the Moment in

Life

In which even time would want to live in'

MAAN:-

I never believed love Could happen to me
I never believed Someone can make me feel alive
But then I met her
I met her at a time when Clocks Stopped humming
I met her at a time when dreams came true
I met her at a time when I was frozen in moments...
I met her when I was lost in time

GEET:-

I never believed this Can happen
I never believed time Can be my friend
But then I met him
I met him in a time when heart stopped beating
I met him in a time When nothing was mine
I met him in a time When faith started believing
I met him in a time when I was lost in time...

NOTE

Maan a man who can conquer worlds but lost his love to a mere Someone

Geet a women who won love only to lose it to the world

Nitya she betrayed belief but found peace

Aditya he cheated a friend but found his soulmate

Ronak he found happiness in illusion but illusion will fade in time

Hello Ppl I am a newbie here and that means I am new member of this forum

I have always loved Geet and have been associated with the serial and its memories in numerous ways. Its just that I am taking a chance of expressing my emotions towards Maaneet through my story and through my words.

Hope you all will like my effort

Hope you all will support me with your love

Do leave ur comments and tell me if I should move

forward

with this or not

will be waiting

😊

Edited by Inertia14 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

INDEX:-

So It Ends here

At the other end of the world-Page 2

And I will live the illusion- Page 3

A morning not so bright-Page 3

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Inertia14

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preeti.1
interesting

Thank u 😊

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Inertia14

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.Perfectiie
Nice

Thank u 😊

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Inertia14

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 1-So It Ends here…

Life hasn't been a piece of cake for me I have struggled throughout my life to make myself the man I am. I was born ordinary but then I made myself the extraordinary one who doesn't know the name behind the one who made Construction and Architecture a successful business in the Britain's market, who doesn't know the emperor of the construction world I am Maan…Maan Singh Khurrana.

The man who won the world but lost his love Nitya…

I looked at the card that was lying on the desk

Shimmering in the golden colour the colour that resembles to my greed

You are cordially invited to the

Marriage Ceremony

Nitya Saxena

And

Aditya Bose

Nitya and I have been brought up together. After our parents died in a plane crash my dadi took responsibility of both of us. So technically we have been there with each other in each phase of our life she was my first friend, then my first best friend, then my first love.

We studied together and took in charge of Khurrana's and Saxena Company together. We made it a success together but then according to Nitya I became an addict of success I was never satiated no matter how much I won.

I guess that was the time Nitiya moved away from me and found solace in arms of Aditya.

The friend who became a traitor he snatched the only happiness I had my Nitiya. I trusted him we were together in college he knew what was she for me but still he took my prized possession away…

And here I am tired and betrayed holding the wedding card of my love that now belongs to my friend huh such ironies life makes you see.

I looked at the phone that was ringing for the umpteenth time now

NITYA CALLING

Huh why she is calling me when she herself disconnected me from her life.

Nitya-Hello…Maan

Maan-Hello Nitya You still sound the same huh

Mrs Nitya Aditya Bose you still sound like my friend

Nitya- Maannn please

Maan- What please huh don't like my voice or the tone in it

Nitya-We are still friends

Maan- Were friends Nitya…We were friends and why have you called me now don't want to marry that TRAITOR any more

Nitya- Maannn please for god sake leave your bitterness

Maan- Bitterness…I live on it now…at least I deserved an explanation Nitya rather than the surprise wedding invitation…what happen did you both not had the courage to let me know

Nitya-…….. I wanted to Ma…an but I was scared to hurt you I was scareed I will lose my friend and my family

Maan- Well guess what Nitya you still did hurt me and I hate you for lying that you loved me…Now if you will excuse me I have a wedding to attend don't wanna be late.

Please plz leave ur comments will update next part soon

but need ur support for it 😊

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gurti30

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome start dear

loved the poem u wrote in the start

so maan loved nitya but lost her and aditya knowing about maan's love for her is marrying her

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

NICE START

WHEN WILL YOU CONTINUE

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Inertia14

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey I will update soon if you all want

Low likes ko dekh ke I thought ppl didn't like it much iss liye nahi kara update
Originally posted by: punam2712
NICE START
WHEN WILL YOU CONTINUE

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Inertia14

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 2-

At the other end of the world...

I looked at our wedding card

Geet Singhania

Weds

Ronak Khanna

It's been an year and a half now but as the glitter on our marriage card has faded so has our love.

I wonder what attracted us at the first place it's not that I don't love him anymore I do but what makes me hate him is that he refuses to try to keep that love alive.

I am getting tired everyday it seems I and Ronak have drifted on the different ends of the world. I am glad my dad isn't alive anymore to see my sufferings.

I am home I heard Ronak screaming from downstairs.

I closed my book that I was pretending to read and walked out of our room putting a fake smile across.

How are you Ronak?

I asked as any person will ask in a formal relation.

Very well darling he said and dropped a small peck on my cheeks..

These things seem so monotonous now that I don't even feel the warmth of the gesture.

Would you like something to drink...?

Ahmm no I got a party to attend

Ohh ! Party but you just came from a tour, you must be tired and there is so much to catch up.

I know honey and I am sorry but then it is important...you don't know how business world works.

I certainly don't but perhaps I will if you will share it with me

Geet please is it necessary to argue every time

Argue I was just suggesting Ronak

Suggesting really Geet and why your suggestion does comes at the time when I have a party to attend

Oh yes the party I screamed I was holding the last thread of my patience which today broke with his indifference

What Party Ronak ...the parties where you drink and get laid

The parties where at the name of bussinesss you sleep with bitches of societies huh

Geeet... dare you

Why Ronak ...Why ? What went wrong between us... we loved each other...where has the love gone?

Its ruined our love is ruined Geet...you ruined it I loved the free spirited girl but look at you now what a lousy person you have became

You sit at home and do nothing except imagining thing...and I hate you now... I hate the pretence of being in love with you When I am clearly not in love with you anymore

Huh you know why GEET because I am better ...I am better than you

Now I have a party to attend...and first thing in the morning I am consulting a lawyer for Divorce.

I looked at his retreating figure that looked hazy through my hazy eyes. He hates me because he is better and I am someone who lost herself hoping to gain his love.

We were like two ends of world for sure He belonged to the end that personifies perfection and I in a world that now is filled with broken mirage of love, dreams and desire.

Ok I am posting after a long but I am just being patient

I wanna give a fair chance to the story and the readers to understand it so plz press like and comment if you like it

I have got a few more parts ready but I will post it

after seeing some enthusiasm towards the story line

till then Adios 😊