Pretty Woman (ADAPTATION) Maneet FF...ON HIATUS :'( Note:Pg 87 - Page 39

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Posted: 11 years ago

painful update...

poor maaneet .. dev played and put them in this place...

waiting for the next update...

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.Tulip.

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Posted: 11 years ago

luvd it ...though it ws painful in d end bt amazingly written👏

plz update soon nxt part

eagerly waiting

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StarlitPhoenix

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Posted: 11 years ago

Intense update👏

simply brilliant!

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

MAAN WHAT AN IDIOT

FIRST HE PLAYED IN DEV'S HAND AND REVEALED TO HIM THAT GEET WAS A HOOKER

THEN HE IN HIS ANGER INSULTED HER,HURT HER AND THEN LET HER GO

POOR GEET - TODAY SHE FELT CHEAP FOR THE FIRST TIME IN HER LIFE

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meenu

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Posted: 11 years ago

that was really very painful!!!

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sessy

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Posted: 11 years ago

omg what an amazing update.

thx for the update,loved it

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

finally u updated
i loved the whole thing...watched the movie in between as well
but i say again i lve this maaneet version better
oops differences but the kind of girl geet is..she will defo feel humiliated abt maan confiding in abt her to dev
and dev..chi..tht bloody *******
cant wait for the next
continue soon

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zaara2212

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow another update 😊 thanks 😊
dev is just a bas***😡
poor geet 😭😭

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Posted: 11 years ago

superb part
geet so friendly with jai
this dev😡
finally geet left...what will maan do now
eagerly waiting for the next part

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks so much for such a long update dear

What an update yaar

Mindblowing

in all the senses

firstly

maan and geet's entry at the event was awesome

and maan with THE TIE

too good

the running commentary was also very nice and geet's reply to the commentators😉

ur writing really made me visualize that I am watching the match

u really have a great sense and style or writing dear

I haven't seen this part

as youtube did not have this part

but I don't think I missed out anything

maan and geet's stomping the divots was superb

loved their closeness

and then comes dev the devil

why did maan has to say every thing to him?????????????

and the last part

oh dear that was so very painful

maan's words

as if dipped in poison

u know when I was reading this part I felt I am watching the season two of the show ghsp

with maan's so hurting words

as he used to speak in the show

somewhere I felt this story will suit so well for the second season of the show

and Gurmeet and Drashti will do full justice to their character here as well

getting dreamy and shifted from my track of commenting😆

here I want to ask u something dear

when u write some emotional parts don't u get carried away

or when writing such painful parts how can u keep on writing

don't u feel the pen when writing such poisonous sentences

what exactly goes in a writer's mind writing such parts

would love it if u share dear

I felt so sorry for geet

but I know as in the show this maan will also make his geet come back to him

with his sweeter than sugar words now

I had watched the movie till the bath tub scene only and the last scene the car scene

so here I don't know what will maan do now

that is why now I am more eager for the next part

cant see my dear maan and geet in so much pain

pls pls update sooon

P.S.

though don't like dev

but I loved this line of his which he said to maan

...that is why I have pledged my eternal love to you...

and geet's roshesh inspired squeal

v nice

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