Pretty Woman (ADAPTATION) Maneet FF...ON HIATUS :'( Note:Pg 87 - Page 24

Originally posted by: flopsy

AWESUMMM UPDATE 😛 😛

Luved the way you described Geet's attire for the date, and Maan was totally flabber gasted seeing hw beautiful and sexy Geet looked. 😛 😊

And the limo ride, the possessiveness was coming out of MSK when he saw Geets bare back, he just wanted to cover her up, but controlled. 😃 😛

The dinner scene was lovely, Mr Mohinder Raichand and his son seemed impressed with Geet and luved that little handshake between them. And ofcourse Geet wondering where were the salad fork was, ,cute.

Waiting for next part, and some romance.

Well the next part will have a lot of Maaneet close moment! i wont call it romance as they are not 'yet in love' but yes there would be some barriers breaking, a step ahead in their relationship😊 Thank u so much for uur detailed comment and PM. I always look forward to it

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

awesome part.. over posessive Maan.. & mean businessman.. i just loved him.. he has totally lost in Geet's beauty.. & Aww Geet is so cute even both Raichands hd impressed with her

& when Maan come know abt Asad then surelly his posessiveness will be on high pitch.

waiting for Maan Geet's passionate / romantic moments

thnx for pm.. 😊

waiting for next part.. do cont. soon

Thank u for ur comment. I doubt Maan would ever get to know abt Asad. it probably will be Geet and Asad's chhotu sa secret.

Originally posted by: zaara2212

lovely update😊
maan is surely all fida on geet 😊😳

hmm wonder what raichand have instore for maan 😊
interesting continue soon😊

thanks😊 yes raichand's are tio stay and play an important role in the story!

Originally posted by: maanland

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR TAKING OUT TIME AND GIVING US UPDATE DEAR

COMING TO THE UPDATE

OH HOW WONDERFULLY YOU HAVE DESCRIBED MAAN'S FEELINGS AFTER SEEING his geet

TOO GOOD DEAR

AND YOU MADE GEET WEAR A SAREE

THAT WAS REALLY SURPRISING AND A TWIST TO THE ORIGINAL

LOVED IT DEAR

AND THE PIC ADDED EXTRA CHARM TO YOUR UPDATE DEAR

MAAN WAS REALLY MESMERISED BY GEET'S BEAUTY

AND U MADE HER HAIR STRAIGHT AS WELL

THIS WHOLE SCENE WAS SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN DEAR

WAY ABOVE THAN MY EXPECTATION DEAR

LOVED MAAN'S POSSESSIVENESS

THE REST OF THE UPDATE WAS ABT BUSINESS

LOVED THAT ALSO

BUT LOOKING FORWARD TO MAANEET COMING CLOSER TO EACH OTHER IN THE NEXT UPDATE

THIS IS YOUR SHEER WRITING BRILLIANCE THAT EVEN AFTER KNOWING WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT WE READERS WAIT SO EAGERLY FOR YOUR UPDATE DEAR

👏👏👏

Thank you!😊 i love Geet in saree! i wanted to include another pic in the same saree but I could not find it and I did not want to keep you all waiting. So I chose the second best. though I am not a big on putting pics(it's cumbersome), but this one had to be there. 😊 Haha, u noticed the straight hair too! you read too intricately 😊 that's good. waise now drashti has kind of switched to straight hair as well! i liked her 'muskan' hair and perfect straight hair equally 😆 I know the business talksvmight have become a tad boring, but I wanted to detail it as well. Number 1 bcz Maan has been potrayed as a mean, ruthless business man, but frankly all thru the chapters we have seen hardly any traits of mean nature or his sinister attributes. So i wanted to show that. Secondly as we all know good natured raichands move smthing in him, coupled with geet. So they needed this much space! dont worry, the next part deals with the remaining night with only Maaneet 😳

EVEN I LOVE GEET SO MUCH IN SAREE AND HER PERFECT STRAIGHT HAIR

very nice part
continue soon wil waiting

awesome part.. over posessive Maan.

Lovely update, beautifully written =)