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CherryBlush

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Posted: 11 years ago

#331

Its true sensitive people often see through others' intentions . It was heart wrenching to see Geet's condition & Maan's new interest will confirm her beliefs & I want that to happen . Here Maan barely is thinking of Geet or should I say already thinking of zoya in new light . I doubt whether there was any love at all now ! maybe Geet should make an identity on her own first , give herself a chance by staying away from Maan & not thinking about him . Once a successful woman comes in front who does not "Need" you things fall in place in right perspective ! I really wud dislike Geet begging for "Love" in front of Maan , not after this update ! she's single not desperate !

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Posted: 11 years ago

#332

nice update..but plsss dont bring maan and zoya close..our maaneet always look good with each other..so they shud unite..now what will geet do to get back him in her life..waiting for the next part..pls update it soon😊

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CoolHania

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Posted: 11 years ago

#333

naheee that shudnt happen

i mean maan and zoya huhhh 😭

geet realizing her mistakes glad

par ab to late ho gae

waiting for next

plz post next sooner plz

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neetugarg123

@neetugarg123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#334

Initially It seem like Geet was wrong with her stubbornness towards marriage but now it seems like Maan never loved Geet, he was only attracted towards her beauty. How the hell this Maan can think for some other woman within a week even though Geet came to him to apologize but it seems like whatever Maan said to Geet was not only his anger but he mean that.

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AISHAJS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#335

Just love this story and the way you portray the changing emotions. Thank you once agin.👏

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music

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Posted: 11 years ago

#336

|Reserved To Read in Holidays|

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music

@music_girl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#337

He should definitely not see Zoe girl in different way
He's just Geet's!
Awesome! Read it in one go even if i had planned on reserving it!!!
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CrabbyEntity

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Posted: 11 years ago

#338

glad to see geet got sumbody to confined in with all her fears and who could hv been better than a mere stranger for her... liked her whole convo with jaya and also the way geet opened up to her brought in notice the aspect how lonely she actually is...saying she z alone z one thing and living dat loneliness z altogether a diff reality...can see a hint of harshness in her yet there z a longing dat her heart demands all coz of her loneliness and on the other side it was interesting to see maan's side of story n him considering to move ahead but i guess its just a escape he's adhering to a convenienient commitment that would be more of a compromise if happens...liked the new turn the story took eager to know wht wd happen next!!!😳

thank u soo much for the update!!!😊

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rizwanaq

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Posted: 11 years ago

#339

please update soon...i really hope maan doesnt fall for zoya...and i hope geet can get through her past!!

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Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#340

Chapter 8 : 👏 Great tying of emotions in a string through different perspectives... or third person view.

Geet is able to unburden herself and take solace in a stranger as somewhere that becomes easy sometimes in distress as you know the view will be unbiased as well as you're not afraid that you will meet this person again ... complete strangers, and also that your vulnerability is safeguarded in the confines of an unknown bond with some sort of security of having it with a stranger. I liked Jaya's view of bringing into her focus that not all relations and person go through same phase and also that "not taking risk of next level" she has actually lost it all. She loves Maan but for now it seems her self preservation to safeguard from unseen hurt is more dear to her ... her fear is more dear to her than her love fro him. Sad.. and she herself needs to see this own self obstacle and tide over it.

Maan is trying to give a place to his feelings by compensating it ... he finds Zoya fitting all the inclusion criteria he has for a "ideal wife material" for him but is forgetting if he needed just that then his heart would have never settled for Geet. It's not what the mind finds fitting to your world that leads you to happiness but what and where your heart and soul finds solace that leads you to happiness. Hopefully he will realize this.. and not go and make a mistake in his own defenses.

Continue soon... this one is at a quite interesting phase now... for both Maan and Geet... 😳