MG SS Behind that Veil :PART 7 : pg 24 : 13th July

Hello everyone,

This is a continuation of a beautiful work by pari_jyothika "BEHIND THAT VEIL" - a Maaneet romance based on a cute malayalam movie "Thattathin Marayathu". Since our dearest "pari_jyothika" is busy as her life is taking a beautiful turn, I am going to continue this on her behalf. I hope you all support her and me.

Here is the link to the prologue and CS of the SS written by her :

Original thread

PART 1 : page 1

PART 2 : page 6

PART 3 : page 11

PART 4 : page 15

PART 5: page 18

PART 6 : page 21

PART 7 : page 24

Originally posted by: yappingduck

do cont soon

hi u r reva right? I didn't know may be bcoz u changed ur username 😳

Happy friendship day 😃

I hope I do justice to the creativity of pari_jyothika

PART 1

A few years back in Mumbai :

Juhu beach...

Two kids may be of age 10 were standing at the shore enjoying the beach.

Boy1: yaar, ye samandar ke us paar hota kya he?

Boy2: Jannat

Boy1 : huh? Tujhe kaise pata?

Boy2 : mere papa ne bataya. Keh rehe the ki ek baar wo waha tak swim karke aye.

Boy1: acha? Phek rhe honge.

Boy2: ho sakta he. Waise bhi hum sab to dilli me rehte he.

Boy1: to Mumbai to wo bhi aye honge aisey ghumne school se

Boy2 : ho sakta he.

Boy1 : acha tune wo wala gaana dekha

Boy2 : kaun sa?

Boy1 : arey akshay kumar aur ravina tandon wali

Boy2 (giggling) : tip tip barsa? Nhi yaar, ghar me sab log the. Tune dekhi?

Boy1 : hmmm, puri dekhi. Upar wale kamre jo TV he na usme. Agley hafte tu bhi mere ghar aja. Chitrahaar me dekhenge.

The kids hi-fived.

Boy2 : arey golgappe. Tu khayega?

Boy1 : nhi tu ja

B1 again started enjoying the beauty of the sea. As the waves hit the shore with all its glory, he saw a little girl in a veil. Her eyes , her smile was so angelic and divine that the boy couldn't take his eyes off her. Meanwhile B2 came back.

B2 : kya hua yaar?

B1 : arey us ladki ko dekha. Agar me shadi karunga to sirf us se

B2 : oye, shadi? Lekin abhi to wo bachi he. Lekin agar wo badi hokey itni khubsurat nhi rhi to?

B1 : ye badi hogi to pari banegi

B2 : maan liya to bhi usey dekh ke lagta he ki wo musalman he. Tu to Hindu he

B1 : to kya hua? Pyar ka koi mazhab nhi

B2 : tujhe kaise pata?

B1 : ek movie me suna tha. Rishi Kapur ne kaha

B2 :acha? Phir to sahi hoga. To tu khuda se maang le ki wo tujhe mile.

B1 : abhi se?

B2 : ha. abhi maang le . kehte he bhagwaan bacho ki baat jaldi maan jatey he. bada ho gaya to koi guarantee nhi he.

Boy1 closed his eyes and prayed, "Is huri ko meri biwi banana khuda"

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Back to the police station

Dev : The Maan Singh Khurana , in love? Phir to ye badi dilchasv love-story hogi. Maan aj raat hum sab tumhari mohabbat ki kahani sunenge. Waise bhi minister sahab kal subah hi ayenge. Tab tak hum duty me hi he. Aur jab mera dost yeha he, to mujhe to uski kahani sun ni hi he

Maan kept quiet.

Dev : arey apne dost ko nhi bataoge. Batao Maan, kaise hua ye sab? Tum usey pehli baar kaha mile?

A smile crept on his lips as he thought of her.

Maan : Delhi me mera business all-time height me tha. As you know, I was all settled in life. The most eligible batchelor, business magnet.

He laughed.

Maan : pehle mujhe laga tha ki us incident ne meri life ko ruin kiya he, but now I know it was all destiny. You know my brother Vicky

Dev : ha apna Vicky

Maan : hmm. He had a girl friend, Natasha. Things were getting really serious day by day between them. Natasha was very demanding and Vicky would do anything for her. One day she asked him to give her 50 lakhs to start her career as a supermodel. Vicky would do anything to fulfill her wish. He gave the money and then she disappeared just like that. Had it been just money, I would have left her but my bro was suffering. Then again she came back. This time she wanted him to produce a movie with a budget of 30 crore. Vicky agreed. All he wanted was her. But I was doubtful. So I probed into the matter and found that she is a fraud. A high-profile escort set up by our rivals to bring us down. I was furious. She could get away with the money but she can't play with my brother's emotions. I couldn't control myself. The next time I saw her in an event I couldn't control myself and I beat her in front of everyone. The media and the moral police were after me. My family didn't want me getting arrested coz they believed that I didn't do anything wrong. So dadi decided that I would live here in Bhopal until everything gets settled.

Dev : and you landed here.

Maan : yes.

Dev : and?

Maan : he he, I'm coming to that. Bhopal me mera dost he Ijaz, remember?

Dev : wo rondhu?

Maan : hmm wahi. Uskey nikah me gaya tha me.

Flashback

Maan : Ijaz ye dekh..

Ijaz : kya?

Ijaz took Maan's phone and was shocked. It was a pic of him at the strip-club on his bachelor's party.

Maan : bohat masti kar rha tha na? Ab dikhau me ye bhabi ko?

Ijaz : nhiii yaar marwayega tu to

Maan: me to chala

Maan started running and Ijaz chased him. Maan got inside the house and continued teasing Ijaz. He got upstairs and was running when she came from the opposite side of the corridor.

She was wearing a white suit with a veil on her head looking like an angel. Maan forgot the world when he saw her. It felt like all the time his life was meant for this one moment. Life has found a new meaning.

Dev interrupted in between.

Dev : rukh rukh. Agey me batata hu. Tum dono agey aye and you both collided and fell in each other's arms right?

Maan : Nope! There is a slight difference

Dev : oh! What?

Maan (again contiues his story) : Wo ayi mere samne aur me bhi apney apko rokh nhi paya uskey samne. Sirf apney mann ko hi nhi apney ap ko bhi.

Maan couldn't control his speed. He lost his balance and collided with Geet. She fell from the stairs and Maan couldn't do anything.

Everyone came closer shouting, " Geet..Geet "

That name registered in his heart as he stood there motionless

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PRECAP : The apology 😳

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haha lovely one...never eveer imagined maan n geet doing thattathin maraythu characters 😊😊

really nice i really like it

hey ya madhu...am reva... guessed it right...
well glad that u stared this story...
a very very lovely start...mazaa aa gaa padhkar..
how is ur job going on

good to see the story back awesome start

superb start...do continue soon...the movie is really cute.

Awesome yaar... Ll be waiting...