MG SS Behind that Veil :PART 7 : pg 24 : 13th July

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gurti30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

lovely start dear

talks between boys were really cute😆

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-Lehar-

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

nice story

loved the part 1

waiting for next part

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

lovely start

loved it

from the two boys conversation

and till then end

maan describes his love story

it was amazing

do continue soon

will be waiting...

Edited by -MSKdeewani- - 12 years ago

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

wow the start was too good
so maanu saw her first at beach
n tbi maang liya khuda se for him wah
n kya baat khi abhi maang le . kehte he bhagwaan bacho ki baat jaldi maan jatey he. bada ho gaya to koi guarantee nhi he.😆😆😆
maanu vicky ko bchate khd bhopal mai
n there he met his angel
n wah me also thoght geet will fall in his arms
bt naaa
yha toh ulta ho gya😆😆
waiting 4 next lvd it

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nahtani88

@nahtani88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Lovely

Continue Soon

Thanks For The PM

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Pihu

@Parimishty

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

awesome start dear...n u did justice wid d ff..
N m sure dat boy who prayed 4 d girl in veil would be maan only..
So maan n dev r frnzzz...
Dev is playing positive role or negative..??
N wen u'll gv ud of The gift of love..??

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For me to know and you to guess :)

@-Awaari-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

i am overwhelmed...soo happyy

really awesome

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sanam1234u

@sanam1234u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

just read its previous prolouge and character sketch...

just owesome concept...

and yes u did justice dear...its awesome start.. .👏
i like convo of kids more😉 ..they r too much naughty...😛