MG~ SS~The Mist ... UPDATED Pt11/Pg130/21st Oct ... .. .. .. ..... . - Page 19

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The Mist

For banner credit goes to my dear Laksmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.






Part - 2

There in d same venue a very cute girl was playing with a kid in her lap ,, she was sitting far away from all guests under a canopy,, she was in a light peach lanhaga with enhancing her beauty more ,, very simple and light jewellery , honey brown almond shaped eyes rich with kohl , her curly hair tied up in a loose bun, some strands were playing with her cheeks and neck ,her dimpled smile giving her an angelic look. A young lady was sitting with her enjoying hot N spicy snacks and looking adorably at d two cuties Geet and her son Sunny in front of her,,she is Preeti ..Kamal's wife .

Preeti: Geet agar tu nahi hoti to mai to bore hi ho gai hoti yahan ,, accha kiya tu aa gai shadi attend karne.


Geet: Bhabhi, Dad aur bui ne jaan kha rakhi thi meri isliye aa gai,, warna mei aur yahan in logon ke function mei ?


Preeti: koi nahi ,, tere aane se kam sa kam Mamaji ko to khushi mili na. Wo tere liye tadapte hai Geet.


Geet: fir bhi apne se dur rakha aur khud inn logon ke sath rahe.


Preeti: wo apni jagah per mazboor aur dukhi hai Geet.


Geet: Chodo bhabhi ye sab baaten ,, kuch aur lau aapke liye khane ko,,bahot jyada chatpata kha rahi ho?


Preeti: chupe ker and she blushed.


Geet: ol ye mela cutie kya khayega , she nuzzled that cute baby in her lap who giggled feeling ticklish.


She was enjoying her time with them, lil away from d storm which was coming towards her.


At the gate ...


Mahinder, Kamal and Rajji welcome d Barat suppressing their inner turmoil with a fake smile. All went in side and baraties went to take their snacks and dinner ,, all wanted to move back home early coz of bad weather and scattered here and there seeking warmth near bonfires.


Khurana family was sitting under a canopy near sigries and cursing this chilled N misty weather.


Maan d groom was sitting in a different canopy with his few friends who were teasing him.


Kamal came near Yash and Dadima and insisted them to come with him for an imp talk. He brought them in a room of Farm house ,, Mahinder and Rajji was already there with hanging faces. They sat there puzzled and asked d matter of their tension. Mahinder stood up from his seat and sat on floor near Dadima and held her hands in his ,, he spoke in a cracky voice ,, I' m sorry maaji ,mujhe nahi pata ye baat sunker aap sab kaise react karenge aur kaise isse sehen karenge?


YSK: Mahinder kya baat hai? Tum esse ku bol rahe ho? Kya hua hai? Yash sensed something wrong.


Dadima: Kya baat hai Mahinder saaf-saaf kaho ,, hume badi tension ho rahi hai.


Kamal: Dadima, Sameera marriage ke liye ready hone Parlor gai thi lekin wo wahan se gayab hai ,, wo apni cousin ko wahan chodker pata nahi kahan chali gai ,,uska kuch pata nahi chal raha hai ,, na hi uska phone mil raha hai.


Yash and Dadima: what!!!! Ye kya keha rahe ho?wo kahan ja sakti hai esse time per?


Rajji: Brij aur uske friends ne sab pata kiya hei aas-pass ,, uska kuch pata nahi.


Yash: What d hell is this? Who was with her?


Rajji: her cousin ,


Rajji narrated all d scene with a shaking voice.


Dadima thought for a while and asked ,, wo sath mei kya-kya leker gai thi?


Rajji: pata nahi,, uski Maa ko pata hoga.


YSK: call her Maa.


Kamal: we sent her home to find out any phone number of her friends.


Dadima: Promila ko phon karo ,, aur humari baat karao.


Kamal: ji ,, he dialled some numbers and after few min promila picked d phone,, kamal gave that to Dadima.


Dadima: Promila hum Dadima bol rahe hai,, koi khabar uski?


Other side: no maaji, lekin Brij ka phone aaya tha ,, usne aur uske friends ne aas-pass pucha to ek road side shopkeeper ne bataya ki ek ladki ko unhone texi mei baithker jaatey dekha tha.


Dadima: iska matlab wo khud gai hai ,, bhaagi hai . Ghar mei jewellery aur paise check karo aur phone cut matt karna ,, samjhi ,, jaldi batao hume.


Promila: ji , dekhti hu. She went to search and got d shock,, some bundles of money and jewellery was absent from Promila's locker,, only empty boxes were there.


Promila: maaji ,half of money and jewellery gayab hai, and she started crying.


Dadima cut d phone and said in a stern voice,, wo khud bhaagi hai ,, paise aur jewellery leker ,, it was planned.


YSK: lekin Ku? Shadi nahi karni thi to mana ker deti ,, aur wo to Maan se pyaar karti thi fir usse iss tarah shadi ke mandap mei chodker bhaagi ku? Do families ki izzat ka tamasha ku banaya ? Aur Maan ,,, uska kya? Maan usse pyaar karta tha,, dono hi shadi karna chahate thy ,, fir ye sab ku? Mujhe to kuch samajh nahi aa raha ,, yash caught his in head in his hands and said, Maa ab kya hoga? Mazak ban jayega Khurana Khandan ka ,, business circle mei bhi aur society mei bhi. Khurana Khandan ki hone wali bahu Mandap se bhaag gai ,, ye sach ek curse ban jayega khandan ke liye.


Mahinder: Mujhe maaf ker do Yash ,, aaj meri Family ki wajah se tumhari izzat daav per lag gai.I 'm sorry.


Dadima: mahi, sorry kahane se izzat nahi bachegi ,, All were waiting for bride outside ,, kya karen ab kuch samajh nahi aa raha?


All were sitting there helpless and defeated , ,they r not getting any ray to save their respect.


YSK: Mahinder, Guddu kahan hai?


All: Guddu???


YSK: Kamal Guddu ko bulao .. Jaldi se.


Kamal made a call and got d reply after few rings ,, Hello.


Kamal: Guddu, jaldi se FH ke guests room mei aa ,, Jaldi bacche.


Precap --- entry of Guddu ..





Sorry for mistakes.
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Part - 3

Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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yahi par hai
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meri energy esse bhaga bhaga ker drain matt
karao..
ek jagah per ruko...🥱
mei mona ki post per dekh ker aai hu..
ma'am to abhi bhi red hei,,
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Originally posted by: singh24



meri energy esse bhaga bhaga ker drain matt
karao..
ek jagah per ruko...🥱
mei mona ki post per dekh ker aai hu..
ma'am to abhi bhi red hei,,



koi na 5min keliye kuch bahane karke jaakar aao energy miljayegi😉😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
arreey yaaar adde badh gaye aur probs bhi... kuch socho solution... ye bahut mushkil hain
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

arreey yaaar adde badh gaye aur probs bhi... kuch socho solution... ye bahut mushkil hain



asusual first mona ka uske baad babie ka punishment and last mist
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ab tumdono chup kyun ho
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ab main yahaa se nahi jaaoongi... jisko baat karna hain yahhaan aakar karooo

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