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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

mona tum aaj laal kyu ho gayi???


mai toh kitni baar aayi yaha .. koi tha hi nahi toh chali gayi
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites


mai toh kitni baar aayi yaha .. koi tha hi nahi toh chali gayi



net sloe that tho reply karne main time lag gaya
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Posted: 12 years ago




The Downpour... Part 73


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She read the note,

"Seems you forgot me Geet but not to worry, I'm back to make you remember the fear again!!!''

"Who was there Geet?'' Rano asked from inside.

"No one Mama, there was no one!!'' she hid note and rushed to her room and locked it. Suddenly the forbidden fear started making her feel sweating. she knew the stalker was Maan himself but still the messages mystery was unfolded yet and that made her scared for a time being but she made her calm down thinking now Maan was with her. She wiped sweats from face and neck and sat on bed calmly. She thought for talking Maan and dialed him.

"Hello' missing me!'' Maan started with his tease and that made her feel relief within a second. She felt secure that now she would not have needed to take any tension as there was Maan in her life, to make feel her protected.

"Hm.. bahut jyada''

Maan smiled. He very wanted to see her shying face and imagined it.

"Maan I want to tell you something'' She had been calm tillt hen. Also she didn't want to take any step in hurry knowing how possessive Maan is around her. She did not want him to panioc for her and come running in no time leaving Dadima and office.

"Hmm Tell Geet''

"Maan actually..''

She was to tell further when Rano appeared, calling her for dinner.

"Geet your Papaji is waiting for you''

"Ji Mama coming'' she turned to Rano. Rano understood she was talking with Maan so she left giving her genuine smile.

"Maan I '''

"It's okay Geet you go, anyway we have to spend night talking'' he whispered naughtily that made Geet feel Goosebumps. She nodded and they ended their call. Anyway Geet wanted to tell him patiently, she left for dinner for now.

##

"Dadimaaa!!!!!!''

Suddenly whole mansion started shaking with a shout and SD and Maan came running out from their respective rooms to see who it was and rooted on spot when saw grumpy Annie was standing on entrance between her pool of luggage. Then Dadi remembered that she had not informed Annie about Maan marriage yet and she gulped down saliva in fear.

"Aree Annie beta aap??''

"Don't touch me Dadi I'm not going to talk you and Maan bhi you too'' She came in and directly walked in her room and locked the door. SD looked Maan who was equally in trouble. Both smiled and rushed to pacify their little princess.

"Annie Beta,, open door beta'' SD knocked door followed by Maan but she was hell angry.

"Maan bhai .. Dadima you both please leave. I'm no one here that's why no one told me about Maan bhai marriage. Now I'm not going to talk to anyone here!!'' Annie shouted from inside.

Both very tried to manaofy her but she was being adamant and at same time Geet called Maan. She heard noises behind and asked and Maan told about Annie. Geet smiled, she remembered her. Annie was the person who had cleared dust around past about Maan.

"Don't worry Maan, let me talk her''

Maan found this way perfect. He knocked door and said dearly,

"Annie, wont you want to talk your Bhabhi''

Annie came running and opened door, she snatched phone from Maan hand and again runs back locking door on their faces. Dadi was happy that now they would not have to do tough for pacify her. She left to order servants to cook Anni favorites.

##

Maan was roaming outside Annie room from 45 mins. He desperately wanted to talk Geet and here Annie was not giving him phone back. He knocked door in between but no reply came out.

"Ye Geet bhi na,, when I want to talk her she always have excuses of her mom and Dad and here, 50 min have passed and not even for a second she took break!!'' He was self talking with gritted teeth.

"Bhai you don't need to curse me okay.. I'm not going to making your Geet run away with me!'' Annie giggle along with Geet who was still on line, hearing their talk. Maan glared Annie. He could not show his big eyes to Geet so just cut the call without talking her and left in his study with boiling mood.

"Uff ye Bhai bhi na.. gussa to inke naak pe rahta hai.. poor Geet..'' she chuckled. Her mood had been fresh after talking Geet . When she came to know it was same girl who she had met in office, she started liking her from very first talk. She walked to meet Dadi.

##

Maan was aimlessly turning file pages keeping eyes on phone screen. Sometime he took phone to redial her then kept back in anger. When impatience increased he walked out in attached garden where once he had lived the best moment with Geet. His mood refreshed thinking the past time. He brought phone near and decided to call her and pressed green button. It connected to Geet phone and made sound but no one picked it up. His temper returned back. He started fidget in anger and worry as well when suddenly his eyes saw a walking shadow on outhouse's window.

He tried to see nearly. He found it was Asha. She was talking on phone while walking. But how it could be possible when she had fracture on legs!! He wonders.

Before he could go there, he got Geet call. He took it still thinking about Asha and Geet mistook his silence as her anger.

"Hello Maan''

"Haan Geet I'm hearing, Bolo'', He was hastening toward outhouse without giving any heed to Geet.

"Maan if you don't want to talk me, I'm keeping it down!!'' she said in hurt. Once he cut her call and now not even talking properly. She said irritated. Maan stopped right there,

"I'm sorry Jaan, wo I was thinking something else'' he said so lovingly that her anger vanished.

"And what you were thinking?? About me?'' she giggled. Maan smiled hearing her sweet laugh. Anyway Asha room light would have been turned off till then so he decided to look into this matter later.

"Maan I wanted to tell you something'' Geet became serious. It was very urgent to tell him about the note. She told him everything in brief.

Maan shocked to hear it and more he shouted her to tell him now!!! "Why the hell you didn't inform me before Geet.. What were you waiting for!!!''

Geet knew this will happen, she silently heard his temper filled concern, in fact she loved his scold.

"Geet I'm coming there now!!''

"What!!! Maan are you gone mad?? You are not coming here and that's final, samjhe aap and what will you tell Dadima and Annie and here, Mama Papaji, what would they think Maan. They don't know anything about it!!!''

"But how you will manage, I know you are scared''

"That I was Maan, but not now. Because I know I have you''

Maan stopped arguing further. He knew she will not agree for letting him come there. He excused saying have to leave for office early morning and cut the call. He wanted to think over this matter from the very beginning.

"This can't ignore this matter now' he looked toward outhouse. He could sense, something was going against Geet but what, he had to find it out.



Precap : Maan inquires Asha about Geet..


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


me first...Dancing graphics

ashaa😡... am just waiting for maan to confirm all this... phir wo asha ko chodega nahi...

but the best thing geet did was she didnt keep any secret with maan... and shared the truth about the note... asha wouldnt have thought that geet will do that... she would have never dreamt that she would have to face maan...😆

maan jaldi socho aur kuch karo...
Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



net sloe that tho reply karne main time lag gaya


tujhe kya bolu..mera khud ka net slow hai

bas type kar sakti hu .. pic opn hi nahi hota

wase aaj sab kaha hai???
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tintin graphics

koi hai yahaan?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites


tujhe kya bolu..mera khud ka net slow hai

bas type kar sakti hu .. pic opn hi nahi hota

wase aaj sab kaha hai???



koi nahi aaya aaj

bas lily thi... hi bolke chali gayi shaayad
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Posted: 12 years ago

donno sab kaha gaye ..

koi aata hi nahi thik se
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Posted: 12 years ago
sooo happy that geet said about the note matter to maan...glad that there wont be any mus...lovvvd thepart...beware!!! asha, ...😃

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