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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi mona sona babie laks priya,hw r u ..??missing u ...busy,,,hope 2 b wid u soon..


hiii lilyyy..

missing u too yaar come soon😭


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

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hai mona

edited my comment just below ur update...

meet u tonite...

cya



hiii lakshu


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Posted: 12 years ago



hiii lakshu lily babbie priya sona
Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
loved it
ab kya hoga
precap is interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
lakshu ye le Waiting for you complete in one page

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites




hiii lakshu lily babbie priya sona



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi mona sona babie laks priya,hw r u ..??missing u ...busy,,,hope 2 b wid u soon..




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The Downpour... Part 72


After their leave Geet heart was not in peace. It was feeling something essential was missing from her life. Somehow she spends the day time but when evening came and she badly started missing Maan. Once in morning she had talked him and he said, he will be busy in meeting for the entire day. Now she badly wanted to talk him and when could not, she thought to call Asha. Anyway she had not informed her about her leaving Delhi and afterward many things happened. Geet wanted to share her feeling to someone who could understand and she remembered her.

Asha tempered to see Geet call but managing her frustration she picked it up. They started with casual talks and later Geet told about her marriage was fixed and this was the extreme of Asha shock. She could not believe, she did not trust that Geet was telling truth.

"What are you saying Geet how it can be possible!!!'' She started shaking in anger. Geet became bedeviled with her strange question.

"What you mean Asha, why it can't be possible?''

Asha maintained her calm instantly, "No Geet I mean how suddenly it happened?? You never let me know anything and suddenly informing about your marriage with Maan sir, you tell me how anyone could have believed it so easily!! I mean I'm totally shocked Geet!!''

Geet smiled, she knew Asha was right. It happened so suddenly itself that even she could not get any evidence earlier.

"Ya I know Asha but believe me it all happened so quickly that even I could not know''

"But when this news came in media, why Maan sir or you didn't respond anything Geet?''

"Actually Maan wanted to keep this news secret till marriage. He didn't want me to face any media hassle''

Asha knew that whatever Geet was saying it was true otherwise she could not have made story herself. Her whole body was burning in fury. She cut call saying wanted to take rest and now she had to think something. She had not much time but at least she had time to destroy Maaneet relation. Marriage date was not fixed yet and this was the time she could utilize for herself. No way would she leave Maan this easily and after this news her confidence increased instead of being disheartened.

"If Geet can win over Maan why I can't? You made my way easy Geet. You gave me idea how to make him mine. But I feel sorry for you girl that you would have to face now more what you would have had before!! ''

Her mind travelled in past,

''Earlier also I had tried to destroy you but by luck you escaped. I still remember, you and I had started our career together. I was more educated and deserving than you but still you started getting promotions, not me and I know why? You had everything which a man could ever have dreamt for, you were more beautiful than me and thus you always get success to get attention of everyone, even of boss but one thing you did right Geet. You started trusting on me and this made my way easy to make you down''

She smirked, started thinking how smartly she had planned everything..

"Once you told me about Maan and that he used to follow you and I found this chance perfect. I started sending messages with his name, made you extreme scared and your confidence drastically started losing down. You started fearing going anywhere alone. You used to think that Maan would kidnap you or would harm you and your family. You stopped talking to strangers and even refused going out for office tours and that benefited me enough to get attention of boss. But you're lucky enough Geet that I got better opportunity here, in KC and released you from the fear''

Her facial expression changed into hate'

"I was living my life in freedom. I was doing what wanted to do since long. I loved to enjoy night life here and roaming with my boyfriends but don't know how my parents came to know about it and they forced me to come back. No way could I have left this life, this place so easily and so I planned to call you here. I make my family believe that I will change myself, will become like you..'' Ek Sidhi Saadi sanskaari Larki''.. my foot!!

"I forced you to work in KC so my family could trust on me that I'm in safe company and that happened Geet!! Even now they are happy that you're taking care of me so they can live in peace. how foolish they are!!!'' she laughed but instantly her laugh vanished,

"But now enough!!! I will not let you win once again!!! I know how you made Maan your but I also have learned enough from you Geet . I will use your skill for my benefit. No way this time I will let you make Maan your, he is mine and always will be!! I will destroy you and your reputation everywhere that even you could not be able to recognize you herself. Maan will hate you Geet.. HATE YOU!!!!!''

She wanted to scream in anger, wanted to strangle Geet with own hand, see her death.

Wasting no time she talked to doctor. She pleaded before him to let her go home. She cried, she begged that it was her sister marriage and she wanted to attend her function. Doctor agreed on the condition that she would take care of her and she promised she would do. Doctor talked to Adi. He came and talked Asha and she again begged him saying this place suffocates her. Finally Adi agreed and she got her discharge and finally, she came to KM.

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In night, Maan came back from office and now he was relaxed. It was like he had decided something on purpose and finally got success. He looked his phone screen. He knew Geet must be waiting for his call, he felt sorry for her that could not even talk her properly for entire day. After dinner he called her in complete dark silence.

In just one ring she picked phone up like she had been waiting for it only and Maan heard her desperate voice.

"How are you Geet?''

"Thik hu. You must be feeling very tired na Maan''

"Not that much Geet, your voice healed me''

She smiled shyly. They talked for some time and then Geet slept but Maan requested her not to cut phone until he cuts it. She had been used to of his crazy requests so agreed. Whole night Maan kept hearing her warm breathing and finally he also slept without any fidget.

##

Whole night Asha did not sleep a blink. She had been thinking to work upon her plan. When she entered in mansion her eyes widen in surprise to see its richness and her mind madly started dreaming to live here for always. She had been settled down in outhouse. Everywhere she could feel the presence of Geet here. The very thought that Geet would have spent her days here sieved her heart severely. Her heart did not want to feel this feel anymore. She had very less time and had to do much more. For whole night she kept thinking about her next move and finally decided to team up her plan.

##

Next day went smoothly. Maan was not that busy and so he could spend hours talking with Geet. Maan cribbed to meet her but she stopped him saying it wouldn't look good, anyway they would meet soon for their marriage. How easily their time passed both did not know and it turned into evening. Geet was roaming on terrace while talking him. Finally their call ended and she started thinking about their last togetherness here, on same place. She was thinking about previous night when someone rang the doorbell. She rushed to see.

There was no one outside. Irritated she closed door when she got a paper lying of floor. She picked it up and read curiously and her heartbeat became faster in fear..



Precap : Maan have doubt on Asha ...


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago




Me 1st...🥳


hmmm so the Chudail is planning her game...
It was she behind all those faked call K*****.

Ye to apne parents ki bhi sagi nahi... to Geet ki kya
hogi...
WOW!!! maan ko doubt ho gaya iss Chudail per...

Waiting...
Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
grr ye kamini asha nirasha wt she think at her self
i knew it somewhere she ehind all that
bt dont know y used maanu name
bt now got it
god want to kill her
hh keep draming girl
wet she think maanu is a baby ki lollypop dikha ke he will b urs
im sure bachpan mai b asha jaise lolypop ko dekha b nhi hogs😆😆
kk i know my examples r weird🤣
bt now wt she planning jo b hai
iski toh mai hh
my maaneet missing each other
arey soon fix their milan date mean marriage date
i want to see the together
bt bt bt wt she read at the end
waitign

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