The Locket (9), MG FF, thread 10 link on pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 21

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Amazing update, Avi! The way you portrayed Maan's perceptiveness, Geet and Kabir's pain, and a new love story.. They were all awesome. How long will I-star be strong in the face of the storm, that is Dev? I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update, Avi!

atlast chandan thakur came to know of his mistakes...blindly believing others and leaving the ones whom you brought forcefully into your life...and made hell of their life...hope yeah kuch thik karpaye...doesnot look like that to me...shayad damad help karjaye...! so, i-star went to see ...her chandan papa...? her keeping quite may not help the situation...she has to speak up...lets see whats makes her to disclose her fears...!! on the contrary...our bambi soo much trusts her delhiwale...she is so innocent ...untouched by any kind of ugliness...! can I request you not make this innocence go...not to make her one of that broken family...she is perfect as darji's ladli...maan's giit...naintara's bambi...nothing more...! kya kare brij ki parchai se bhi dar lagtha hai ! and loved maan's wordings...waiting for next part...and sorry I am late ...but what is this ...saying ...may not wirte more ffs...love your wirting...will always be looking forward for your writings...

just awesome part avi...

atlast the truth behind his so called trusted relations are revealed in front of chandan... i loved how u shown chandans emotional turmoil here... the way truths were disclosed one by one shattering him more and more ... showing him how wrong he was in the past... and the outcome of his so called right decision to leave poonam and tara with brij...

dev is a saviour in disguise here for both father and daughter!!!

He had never felt more helpless in his life than sitting with her on that hilltop with all of Delhi sprawled at his feet.👏👏 i loved this part...

sometimes it so happens that the person is so near to u but still they r not able to understand our hidden sorrow... but here comes out maan... kithni bhi door ho lekin geet ka dard maan se chupa nahi... i so much love him... but thoda dumbo tho hai... he is thinking of geet having feelings for kabir??? hayoo rabba...

ur words on true love... a bow to u lady... just gr8
as he is going far away from geet to london, his inner feelings have come out in this way... but geet to bambi hi rahegi... use kya samajh aaya hoga in THAT pretext...

kabir and megha... thanx dear... haddi nahi banne diya unko ...

one thing i loved the most in this part was both the khurana brothers jee jaan se koshish karing for solving the problems of their lady love... the quality which every gal foresees on her partner... jeeyo!!!

will be waiting for the next... is baar precap kyu nahi diya?

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

atlast chandan thakur came to know of his mistakes...blindly believing others and leaving the ones whom you brought forcefully into your life...and made hell of their life...hope yeah kuch thik karpaye...doesnot look like that to me...shayad damad help karjaye...! so, i-star went to see ...her chandan papa...? her keeping quite may not help the situation...she has to speak up...lets see whats makes her to disclose her fears...!! on the contrary...our bambi soo much trusts her delhiwale...she is so innocent ...untouched by any kind of ugliness...! can I request you not make this innocence go...not to make her one of that broken family...she is perfect as darji's ladli...maan's giit...naintara's bambi...nothing more...! kya kare brij ki parchai se bhi dar lagtha hai ! and loved maan's wordings...waiting for next part...and sorry I am late ...but what is this ...saying ...may not wirte more ffs...love your wirting...will always be looking forward for your writings...

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

just awesome part avi...
Thanks Lakshmi!
atlast the truth behind his so called trusted relations are revealed in front of chandan... i loved how u shown chandans emotional turmoil here... the way truths were disclosed one by one shattering him more and more ... showing him how wrong he was in the past... and the outcome of his so called right decision to leave poonam and tara with brij...
Let's hope he makes wiser decisions from now on.
dev is a saviour in disguise here for both father and daughter!!!

He had never felt more helpless in his life than sitting with her on that hilltop with all of Delhi sprawled at his feet.👏👏 i loved this part...

sometimes it so happens that the person is so near to u but still they r not able to understand our hidden sorrow...

Dev has never met anyone who would not melt for him. NT is giving him quite a complex..😆

but here comes out maan... kithni bhi door ho lekin geet ka dard maan se chupa nahi... i so much love him... but thoda dumbo tho hai... he is thinking of geet having feelings for kabir??? hayoo rabba...

ur words on true love... a bow to u lady... just gr8
as he is going far away from geet to london, his inner feelings have come out in this way... but geet to bambi hi rahegi... use kya samajh aaya hoga in THAT pretext...
Maan is subconsciously giving her the message. But cute hai na banda; he senses everything about her. First love is like that before ego comes in!
kabir and megha... thanx dear... haddi nahi banne diya unko ...

one thing i loved the most in this part was both the khurana brothers jee jaan se koshish karing for solving the problems of their lady love... the quality which every gal foresees on her partner... jeeyo!!!
True
will be waiting for the next... is baar precap kyu nahi diya?

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

well written..😊

Originally posted by: Jeevana.

Dev & tara together... n tara being still stubborn...

Chandan got to know his mistake...

hope dev gets to know the full story...

ek aur love story ...iska ek acha kaam huva...

Maaneet ek saath hogaye...

Maan's definition of love ❤️

TEASER

"Bhai we all want to see Dabangg, first day, first show par dekho na Adibhai could not get the tickets. It is sold out everywhere. Even though it's my birthday on Friday, he can't do this much", Megha pouted, giving me innocent puppy dog looks.

"Maan, yaar, it's Salman Khan, upar se it's Eid. I checked every single theatre near and far from college. Sab sold out hai", Adi defended himself.

"Salman Khan!", the three girls shreiked in unison. Then started the drooling session led mostly by Pinky but I could see that Geet was also quite enthusiastic about it.

Another Khan! Was Shahrukh geek Khan not enough!!! My good mood started fizzling out fast.

"and, that song!! Oh my God! I can't wait to watch it... Tere mast mast do nain, mere dil ka le gaye chain...", now started the singing, this time led by Megha.

"Rahat Fateh Ali Khan is so awesome!!!", they screamed again.

This was getting too much. All this drooling over these Khans! I could not hold my irritation in anymore.

"Adi, yeh wo hi Khan hai na. This Salman. Uss ki pehli film main he could not get a heroine so there was a kabootar (pigeon) in the main role...". Adi and I high fived each other laughing at the girls who were glaring at us now.

A/N: Time for Eid is obviously not in the last few weeks of college but please pardon the creative liberty. I am aware that Dabangg release was at a different time but I want to use this song so I tweaked it a bit..😃 SORRY GUYS, Update will be delayed this week. Thanks for your patience..

lovely teaser

wow teaser is here...that means an update is on its way😊😊