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Posted: 12 years ago
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The Punishment

Gurmeet Choudhary as Maan Singh Khurana

- Meredith Sapp

Prologue...

She was there to make her identity , and to fulfil her Mom's dream .

He was there to enjoy his dreams. His identity is his father.

They have attitude bigger than them .

They collide , they shattered.

She gathered herself and come again with an aim . He gathered himself .. but lost and restless ..

She is eager to punish . He is eager to get himself punished..

They are poll apart ...

But there is One thing which is binding them together...

The Punishment

What will happen if they'll collide again...?


Hope u all like it. plzz do hit like button and leave ur comments.

Part '1-C

Pandey ji came inside and informed them that their parents

are with ACP and they are calling them . Maan stopped the

girls there and went out with Dev . Both the girls made a face and sit there.


Pandeyji : Ma'am ye dono aa gaye .

Maan and Dev entered with a hanging heads . Rano and

Ranjeet who were busy in talking to ACP turned their faces

and looked at them with hurt . Both are in a very bad

condition, messy hair , wrinkled clothes , red eyes , gusts

of nasty smell (mixture of alcohol and cigarette ) coming

from them .

ACP : Mr. & Mrs. Khurana dekh lijiye inki halat . Arey wo

dono ladkiyon ko bhi lao , unhe ku bahar chod diya...?? ab

tak unhe chipkaye ghoom rahe the to ab ye doori ku..??

Rano and Ranjeet were shocked ...girls .. They were with the girls at this time ...what the hell is this!!

Sam and NT entered in the ACP's office . They saw Rano

and Ranjeet , wished them with a smile .Both the elders

observed them , their dresses and body language showing

their mentality .

They didn't have little silt of shame on their faces . Rano

turned her face with disgust .


ACP : Mr Khurana legal formalities ho chuki hai ... aap inhe

le jaiye . Mr khurana I want to talk to u privately , Plzz .. If

u don't mind...??

Mr Khurana indicated Rano to take them with her . All went

out quietly .

Mr Khurana : Yes Ma'am ,

ACP : Mr Khurana plz take this matter seriously , It could be

fatal for a poor man. Aapke liye ye ek choti si mistake ho

sakti hai ..lekin wo aadmi jo roz kamata hai . roz khata hai

usske liye ye bahut badi hai, usse kuch ho jata to ... uski

mahine bhar ki kamai aapke beton ka ek din ka

pocketmoney hai . Kya life de rahe hai aap inhe ..?? U r

from a very cultured family , NGO chalate hai aapke. Doosro

ki help kertey hai aap Aur ye aapki future generation ki

halat hai . I m sorry to say ki aapke ye Betey apne sath '

sath kai life barbaad ker denge. Aage aap khud samajhdar

hai. You can take them . Good night.

Mr Khurana came out with a heavy heart . He said to his

driver to take Maan's car and dropped the girls at their

places . He took the driving seat and start his car . Rano

signalled Maan and Dev to sit in the car.

The whole drive was very quiet . They reached KM , Ranjeet

parked the car , Dadima was waiting for them in the living

hall , she looked at Ranjeet's face , he was looking tired

and hurt , pain was visible in his eyes . She said nothing ,

just nodded her head in disappointment . Ranjeet left fro

m there towards the bedroom . Rano entered in the hall

followed by Dev and Maan. Daadima gave a glance and left

the hall.

Rano : Maan , Dev .. jaker so jaiye .. kal baat karenge...it's

too late now and she moved to her bedroom with a fear in

her heart.

Maan and Dev took their respective ways. Maan entered in

his bedroom with heavy feet, he sat on bed , sleep was far-

far away from his eyes. He was staring at a pic . in which he

was hugging his father, his Dad got Best Businessman

Award that day.


Maan's monologue ...

Today i am forced to think about me. What i am? What i

m doing? I did so many mistakes in my life but Dad

overlooked that. I too never bothered about them and i was

enjoying my life. But 2yrs back my life took a turn. Though i

was the same Maan from outside but from inside

everything was changed. My Dad didn't talk to me properly.

Mom and Daadima were unaware of truth. Dev was my

crime partner and he is like me, careless. After that incident

Dad became strict towards us. He and college authority

banned us for 2 weeks. We were complied to stay at home,

not allowed to talk with friends. I accepted that bcoz i was

as fault. I took all the responsibility of that shameful act on

me. That incident haunted me till now. I started my college

again but things were not same as before. I tried to keep me

away from all college activities. My friends, Dev, NT and

Sam kept me busy with them, and after some months I was

the same Maan, but a face still haunting me. Even though i

don't remember the features but those red swollen eyes

still disturbing my sleep and make me restless.

Now once again i was at fault. I hurt my parent. I was feeling

low and disgust. Again I threw my father in this shameful

situ.


Today when I saw that ACP I felt same restlessness, Why? I

was not able to look into those eyes. A fear is engulfing

me. I am unable to think straight, don't know what will i face

in the morning. I was at fault again and I have to bear the

worst for me.



Part -- 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3685802/mg-ss-the-punishment-new-thread-link-on-pg145-17aug?pn=17



Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
yeh tera 1st FF hai😲
BABBIEEE🤗🤗🤗
awesome awesome awesome update yar👏👏👏👏
very very very well written👍🏼
Edited by sona-rai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
wt a plesant sprise wen I log in 2dy...my frend turns a writer 4rm a reader 👏 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏Congratulations
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

wt a plesant sprise wen I log in 2dy...my frend turns a writer 4rm a reader 👏 👏Congratulations


Lily...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Fantastic part

So maan is guilty for watever he did.
He is regretting on his mistake and wants to becme a responsible son ..

Loving the story.
Cont sn dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WHAT DID MAAN DO TWO YEARS AGO THAT HE STILL FEELS GUILTY
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting update! Wt did Maan do 2 years ago? Well written! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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read the update... will comment after our gupshup time...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

read the update... will comment after our gupshup time...


I am waiting...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24


I am waiting...😊



i just came

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