KHUMAARI2-The Nocturnal Beast(MG)#2,NEXT THREAD ADDED

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

awsem update love it maan undrstanding geet and geet care

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Little_Mermaid.

@Little_Mermaid.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

awesome update

finally geet reached in maan's den

can't wait for next update

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gill123

@gill123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

Wow lovely update geet try to escape now maaneet in maan home waiting 4 next

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#234

wow wat a update.. very very fantasic.. te way u described te journey, was lovely beautiful, tats te word came into my heart wen i read tis update.. te way te trees , forest , te hotels , i was too travelling with my maaneet imagining te place with ur words.. thanku for giving such lovely feel.. te way my beast ki mansion , and his richness and te way my beast ki bedroom was so lovey shows his classy.. i love te place very much.. now cuming to my maaneet.. te way geet ki pov abt my beast was lovely.. te way my maaneet in hotel and geet ki jealous and my beast got her and his smirk was lovely cute..te way my beast controlling himself seeing his geet and te way he biting her to shows she belongs to him was lovely emotional.. possesseive beast.. te way my beast taking care of her and te way he providing everything wat ever she needs before she voice it.. te way geet thinking abt my beast but her inner self trying to escape but my beast catching her , te way his ware wolf avatar was lovely breath taking.. my maan in watever avatar u came u look so hot.. te way my beast holding his geet and taking her to his mansion and te way his maid welcoming them was lovely.. te way robo giving gift and geet is saying he is very cute and my beast yawning was lovely .. te way geet open her mouth seeing a tower and my beast closing it was lovely cute.. te way geet asking him to stay with her and te way my beast saying she is very safe and she trying to sleep was lovely ..i love te update so so so so much

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#235

finally they reached maan's hometown...poor geet tried to run away again but soon under maan's reach again...i think geet is not ready for the life ahead she is not ready to be with maan or say a werewolf...hope maan understand this...they are getting close now and geet is way understanding...

well written dear...loved it...

worth waiting...awesome part...

hope geet don't do anything stupid to upset maan now...he was already annoyed with her when she run away...but on the other side geet too is not wrong...after all which girl wanted a werewolf to be as a partner tht too after getting kidnapped by him...

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niasharma99

@niasharma99

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Posted: 11 years ago

#236

hey i was awesomeee👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
seriously i am amazed😉
thanku for updating😊😊
and
pls update next part soon 😳
and
once again it was awesome dear
i am desperately waiting pls dont take the amt of time you took to post dis part ...
just kidding 😆
love u for dis
keep it up
this if for u 👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#237

omggg first of all thanks sooo much for updating this longgg update
it was worth to wait for this update

now to update love the way u explain what is maan's capable of and what is his wolf side desires for geet
he really wants to make her his in each and every way

but will he wait for her approval or not😕😕😕 it is bothering
also he does care for her and same time he seemed so distant

wondering is he in love with her or not
then geet feel sooo much for him when he mark her
is this starting of her feelings for him or something else

thanks again for updating and pls pls update next part soon

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Jane

@Jane523

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#238

awesome dear...u kept us waiting so long for d update...but u made it up by giving a big one...love d pace in which story is evolving...
continue soon ...
is d only thing i wud say...

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#239

You updated after looong gap 😛 but the looong updates made it await worthy . Loved their journey like exclusive Geet & Maan moments & convo 😳

Geet's self talk kinda justified why she forgave him inspite of what he did ! his attack on her innocence was met with her attack on his life .

Even though Geet wants to escape she doesn't wanna hurt him , she did not tell the police . Maan marking her was ☺️ 😳 And Loved Rob's gift to Geet 😛 Super Duper Updates 👏 ⭐️ 👏

Please update soon I really an excited for next parts

Edited by RageOfAnAngel - 11 years ago