KHUMAARI2-The Nocturnal Beast(MG)#2,NEXT THREAD ADDED - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsommmiiieee finly finly finly Shree u updated...gosh girl i thought u 4got dis story...well chp was fun...with da ride 2 home...gotta c diffrnt shades of maan & geet...gosh geet tried 2 escape again...well cmz she has hr own craving n desire n feelings 4 him but i don't get y she doesn't try 2 undrstnd dem...i mean ok yeh samjh aata hai 1st she was relculnt coz of hr bn kidnap thing but abhi toh situation is diffrnt evn she sort excptd da fact da she is stuck with him n hr reactions r diffrnt 2wrdz him so y doesn't she try n undrstnd atleast 4 hrslf n hr own reactions...well she saw maan's wolf form dey reachd his den...well exciting things cuming up letz c wht has his hometown stored..nxt chp sooon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
wowww!!! itna bada update...thank you thank you ...
didn't read the update yet...but i am sure wonderful se kam nahi hoga...
i dont know why i am addicted to this ff...i have read many werewolf stories but this one is very very special for me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohhh my god... such a long update... awesome as usual... loved it loved it loved it ..thanks a ton darling... its completely worth the wait...
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Posted: 11 years ago
i was waiting for like ages to read ur update...

and today wowww that was amazing...

the growing love of maaneet is mind blowing...

luv it...


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Posted: 11 years ago
first of all can i just say so glad you are back
so happy that you are back dear
man its good to have these two back again
hmmm so geet is contemplating or more like contemplated what she did was bit silly
that there is no escaping this truth
what ever he may have done he would never hurt her not really
well seeing how he saved her even after she attacked him made her see things differently
what she knew deep down came to the surface it seems well that makes it easier right
good she realises that they are on same level
and that never let him get angry and jealous at the same time or well she knows what happened
she rather not have a repeat of same
so no longer trapped in an island aint that good for her
hmmm so into no mas land literally huh
maan good song choice mate
he really loves riling her up dont he
awww she doesnt know these people where was she living
oh thank god he came for her then
she really didnt have it any good did she man thats bad for sure
oh hello not really her fault if her family didnt let her do anything for herself
he really doesnt like to make things easier for her does he and dang she is stuck with him only
not any comforting that is that for either
hmmm maan lets not tell her this shall we probably will run a mile from ya
waise it seems to be getting stronger to be with her more and more
and to claim her as his hmm wont be long before that happens or will it have to wait till she settles with his kind and family
oh my my he is going over protective mode
dude chill will ya please god this is not helping either
man that was funny with the waitress and maneet
seems maan didnt give a damn while geet was boiling for sure
and that was seen by maan well duh he may be dense for some things but not that stupid in matters of the heart is he
awww bless isnt it cute when she was jealous
what was she justifying to herself man that sounded lame excuse even to her
wow she sure has an huge appetite
but then she really used up her energies didnt she fighting him off
he is so pushing his luck aint he by trying to make her more jealous
wow some things can never change with this man
but then we wouldnt want him any less arrogant and all
oh dear really in her sleep too mate
well she didnt see that coming
wow he is hit really strong by this whole soulmate idea and wants to make sure she will be his and soon it seems
oh my my so marked her again did we well he wants his family and clan to know she is his
hmmm this urge to protect her from all sure is new for him aint it
i know i think she is getting used to it and that next time she might just ask for it
they are becoming closer and more attuned to one another
which am sure is one scary thought for her but deep down she wants it too
but of course it sure is unsettling for her
his control is slipping and the fact she doesnt understand isnt helping either
wow so she didnt tell the officer but that didnt stop her from taking the gypsy this girl what to do but then anyone in her place would do the same right
hmm so he went after her in wolf form huh well easier to catch her
so finally she tries to escape but she doesnt wanna
and she meets his wolf form the one she saw in her dreams
hmmm payback is for later
but now she finally accepts the full truth well that was fun right
and she wont run anymore well thats relief for him
yup no humans except you thats scary for sure
wow what a place it is huge
they sure are loaded aint they
hmmm so meeting her family it seems
well yes peeps she as in his mate is a human what to do cant change it can we
damn this is gonna be hard on her
so family aint here yet huh interesting
i know dear he can be a right jack ass but caring too confusing aint he
well hope that dream catcher works man
hmm she sure has the man shocked didnt she
awww he was nervous well dont be she loved it
but he had to ruin the moment didnt he of course if he didnt well then it wouldnt be maan
she really cant stay put can she this one
uff this girl is just the one for him for sure
well its best that his family wasnt there lets not overwhelm the poor dear shall we
but happy news cotton will be back to give competition to maan
this i look forward to
that was huge update and sure made up for the lost time
cant believe what happened in this one
but now she knows him bit better for sure
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for big update
geet i m feeling bad for her as a girl n human being
n maan what can we say he is beast after all
when he will love her , he is only thinking abt mating.
hope his family will be good to her
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just recently found this ff.
Its a very interesting concept.
Great job, continue soon
I loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome...

finaly they arrive at maans mansion... .thankyou for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story
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Posted: 11 years ago
i think it was worth the waiting we all did. This Was ABSOLUTELY amazing update. i enjoyed every bit of the update and happy that it was long. i am waiting desperately for geet to fall in love with maan just like maan is waiting! cant wait for cotton and other family members. its getting interesting with each update.

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