MG ~ff~ KASAK PART 10 pg/89 || May 1st || - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sdlife19

Tat was just awesome

You have perfectly written wat Maan and Geet feels

The way geet is trying hard not to get weak she gets but she is strong and knows tat she will have to live with this pain of love..

The pain tat probably only Maan can get rid of

and Maan though his mind says she cant be her but his heart somewhere has realized tat she is her only.

The way Geet said tat sentence to her.. how deeply it affected him and Vicky he is being dying to see his sister his friend die each second and now she left

wat will happen with this sudden change in vicky's life...

will maan come to know about her.. will he know tat she is her




this one comment is a million dollar like for me didu🤢

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

nice one...loving the way story is moving



thanks😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

happy new year

waiting for mistry to reveal




same to you yaar😳
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Posted: 11 years ago


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PART 5:


Khud hi dil ka rog lagaaye


She got into the train as it arrived on the platform, she is leaving like a sinister!! Atleast for few days Maan will stay happy in the mansion without her presence around.



Khud hi baitha roye


She held her tears back, tu kyun ro rahi hai Geet?? Rona toh Maan ko hai!! You just killed him ... usse tumne zinda maar diya,


Naina re naina
Tujhse bura na koi

I hate those eyes of her, he smashed the glass ruthlessly as her eyes haunted him ... they had the same intensity of her's ... same love as her's ... damn he cant get over the pain of the ten year old girl whom he loved insanely


Naina re
Tu hi bura, tu hi bura


The wall that he has built long back was beginning to crack!! Her eyes ... The tears which spill from them only make him weak. Where was Geet?? Or where is she?? Is she the same girl whom he is getting affected??


Tujhse bura na koye
Khud hi dil ka rog lagaaye



She rested her head against the window, looking out ... it was raining, still raining ... just like her heart which was not stopping the cries!!


Khud hi baitha roye
Naina re
Tu hi bura
Tujhse bura na koye


Geet ... this is for you, he placed the chain in her small hand ... yeh kya hai Maan?? She asked confused with its appearance ... Its waist band Geet, tumhare liye laaya tha ... I want to see you wearing this,


Khud hi dil ka rog lagaaye
Khud hi baitha roye
Naina re


The chain ... she smiled at the word ... it was the waistband he has given her long back, before he left for London. Geet kissed it with longingness, Yeh mera intezaar bekaar hai Maan kyunki tum toh mujhe yeh pehnaoge nahi!! Kabhi nahi!!


Sab ki prem kahaaniyan


His cell phone was still having her childhood pics in it, for reasons god knows!! Everyday it was his duty to just have a glance of her!! Even after the pain that she had given him, his eyes wont stop searching for her image!!


Dil ki bechainiyan


And at a point Maan realized he cant love anyone other than Geet!! Though she was away he still wanted her ... Sometimes felt like accepting her with her sins, with her crime that she did.


Tu hi shuru karwaaye


He went to the outhouse ... wanting to stop this sick feeling that she was giving him ... To end the dilemma she has put him in!! But it was locked ... Maan sighed, but he had the spare keys to it. Within seconds he came with them and opened the door.


Khud hi dil ka rog lagaaye
Khud hi baitha roye
Naina re naina
Tujhse bura na koi


She got down the train searching for Meera, her eyes beamed in joy finding Lucky veerji ... Meera's brother. Geet hugged him giving a big smile to him.


Naina re
Tu hi bura
Tujhse bura na koye


Aap aaye lucky veerji? Meera kaha hai?? Geet was searching for her who was nowhere to be seen. This always happens with her, Meera hides to surprise her.


Khud hi dil ka rog lagaaye
Khud hi baitha roye
Naina re


Arey hone wali Dulhan ghar se bahar thodi hi niklegi Geet!! Dhoond mat usse, chal ghar chal ... tu bohut patli ho gayi, kya hua?? khana nahi kha rahi hai?? He carried her luggage making way towards the car.


Aansu banke chalka jaaye
Dil ka peymaana


There was no furniture in her room, except for bed ... the cupboard was attached to the wall, everything was placed in its place. He couldn't find anything that would prove that she is Geet.


Ishq mein hai itne sadme
Dil mein na jaana


Who are you?? kaun ho tum?? Tum mujhe itna pareshaan kyun kar rahi ho?? You cant be Geet, main yeh jaanke hi rahonga ki tum ho kaun


Ab ik pal ke bhi dooriyan
Mujhse sahi jaaye naa


They had come together to this place ... Geet's eyes looked onto the fields where they spent the childhood, like other kids.


Dard bhare tanhaiyaan
Mujhse sahi jaaye naa


Geet you are staying for ten days haina?? Shaadi hone ke baad bhi tumhe kuch aur din rehna padega, she herself wanted to stay there ... Stay away from Maan, so that he doesn't hurt himself.


Naina re
Tu hi bura
Tujhse bura na koye
Khud hi dil ka rog lagaaye
Khud hi baitha roye
Naina re


But then will it matter to him?? Will it matter if she is in the mansion or not?? He wont even bother ... who is she to be think about?? He doesn't even know she is Geet and if he comes to know probably the truth will remain the same ... she will remain the topic of least intrest!!


Toote sapne bikhre armaan
Kya hua haasil


He regretted all those moments that he spent with that girl whom he treated as his misti ... who broke his dreams brutally ... the sweetness in the name that he had given her could only come back to him as bitterness.


Bebasi ka chaaya aalam
Kya kare yeh dil


He didn't know why he could feel what the girl said was not true ... every ounce of him was saying she is the one who had ... the crime that she did ... Maan couldn't even think off, couldn't even imagine.


Katte katte naa rattiyan
Mushkil judaai badi
Yaad aaye beeti battiyan
Laage yun goo si gadi


Tu aagayi?? Meera hugged her best friend ... She somewhere thought Geet wont come but like always she was there in this special stage of her life. Even after facing the pain she was there with her!! Both didn't know that a shock was awaiting them which will blow Meera away with it.


Naina re
Tu hi bura
Tujhse bura na koye


Dad mujhe aapse baat karna hai ... Maan took the seat next to his father ... Anything serious bete?? Aranv patted his back trying to make out what was hurting him!!


Khud hi dil ka rog lagaaye
Khud hi baitha roye
Naina re


I want to know who is that girl in the outhouse!! Kaun hai woh?? Why does Vicky seems so much bothered for her?? Mujhe sirf sach sunna hai ... Who is she??


Naina re...



Why do you want to know?? How is it that you are asking me about a so called maid?? If that is the identity you has of hers?? Kisine yehi kaha hoga na ... shaayad tumhari Maa ne??


Precap: Maaneet together to save an innocent life!!


Kaun ho tum?? Seedhe seedhe bologi ya phir main ... maan rudely took the plate from her hand, her lost expressions were confirming his doubts about her identity.


I am a maid ... woh I came here to ... She said gulping her saliva feeling the pain in the foot from which blood began to ooze out. She stepped back making maan see the red fluid on the ground making him stand rooted.


will he believe her identity?? lol 😆 i guess many of you are getting bored of the sad things so lets get onto the track!! something is awaiting 😳


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Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
maan have a doubt that she is geet!!!!
maan still loves her!!!!!
what sin did she did????
interesting precap!!!!
update soon!!!!!!
Edited by -MSKdeewani- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
So finally she left away from him

But Maan is is dilemma.. he somewhere knows tat she is his geet but yet he wants to confirm it if she is her..

his love can be seen the way he is hurting himself and the pain tat is surfacing him but he cant even forget wat had happened in the past..

even aarav knows how much his son is in pain but he also knows tat he hates his misthi..

lol choti umar mein hi waist band diya maan ne apni misthi ko

will they ever meet.. waiting for some sweet moment now
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Posted: 11 years ago
So emotional part for maneet.. Geet going away from them.. Maan's restlessness ..He does remember Geet n her eyes.. Last part Arnav maan's dad taunted Maan abt his n his mom's view abt Geet... But why his mom hate her so much n still geet lives at their outhouse..?
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update buddy👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
but y so much sadness if both love each other y this separation
nd wen will thy meet wen will maan know her identity
plz jaldi milwao ab
do cont soon😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago


wow lovely emotional heart winching update.. te way geet leaving my maan and going for his good and te way my maan want to know who she is was lovely emotional.. te way geet thinking abt te waist band which my maan gave her and te way my maan thinking abt his misty and he was thinking whether his misty will be tat girl whom he saw and te way he rushing to his room was lovely.. te way geet going to meera's marriage hiding her pain and te way my maan asking his dad who taunting him w as lovely emotional..i love te update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
finally geet left from KM...
maan restless...somewhere he knows that she is geet...bt wants to confirm it...
maan is thinking abt his mishty...
the way maan's dad taunt maan!!!
he knows all this...

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