MG ~ff~ KASAK PART 10 pg/89 || May 1st || - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
poor geet feeling bad for her
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautifully described about geet's feelings...would wait to know what happened in the past
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sdlife19

Must say you are going good with it...

Seriously did not think dear.. I mean the way you are writing is just bringing a smile on my lips..

Vicky seem to be the mind thread between two souls...

Would love to see wat he does for his friend..

will he go against his mother or will he listen to his heart tat beats for two person..

One his bro Maan and another Geet who loves his bro.. and may be more then anyone else..

m waiting for next





your comment is just enuf to me di that would make me write more <3

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tiakashyap

yaar after reading this update
one sons come to my mind

Mainda yaar (MAAN) mila de saaiyaan
Ek vaar mila de saaiyaan
Maine fota fota falak chaanna
Maine tote tote taare chune
Mainda MAAN mila de saaiyaan
Ek vaar mila de saaiyaan

YAAR ME JUST WONDERING WT GEET DID IN THE PAST THAT SHE CANT NOW FACE MAANU
Y HIS MOM DISLIKE HER SO MUCH
N THE WAY SHE WALKED ON BURNING COALS OMG REMIND ME THE WAY MAANU DID IT FOR HER IN GHSP
N VICKY
SEEMS LIKE HE WILL HELP THEM TO MEET
WANT MORE
LVD IT





awww this is like me 🤢 tia thanks 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
TEASER:

Kaun ho tum?? Seedhe seedhe bologi ya phir main ... maan rudely took the plate from her hand, her lost expressions were confirming his doubts about her identity. He took the lighter that was on the table to see her face ... it shimmered with the gleam of the candle.


I am a servent ... woh I came here to ... She said gulping her saliva feeling the pain in the foot from which blood began to ooze out. She stepped back making maan see the red fluid on the ground making him stand rooted.


updating in few hours!!😳


Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice teaser
waiting for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
updating in few hours!!😳
Painful few hours 😔 waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
di my heart pained when geet said ke I am a servant😭😭😭 aur jab woh peeche ja rahi thi tau her burned foot started bleeding😲😭 di ek cheez kaho u will make me cry buckets in this story di sachi teaser padhkar am crying like hell😭😭 waiting for the update di eagerly😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
terrific teaser! update soon, waitin
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painful teaser...but waiting very eagerly for the part😊

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