MG SS ~Shadow Of His Love~ {NOTE iN pg 81}

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: preeti555
awesome part
maan realised his feelings for geet
geet doent want maan to marry
precap is amazing
do cont soon

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.thnkss dear 😊

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: revsacdd
thats so sweet of u..that u considerd our comments and changed a tragic end of story to a happy one..the update was gud..really waiting for the moment wen geet will meet maan's to be wife.. 😛 how will she react???doesnt she feel anythng,wen he is with her..she is such a kiddo;she cant even understand her own feelings..make her realise that she luv maan.. WE WANT A VERY LONGGG UPDATE AND SUM ROMANTIC MOMENTS OF GEET AND MAAN..HOPE U WILL FULFIL OUR WISH 😉

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thnks dear... will try to give a romantic part soon 😊😊

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: Geethanda87
wow finally maan ko realize ho gaya ki wo geet se pyar karta hai
par humari innocent si geet abhi kashmakash me hai
precap is nice i m waiting nxt update😊

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thnkss dear 😊😊

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Thnks dear Buddies all ur likes nd comments...
Love you a lot 😊 😃

~Shadow Of His Love~
--Part 17--

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>> Geet & maan both complete their work & meet outside the office...
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Maan: geet tum ghar jake fresh ho jao, main thire der baad tumhe pick karta hu, ok??
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geet: ok but aap jaldi aana...
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maan: sure dear... nd go & come soon to me 😊
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geet: byee...
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Geet take the texi & went to her home to get ready ...
Geet get ready in Simple whit colur dress...

On the other side maan also went his home take her parents blessing nd went to pick Geet

Maan came & called geet to cme down... geet tell rajveer that she is going to meet her frnd & will come late...

AS rajveer trust her, he allowed her to go...

Geet run to meet maan ... she hugged him tightly ...

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Geet {st} : i hope maan aur main kabhi aalag na ho... babaji plz aap maan ko mujhse durr maat karna... {she hugged her more} .

maan also huuged her back {st} : i knw mishti u also love me.. nd i hope you will accept it by ur heart... love you jaan ... ..

maan: chalee?? .

geet: hmmm... . . .

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maan take geet to their farmhouse...

None one was there without maaneet & their heartbeats...

geet was praying to babaji that maan ki hone wali biwi maan jaye and maan was praying that geet bass usse accept kar le...

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geet: maan yeh usska ghar hain??

maan: no mishti... yeh humara Farmhouse hain...

geet: ohhh...

maan: toh chalo mere hone wali biwi se milne...

geet: hmmm...

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maan & geet entered in the house...
geet was shocked to see all the preparations...

Full house was decorated with ballons & white & red roses...
When both was in the middle of hall, lights get off ...

Geet get scared so hold maan's hand tightly...
maan: main yahi hu geet... plzz daroo maat...
geet: yeh light kyun chale haye???

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maan: abhi aa jaye ge.. plzz trust me...
geet: hmm...

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maan take geet to near the sofa.. bith sit down but geet was still not leaving maan's hand... she was also sited very close to maan...

maan: mishti tumhe andhere se intna daar kagta hain?

geet: bohot bohot jiyada... ..

maan: par abhi main hu na...

geet: hmm...

both was sitting when spot light get on the Tv screen Showing some pics of Geet {maan clicks some snaps of geet in office}

Each pic was coming with a tagline...
geet looked into maan's eyes: what is this??
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maan: look there

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>> You're The most beautiful girl i have ever seen in my life after my Dadi & Mom...

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>> you can make the cutest faces ever {geet smiles}

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>> You are very Innocent... A baby girl...

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>> You're Smile can make the Whole world Beautiful... you are my Mishti

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Spot Light was on Maaneet Now...

Then the tv get off & maan whisper in geet ear that

maan: office se chori chori itne he pics le paya... warna aur bhi bohot baat hain tumhare baare main tumhe baatne ko...

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geet truned to him & looked into his eyes... there was so much love in his eyes... geet eyes gets moist to see this... That Her maan is doing so special things for her...
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maan kissed geet's forehead...
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maan: geet chalo aab mere would be biwi se milte hain?
geet nodded for no cuz she want to be maan now...
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maan: plzz mere liye...
geet : ok ...
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maan take geet tothe middle of the hall...
Geet: kaha hain wo?
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maan: sshhh...
geet just looked into my eyes...
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geet done what he said... her face was glowing in maan's eyes...
geet felt shy nd down her head...
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maan made her look into his eyes...
maan: Mere hone wali biwi dikhe??
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geet get confused
geet: maan apki aankho main toh sirf mere face dikh raah hain...
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maan: toh ??
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geet: Maan aap mujhe confused kar rahe ho...
maan: okk ... So mere aanko main tumhe jiska chehra dikhe ga, wahi mere jiwan sathe bane ge...
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geet: par apki aankho main sirf main...
Now geet understand everything...
Geet : Main hu apki GF??
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maan {smiles }yes...
geet: sachiii?? kahi aap mera mazak tho nahi bana rahe na??
maan: never geet...
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Maan bent down in kness nd
Maan: I LOVE YOU MISHTI... WILL YOU MARRY ME???
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GEET WAS SHOCKED ...happy... tear roll down from her eyes...
geet{st}: kya sapne sach hote hain?? Kya babaji ne maan ko sirf mere liye banaya hain?? Kya Maan sirf mere hinge?? GEET KE MAAN???
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maan: will you geet??
geet {st} : yes this is reality... maan is here with me...
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geet: yes maan... i will... {she said yes & thousands of rose patel start giving her shower}
maan stood up & both hugged each other tightly
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Preacap : Geet meeting with Dadi as Maan 's GF 😉😉
Ps : Hope you all liked the maan proposed Geet 😊😊
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Do like & big comments plzzz

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago

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MANISHA GOEL

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

omg dr kitna cute ud tha 😳

lovd d way maan proposd hr

nd geet said yes

i realy like yur idea

plz maaneet ke perfect romantic date bhi dena

nw ud nxt part soon plz cnt wait any more😊

Edited by MANISHAGOEL - 12 years ago

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tia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

awww it was so cute
geet was so scared to meet maanu's wofe bt once realizing
she herself is only in maanu's heart aww her expression was too good
n maanu he took her pics n showed her in so dramy way
i lv his cute proposal n finally he confessed bt abi geet ne nhi9 bola na lv u waiting 4 next

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Manisha Govindraj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

wow awsum update
maan proposed geet
luvd ittt
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918644

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

so finally geet got to c maans wud b wife..nice update..plsss dear i want a long update on the next chapter..with sum romance too..thank u so much for reading our comments and considering our wishes..as u promised me that u will update sum romance of maaneet soon..waiting eagerly to read ur updates..doing a gud job 👏