MG SS ~Shadow Of His Love~ {NOTE iN pg 81}

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Posted: 12 years ago

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HEY PLZ DON'T DO THIS... LEKIN JARURI HAI TO MAAN KA LEKIN YAADASH MAT BEJIYO... SOME ROMANTIC BANA DIYO😊😊😊😊

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey Guyss!!!
Thnks You so much for ur suggestions...
So Nobody want accident & Sad Ending...
So I changed My mind to do so... All your comments means a lot to me...
I was actually on cloud nine by reading ur comments...
I'm feeling So glad that you All are liking my SS so much...
Thnks a lot lot lot Guys... Love You All...

Shadow Of His Love
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Part 16

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After Leaving Geet's home Maan went To his Home to talked with His mom... As His mom can Always clear his confusion...
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In Shalini's Room...

Maan was sleeping in his mom's lap & his mom was crassing her Hair...
Shalini: kya hua maan??? Tum jab se geet se mill ke aaye ho tab se aase he meri godh main soye ho... kuch toh bolo beta??
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M: Mom I'm confused ... I don't know mujhe kya ho raha hain...
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S: U r not confused Maan, But you r in love...
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M: Mom I also think I'm In love but I'm not sure mom...
Hum bass kuch din toh huye ha mile hain phir mujhe itni jaldi pyar kese ho gaya??
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S: Maan pyar hone ke le liya bass ek pal kafi hota hain... Aur apki zindagi main woh pal aa chuka hain...
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M: r u sure mom?? Kya aapko lagat hain main Geet ko kush rakh paunge?? Main usse har dukh se bacha ke rakh paunga?
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S: i trust you... nd i know u very well... You can be a best husband like your Father...
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M: sachi mom??
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S: yes Maan... Now Get up & proposed her...
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M: mom asse thore proposed karunga?? I want make the proposal very Memorable...
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S: so any planing?
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m: abhi tak nahi ke mom... but aab ho jaye ge...,..
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s: that's like my son...
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Maan hugged his mom : you know what mom?? You are best mom in the whole world... I love u a lot...
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s: love you too beta... But Main apni bahu ko tumse jiyada pyar karunge...
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M: no problem Mom... She really needs Mom loves More than mine,,,, But I'll give her my whole love...
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S: i'm very happy maan... That u r understanding her needs from now... be like this always... Ek ladki ke sath zindagi bettane ke liye usse samajh na bohot jaruri hota hain...
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M: i will mom...
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S: ok now take rest.. kal office bhi toh hain aur kal dadi, annie aur vicky bhi aa rahe he...
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M: ok mom ... you also take rest ...
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s: okkk...
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Geet, Sam & Rajveer chat for long time... but Geet was staying away from Sam as she promised Maan...
Geet was also tensed for Maan's Hone wali biwi...
What if she didn't agreed to Maan & Geet friendship...
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Sam left after long time... Then Geet went to her room...
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Geet's Room::::
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Geet praying to Babaji: Babaji Aap maan ki hone wali biwo ko kisi aur se pyar kar wa do... Kyunki mujhse acha nahi lag raha ke woh kisi aur se shadi karenge...
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Plzz babaji Aap unko mujhse durr maat hone dena...
I promise main unka bohot khayal rahunge... Unhe kabhi hurt nahi karunge.. SaM se bhi bohot dur rahunge.. Bass aap unko humesha mere sath rakhna... plzz babaji...
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Geet was lying in her bed when maan called her..
She received the call...
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maan: hey mishti... kese ho?
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geet: main thik hu.. aap?
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maan: i'm very good...
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maan: sam gaya?? ya abhi bhi hain??
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geet: nahi chala gaya... aur main usse bohot dur dur bethe thi,, maine usse mujhe Hug karne bhi nahi diya...
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maan { fell more love with her} : thnks mishti.. mere baat ko rakh ne ke liye..
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geet: aap ke liye main kuch bhi kar sakte hu...
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maan: main bhi...
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geet feels happy to hear that...
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maan: acha mishti kal office aa rahe ho na??
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geet: haa kal first day hain na mera..
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maan: hmmm ok...
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geet: maan hum apki hone wali biwi se kab milenge??
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maan: hmmm {st: biwi ko biwi se kese milau?? meri budhu mishti ka kuch nahi ho sakta😊😊}
kal office ke baad milte ha ok??
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geet: hmm but woh maan toh jaye ge na??
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maan: of course geet... Nahi mani toh main thore usse shadi karunga...
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geet: aap mere liye usse chor doge??
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maan: tumhare kiye kuch bhi...
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geet: par aap toh usse pyar karte ho na??
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maan: main apne hone wali biwi se jiyada apni mishti ko pyar karta hu...
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geet { 😳😳} : sachii?
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maan: muchi mishti.. aab kush?
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geet: bohot bohot bohot...
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maan: i'm also happy that my mishti is happy...
Okk now byye kal milte hain...
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geet: ook take care..
maan: you too mishti..
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Next Morning In KC::::::::
Geet was working in her cabin as Shalin gave her some work...
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maan was also busy in his personal work... He also informed Shalin that he will busy today for...
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geet finished her work & was waiting for maan... Cuz they didn't meet in office yet...
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when Maan came into her cabin & hugged her...
Geet also hugged her back...
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Precap: Geet Meeting with maan ki hone wali biwi...😉😉
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Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago

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simran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

awesome part
maan realised his feelings for geet
geet doent want maan to marry
precap is amazing
do cont soon

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MANISHA GOEL

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

amazing ud dr
maan realised hs love 4 geet
geet dnt wnt maan to mary sum1 else
lovd maaneet cute talks
maan wnt to propose hr
precp is intrstng
ud soon

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momi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

awsome part per ye kya ar baar same precap
de bhi do ab ye

Edited by Sexy_Witch - 12 years ago

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Hanishadevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

beautiful update..maan realize his love for geet and now when geet going to get her realization..hopefully soon😆😆..precap interesting..tk you very much for listening to your readers rqst...it meant alot for us the happy ending..looking forward for next update...tks again...👏👏

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918644

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

thats so sweet of u..that u considerd our comments and changed a tragic end of story to a happy one..the update was gud..really waiting for the moment wen geet will meet maan's to be wife.. 😛 how will she react???doesnt she feel anythng,wen he is with her..she is such a kiddo;she cant even understand her own feelings..make her realise that she luv maan.. WE WANT A VERY LONGGG UPDATE AND SUM ROMANTIC MOMENTS OF GEET AND MAAN..HOPE U WILL FULFIL OUR WISH 😉