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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anuradha.nandam


yaar thumne phirse ek isi gana bheja jo bilkul suit hothi hai ye situation ko ,... bahut achhi hai ,.. abhi abhi suna maine ,.. thank.u very much


Tumhe thanks kehne ki jarurat nahi hai...
Tum hume update se khush karti ho toh humara bhi farz hai ki tumhe thoda khush kare...

Jo tumko ho pasand wohi baat karenge...
Tum din ko agar raat kaho, raat kahenge...
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Love it waiting for the next update 👏
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WOW!! outstanding dear...loved it so much...
Did u watch khamoshiyan??? how was it???
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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!! outstanding dear...loved it so much...
Did u watch khamoshiyan??? how was it???


i didnt seen it on thetres but in net seen most of the gc seen edited in it ,.. i felt gc ko bahut na insaaf kiya,. thik se unki talent ko use nahi karpaya,.. felt lack in that,..not that much satisfied,..
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Posted: 10 years ago
chalo ho gaye maan aur geet maaneet...i loved d talks og d kids...

cute n superb update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago

MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Th-11 /part-150/pg.no127/16/2/2015



Note:- jo log eagerly waiting for Maneet ki sr ,..i am sorry ,.. is me wo nahi hai ,.. bahut koshish ki deneki ,.. 150th part ko sr bananeka,.. per isa nahi hopayi ,... isa kuch baathe baar baar meri dimak me araha hai ,.. wo mujhe pehle clear karna tha ,.. isliye ye sab ,.. kuch log ko isa lagsakthi hai ,.. ye sab ki jarurat nahi hai ,.. lamba kheech rahi hu ,.. isa ,.. jinhe ye bore lagthi hai wo araam se chode sakthi hai kyunki isme maneet nahi hai ,.. bus mujhe clear karna tha ,.. tho mai derahi hu ,. pata nahi mai kitna justice ki ,.. per derahi hu ,.. once again sorry for disopppoint u,...

Part:-150

All came to home after marriage and had lunch ,.. Arpitha @Ankitha got busy in clearing works.All male r chatting about the remaining like reception and etc,..etc,.. Maan wanted Arpitha @Aakash join in family business and Ankitha after her delivery and babys responsibilities,..
Its 9.p.m.all had family dinner together with lot of fun and knok jokes enjoyed fully.
Anie brought some packets and covers fr. the car and went to geets bed room,.. she is up to something when Arjun came in search of her .Annie is unpacking the packets and keeping them on bed.
Arjun:- Annei,.. chalo ab bahut der horaha hai hum ghar chalthe hai
Annie;- arree,. Arjun,.. itna jaldi kaise? mujhe kuch aur kaam hai,
Arjun: kya karna hai?
Annie:- Arjun,.. ye bhai ki sr hai ,. mai bhai keliye kuch spl karna chahthi hu.
Arjun:-Annie ,. mai ek baat kahu?
Annie:- ji boloie ,..
Arjun:- Ab ye sab karna jaruri hai kya?
Annie:-Arjun,.. ye aap kya baat karrahe ho? dono ki shaadi hogaya na ,.. ab ye rishta ko age badhana haina?
Arjun:- haa,.. Annie,. shaadi tak humari involvement hothi hai ,.. age kya karna ? kaise age badhana hum unper chodenge,.. yaha se wo dono khud decide karenege tho achha hai annie,.. dono milker apni khushiyaa dhunde tho achha haina?
Annie:- haa,.. mai jaanthi hu Arjun ,. mai tho bus mera haathonse kamara sajana chahthi thi.
Arjun:- came to her keeping his hands on her shoulders,..dekho annie,. samajneki koshish karo,.. thum ek aurat ho thumhe hi ye samajna chahiye,.. thum ek baar di ki taraf se socho ,.. haa,.. mai jaantha hu wo jiju se pyaar karthi hai shaadi ki ,.. per ye sab personal hothi hi annei ,.. bilkul private ,.. unhe thoda aur wakth lagega,.. khaas karke unki betia aur sils ke saamne,... thumhe samaajme agaya na mai kya kahneki khoshish karraha hu? ye sab karke unhe aur emberass karna thik rahe ga kya?
Annie:- haa,. Arjun aap thik kahrahe ,. mai apni hi dhun me hu,.. ye sab nahi socha,..
Arjun:- isliye mai kahraha hu ki b hume ghar chalna chahiye ,.. dono ko akela rahnedo ,.. wakth dena chahiye unhe thik hai?
Annie:- thik hai Arjun.
While hey talking Arpitha@Ankitha came to them and stood there . They want o say something but not able to open their mouths in fighting with the murk of emotions ,.. dont know how to ask ,..
Arjun @Anie looked at them who stood silent and hesitating to ask something to them.
Annie:- kya hua Arpitha?kuch kahna chahthi ho?
Arpitha tried to speek with chocking voice ,'reeti riwaaj ki anusaar har shaadi ke baad vidhai hothi hai"and she bursted in to tears not able to cmplete the remaining,.. she want to ask her who will do vidai ? how? ,. they r happy to their mother that she got her life back and they know that Maan will keep her happy,.. phir bhi kuch isi bat hothi hai jo hum voice out nahi karsakthe .. their insecurity,.. for their mother and their pyaar towards her ,..they trust Maan,.. but there is some thing them bothering,... an odd situation,. dont know how to ask and whom to ask ,..
Annie understand them their ,.. turmoil and weavering thoughts ,.. they have to clear them,..,she came to them cupping their cheeks with her hands,'koi vidhai nahi hoga "koi kisi ko vidhai nahi karega.
Arjun:- Haa,.. arptha ,..ye jaruri nahi hai ki saare rasme fallow karneka ,. hum sab milke ye shaadi isliye ki hum un dono ki khushi chahthe hai ,.. ,.. na ki isa vidhai karke hum se alag karneka nahi ,.. hum jaanthe hai thum sab maa ke bina nahi rahsakthe ,..
Annie:-Haa,.. arpitha hum sab ekhi pariwaar ki hai ,. koi ,.. kabhi kissi se vidha nani hothe,. koi vidhai nahi hogi ,.. thum dono maase dur jaane ki koi jarurat nahi hai ,... thumhare papa ye nahi honedethe,.. bhai thum sab se bahut pyaar karhthe hai ,.. thumhe bhai per bharosa nahi hai?
Geet is just passing by the room when she heard,..the word "vidhai" stood stunned and rooted,. generally maa baap apni bachhe ko vidhai karthe hai ,.. per yaha tho ,.. her eyes filled with tears,. there is a hammock of emotions meddling,.. haa she want this marriege,. a second life ,. but there will be certain sencitive baathe hothi hai jo hum kahnahi sakthe,uncanny feelings,. those r bursting a storm inside her ,.. her weavering and murk of feelings in which her heart is sinking ,.. soothed by words of Annie and Arjun.
Arpitha:- nahi ,.. hum jaanthe hai ,. papa mama ko khush rahthe hai ,.. hume pura bharosa hai ,.. ,.. pata nahi ,.. sobbing ,.. yuhi ,.. ye aasu ,.. nikalrahe ,.. hum,..maa ko ,.. sobbing,.. nahi ,.. agar ,.. humaari taraf se koi galt hue tho ,.. tho ,.. hume maaf ,.. Annie came and hugged her at once stopping her,. koi galat nahi hua ,.sab thik hai ,.. kuch galat nahi hua ,.. aur mai pehlehi bathayi thi ki hum sab ekhi family hai ,.. aur pariwaar ki sadasya ek dusere se maafi nahi maangthe ,.. ek duserese pyaar karth hai ,.. izzat karthe hai ,.. aur ek dusere ko samajthe hai ,.. age kabhi isa math kahna samjhi thum?
Prasant is comimg in searchof Arpitha,...
Geet moved away wiping her tears dont want to face prasant .
Prasant came to the room.. Arpitha chalo der horaha hai ,.. hume ghar chalna hai,... looked all in some serious mood,.. kya hua ? sab itna gumsum kyu hai?
Arjun:- kuch nahi Prasant ,. ladies haina ,. kuch senti ,.. aur rona dona ,..
Praant:- pr ab sab kuch thik hai ,.. maa papa ka shaadi hue ,.khushi ka mouka hai ,.ab ye rona dona kyu? Arpitha agar maa dekho tho unper kya beethegi? chalo ye sab band karo samalo thum dono apne aap ko,.. chalo hum chalthe hai ,..Dishu kara hai?
Here in hall Maan is feeding ice cream to both Dishu @ Rahul with lots of pampering,..dishu on Maans laps,...
Prasant came and said:- Chalo Dishu beta ,.. bahut raat hogayi ,.. thumhe sonahai hum ghar chalthe ,.. kal school janahaina thumhe?
Dishu knocking on her head ,..ophoo,.. papa,.. ghar tho aap ko jaana hai ,.. mai tho yahi nani ke saat sothi huna?
Sab log ek mnt chup hogaya looking eachother,.. ab kya kahna hai dishu ko kaise leke jaana hai for giving privacy to maneet.
Maan:- nahi ,.prasant inhe yaha rahnedo ,.. hume achha lagega.
Prasant:- came to sence and got something,.. per papa mujhe laga ki ab dishu tho badi hogayi ,. inhe alagsa kamara aur bed chahie, sonekeliye. isliye mai iski intejaamkiya ,..
Dishu:- all exited,.. mereliye alagsa kamara,..merei apna kamara?
Arpitha:- haa,.. bahut bada kamra ,.. waha thum thumhari saari dresses books dolls aur thumhari saari cheeze rakhsakthi ho ,.. aur thum khud thumhari kamara thum jaise chaho waishi sajasakthi ho ,.. aur thum waha apni dost ke saath khelsakthi ho ,. kya thum avogena?
Dishu:- such me mama ,.. tho mera kamara bhi rahul bhai ki tarah badi hai? aur wo sirf meri hogi?
Arpitha:- haa,.. dishu ab thum chalogena?
Dishu,:- haa mai avungi ,.. then she stood thinking something keeping her point finger on her chin,..
Arpitha:- ab kya sochrahi ho?
Dishu:- per mama ,..agar mai waha agayi tho nani akeli kaise sothi hai? thumhe maalum haina thumhari mama kitni darpok hai ,.. wo mere bina bahut darrthihai
All laugh at her innocence and her care and love for nani.
Geet is inside kitchen ,.. but listening everything ,.and smiled for her angels love with tears
Arpitha:- ohoo,.. dishu ..mera papa haina mere mama ke saath ,.. wo unki khayaal rakhthe hai ,..
Dishu looked at her with her big eyes. she ran to him:- Dost aap meri nani ki khayaal rakhogena?
He nodded his head smilling ,melting in her innocent care and love to geet . he kissed her.
Dishu :- thank.u dost,.. she was going to geet when something striked her ,. again she came to him,..agar aap ko darr lagi tho?
Rahul:- Oye;;; mera badi mamu kabhi kisi se nahi dartha ,.. bahut bahaddur hai mera mamu , .kabhi dekhi nahi mere mamu ki muscles itna bada hai ,showing. hands itna bada,.. har roj excercise karthe hai,...agar koi ayetho mamu unhe yuhi maar peet karke girathe hai,.haina mamu?
Maan nodded his head to yes smilling for rahulls confident on him. he kissed him.
Dishu :- tho thik hai,..,.. now she fully convinced giving her nanis responcibilities to Maan ,.and she ran to Geet.
Dishu:- came to her and nani ,.. geet took her in to her arms,.. nani ,.. pata hai mama papa ne mereliye alag sa kamara ready ki ,.. ab mai badi hogayi huna ,.. isliye ,.. papa ne sab kuch rakha hai ,.. aaj se mujhe wahi rahna hai ,.. per aap daro math aap ki saath mere dost hai ,.. wo aap kikhayaal rakhthe hai ,. thik hai ?
The tears which she is trying to supress forcebly now spilled out breaking her control by this ,..pure love and care and her worry ,.. and the assurance by her little angel,.. she kissed all over dishu hugging her to her chest,.. dishu also kissed her on her face.
Arpitha came to take Dishu. She looked them. Dishu got down fr. geets arms . Geet and Arpitha looked each other. dont know wat to talk. sometimes silence speaks lot ,.. sometimes where words could not handle ,.. silence better handles the situations,.. silence can better convay ourselves to others ,.. they remained hugging each other exchanging their feelings Ankitha also joined in their emotional hug.
Here outside Arjun @Annie Rhul ko samjhaneki khoshish kar rahe as he too wants to stay with his mamu. They tried to convince by saying the same as he is also a big boy and dishu bhi apna ghar jaarahe ,.. apni kamare me rahrahe ,. aur kal school jana hai ,.. etc,,.etc,..finally they succeeded by promising him next day after school he may comes to his mamu ,..
And all went to their respective houses bidding good night to Maneet.
Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful part..Dishu is a wonderful kid yaar...cant wait for maaneet moment..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear...😊. Emotional but very nicely written. These all r important in the relationship. Loved the kids and their love. Maaneet r asusual awesome. Lovely😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome pt
arjun stopped annie to not too embarrass
them by arranging their SR
geet daughters become emotional
annie handle them and next was to handle kids
both not ready to leave nani and mamo
But
maan staying in geet house its not convincing
he have different habits and used to it and
its not like that only most important his security concerns too
geet loves him so much how can she see
him just managing and compromising in every phase
geet house can't compare to maan palace

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