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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



dekho kaun keh rahi hai... kab se main khud se baat kar rahi thi yahaan

12 tho baj gaye... cindrella mere khyaal se ab kharaate le rahi hogi


Pucca...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



just upar waala comment path priya... same answer tha isi liye ek baar post kiya tha



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



wahi tho main tortoise ki tarah post pe post daal rahi hoon par tumlogon ka pata nahi maine ek post may likha mai kitni khush thi koi tho jo mereliye ladhrahe hai uska jawab hi nahi diya tumdono ne


Tumne kaha ki lado mat...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
aaj mona ne dhoka diya hum sab ko yaha hum usi wait karre hai aur madam waha dreams may hogi 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

sada change ,tuhada kinda...??


Lily ye hide n seek ku khel rahi ho...😕
hi bolker bhaag jaati ho...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Lily ye hide n seek ku khel rahi ho...😕
hi bolker bhaag jaati ho...



woh tho hamesha bhaagthi hai... the most inspired one from bhaag mikha 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago




The Downpour... Part 56


Maan again n again was looking toward Geet that if she was still angry!! But Geet maintained her stern look though she was also glimpsing him every now and then, without letting him know.

"Lagta hai he forgot about his demand'' she smirked but when saw Maan was looking her, she twisted her lips and ignored him.

Maan was annoyed by now with her ignorance he abruptly stopped car and spoke irritated,

Geet at least listen me, "

I don't want to! You please start the car"

'I m not your driver, samjhi tum!

Fine, then I will go by taxi, I don't want to sit in your this sada hua car!", She pushed door and tried jumped out.

Geet, kya kar rahi ho!!!!!" Maan pulled her inside with such force she couldn't manage balancing herself and fell on him straightway.

"Dare you Geet!!!" his intense gaze was so deep that made her feel shudder suddenly. Maan smirked looking his effect on her; he brought mouth near her ear and whispered,

Geet, I know you are faking anger just me to forget my condition, aren't you?"

She looked him in surprise, he smirked dangerously.

"But this, is not going to be succeeded sweetheart" He snickered secretly looking at her shocked face. He bent and kissed her cheek,.



"Are you okay!!' He chuckled looking her all numb.

She immediately maintained her position and sat straight. She looked up to her Babaji, cursing Maan, "why you always take his side Babaji!!", she murmured, made cry face.


"Because these days I'm his favourite Geet' He started car giving her teasing smile.

They reached office. Maan removed his seatbelt and came out. He walked to her side and opened door, "let your Babaji take some rest Geet, you have whole day to curse me. Now come out"

Gert being very annoyed came out glaring him but it couldn't last long when found him staring on her lips. She gulped saliva down in fright.

Maan walked toward lift, she followed him silently. He pressed floor button and stood with his crossing arms position fully dripped in attitude, and gave his royal winning smirk on her pleading one. Geet looked him with deer eyes but he ignored. Lift stopped and he walked out. He gave one last look to her and straightway walked in his cabin and shut off the door.

"What I do now!!!'' Geet was wandering in her cabin thinking on any plan but she knew, it was not that easy to trick MSK. "babaji, koi idea do na!!', and suddenly she got an idea!!

"If I get hurt, he can't force me for anything!!!!

She wore winning smile on her lips. Desided everything she started waiting for Maan would call him. "Because if I would go myself, I'm sure he'll doubt on me!!''

Time was beating very slowly. She had never been so impatience meeting Maan how much she wanted to meet him right now. She could not concentrate on her work and finally after hours, he called her with a file.

She did instant prayer and rushed to his cabin. She stopped silently to his door and knocked, then entered after finding permission.

"Did you get the file Geet!!'

"Ji!!' she hastened and gave him file. She watched him and found, he was totally engrossed in work. "Its perfect chance Geet, chal shuru hoja!!!''

And in next second Maan found her on floor whimpering and clutching her knee.

"Geet!!!!''

Maan runs to her. He sat on floor with her, held her shoulder. "Are you okay!!!!!!!''

Geet showed her tearing eyes, she made baby cry face and nodded NO!!!

"My legs are paining Maan'

"Oh!!! Let me see Geet''

Maan held her leg and started to slip her salwaar up. Immediately she held his hand stopped.

"What are you doing!!!'' She was shocked.

"Let me check Geet. I can't see you in pain!!!' He removed her hand softly and raised her salwaar little more up. Geet was so shocked with his intimate care, she couldn't take more.

"Maan ..' she again tried to stop him but it was like, she had lost the ability to act back. Maan was taking his steps very slow, giving her more and more time to lose her sense. His hand caressed slowly on her bare leg to heal her injury that raised the speed of her breathing. She found she would lose her conscious if wouldn't stop him. When she realized his hand had reached to her bare knees she stood up at once and runs out clutching her heart, did not even give a look back to him who was laughing like mad.

"I knew Geet that this your fall was fake. I had been watching you since the time you had entered here!!'' He self said in between his laugh. He shook head on her childlessness but suddenly he heard scream outside. He rushed out instantly.

And found Geet was again sitting on floor in same position what she had been in. It seemed she had bumped with someone because everywhere papers and files were scattered on floor.

Geet looked him again with same teary eyes.

He went near and carried her in his arms. He carried her to cabin and made her sit on couch. She was expecting the same treatment with fearing eyes, when heard Maan laugh.

"Not again Geet!!!'' He shook head in disbelief. He bent near, "Geet, do you really think that I would forget my condition looking your these childish pretexts hm!! Then you are very wrong because I will not''

He smirked and left her cabin but least did he know that this time she was not pretending. She was really hurt when in hurry she runs out from his cabin and bumped with someone. Her leg was badly paining but she was that annoyed with Maan behaviour, did not feel like telling him truth. She resumed her work.

##

Some more hours passed. Maan had not seen Geet since long hours and he was badly missing her. He took up phone and called her in cabin with file. Geet was still in body pain, she had not eaten anything yet and was so upset with Maan, decided not to make him realise her hurt. She reached to his cabin limping but before entering, tried to maintain normal walk. She removed the signs of ache from her face and faced him.

Maan watched her. He could see she was trying to hide her frustration but mistook it with her hesitation to fulfil his wish. He smiled.

"Sit Geet'

Geet came and sat opposite him. She handed over file.

"Geet I …'' Maan wanted to talk her about personal when she cut his word off in mid.

"Maan I have read this file and I guess that….'' She did aside his talk and focused in file. He knew till then that she was angry.

"Did you have your lunch Geet' He asked dearly.

"I'm not feeling hungry!!' She still could remember his avoidance for kheer. "If you have not any work for me can I go back? My many works are in pending'

He did not want to make her more annoyed so let her leave.

"Thank you' she stood up, crushing her pain down severely and came out. Her face was becoming red due to tolerating unbearable pain but she did not expose it to anyone but one person noticed it.

"Have this pill Geet'

Geet looked up from the file she was reading and saw Adi, with pain killer in his hand.

"Adi sir I don't need it!!'' She tried to show normal.

"Don't hide Geet I had seen how badly you had bumped with her. Take this you'll feel better.

She did not want to made him upset so took pill but didn't eat, instead said, she will have it later.

"Okay Geet and take some rest!!'

She nodded smiling. Adi left. Geet kept pill aside and resumed her work but did not have it.

##

Day passed and all staffs started to leave office. Geet also stood up but could not. Her pain had become intense without proper medication but she was that upset with Maan, did not want to subside even her pain in anger. But she knew maan would be coming anytime to take her, she decided to leave alone.

##

Maan went in her cabin to take her when saw it was empty. He had doubt that she would do something like this in anger. He came out and started to go toward lift guessing she would be leaving alone when saw Adi there. He stopped him.

"Adi!!'

Adi stopped and turned back.

"Adi, did you see Geet!!'

Adi nodded. "I had seen her going toward stairway''

"Stairway!!' Maan was confused. "Why didn't she take lift!!'

"Maan sir, she should not walk on stairs in this condition. I mean she should have waited for lift!!'' Adi said in concern but Maan did not understand a word.

"Which condition Adi?''

"Adi surprised to know that Maan had no idea about her hurt. He told everything. Maan shocked to the core. He couldn't believe that his Geet was in pain and he was not there for her to heal her instead he mocked her!!

Immediately he rushed toward stairway in between cursing Geet to remove his anger on her own self. He wanted to shout on her to use stairs just because he could not find her. He knew her intension very well. And finally he saw her, sitting on a stair holding leg and he could see the pain she had been bearing since hours.

Before Geet could feel his presence she found her self lifted in his arms. She shocked him seeing there. She opened mouth to shout,

"Chup!!! Bilkul chup, dare you to say a word Geet!!!!''

She surprised. She had thought that he would melt seeing her in pain but here, he was again shouting. She twisted lips and turned her face from him.

Maan started to descend stairs taking her in arms. He was silent and his face was blank. She glimpsed him after minutes, expected him to say something but he was silently walking. For one floor she enjoyed secretly but then she started worrying for him. They had to go more six floors to reach to ground.

"maan I can walk my self. You please put me down!!' She said rudely but he did not reply just kept walking. One more floor ended.

"Maan we can use lift, please you'll get tired!!'' She could not take more. She knew it was hard for him to step stairs down taking her weight in arms. She was feeling worried for him.

"Maan please put me down!!!'' Finally she had to shout loud. Maan stopped and looked her.

"You'll get hurt Maan, let me walk my self'' she spoke softly.

"Then let me feel this pain Geet'

She looked him confused. He put her down on her leg but still kept her maximum weight in his arms, holding her from waist.

"Have you ever thought Geet what if I would not have come here looking for you? Did you ever think how would I feel, when would see you in pain. This pain is nothing in front of what you made me feel Geet. You were hurt but did not letting me know even. Why Geet why tell me!!!''

She had never seen him in this state. She had never thought that her adamance would force him to feel this intense ache which was far bigger then her physical one. She regretted for her act. She hugged him tight, saying sorry for umpteen times.

"Never repeat it Geet''

He also hugged her back healing the wounds of his heart. He kissed her hair make her more snuggled. "Don't ever do this again''

She nodded. She raised head back and looked him. She could easily see the hurt in his eyes. This all was only because of her; she had turned his happy mood to this sadden one. That couldn't be acceptable for her love. She wished to cheer him up, to make him happy again.

She rose on her toe slowly and brought face very near to him. She could see the turn of emotion in his eyes, an excitement was filling inside. She blushed yet she had to complete what had been started and she kept her lips over his.

Precap : Geet made him wear Tabiz 😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
yepee me first ...
Edited by mehak173 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

😆 Bach gai Mona...



Geet sach mei dumbo hai...
Kiss bhi ki to tut-fut ker...
But im happy .. Maan ko to wo mil hi gaya jo usse
chahiye tha.😉 ☺️
Hyyeee.. i want to see his reaction... 😳





Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago

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