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Posted: 12 years ago




The Downpour... Part 53


Geet opened her eyes in morning lazily. She was smiling thinking last night events and automatically her face turned into red.

"You're looking beautiful'

Suddenly she heard his voice praising her,

"Maan!!!!''

Her eyes widen in shock. Hurriedly she clutched blanket over chest. "You here!'

"Why so shocked Geet''. He started moving to her. "This is my home and I can move everywhere, wherever I will want''

"Haa but.. Now I living here so.. 'She slips back scaring.

"So Geet..'' Maan had come so closer. She could see mischief in his eyes, she knew he was again in mood of naughtiness.

"Maan you.. stay away.. from.. me''

It looked so tough to bring words out from her mouth feeling him closer. She found he was gazing toward her lips and shiver runs down in her body at once. The feel of his touch of last night was still fresh in her mind and now this closeness would definitely took her breath away, it felt.

"Maan..'' she gasped

Maan was moving closer, more close that Geet had to arc back in reflex and she fell on bed. But still Maan advancing toward her didn't stop and his nose stroked her cheek.

"Maan aap ye…'' She moaned but it didn't affect his move. And suddenly she heard Dadima calling her!!

"Geet beta!!!!''

"Maan please you go Dadima is coming!!!'' she became alarmed.

"Now you can't escape Geet'' he gazed her. Geet heartbeat was increasing with every second hearing Dadi was coming closer.

"Maan I'm not lying, sach me Dadima is coming!!!!'' But he was adamant.

"Maan why don't you listen me, move!!!!'' and in hurry she pushed him so forcefully that Maan fell back on bed hitting his leg. He glared her with his angry eyes.

"Geet!!!''

And suddenly her sleep broke and she found she was dreaming about him. She touched her head, it was sweating badly. Still she could feel his anger and it made her more feared.

"Babaji.. I was dreaming'' her heartbeat was still so fast and breathing was riotous. She remembered about last night. How he had threatened her to see in morning.

"What if he still be angry!! Babaji please save me'' she felt like cry but then made her heart strong. "No Geet don't be scared, anyway he can't be so bad!! Haina!!''

She prayed God and started her morning routine. She was brushing her teeth when got an idea!

"I should take something for him. He will surly like it!!!'' She hurried up and took quick shower. She went in kitchen and decided to make Kheer like before once she had done and he had liked it. After an hour she was all ready to go in mansion to manaofy Maan.

She was stood on entrance on mansion with shaking heart, that how she would face him. After night everything had changed between them. Their relation had taken a quick turn and it was looking so tough to balance her emotions. With slow steps she walked in.

"Aree Geet, what are you doing there, come inside beta!!'

SD noticed her standing on door and called her. Geet was looking toward Maan, who was sitting and having his breakfast,. Her nervousness increased looking at him but Maan did not look her back. She tried to get if he was still angry and found 'yes.. he was!!' She recalled her Babaji.

"Come Geet, sit. Have breakfast with us!!'

Geet smiled and kept bowl on table.

"What's this beta' Dadi asked.

"Wo Dadima, I had made Kheer ...so thought to share it with you' She said glimpsing to Maan, who seemed no affected with her presence. Her heart felt sadden. She sat pulling chair next to Dadi whereas Maan was facing her.

Maan knew she was looking him only but he wanted to show his anger, yet his heart was danced in joy when saw Kheer. Those old memories came running in his mind making his heart delighted yet he did not show. He showed he was really angry to her.

"Wah Kheer!! I loved it beta thank you!!'

Geet smiled. She waited for Maan to at least give a look to her but he looked so tempered.

"Babaji, he is still angry, what to do now!!'' She thought, she coughed that somehow he would notice her but no use.

"Good morning Maan sir!!' She said but still Maan kept maintain his stiffness.

"Khadoos!!!'' she murmured making face.

"What did you say beta?''

"Ji? Wo.. Nothing Dadi!!' she felt embarrassed. Here Maan was enjoying her plight. He smirked secretly.

Dadi served Kheer in three bowls and from one she tasted.

"It's delicious Geet!!!' She liked it so much. Though Geet was happy but she wanted hearing compliment from Maan, who did not even give a look to it. Though secretly he was tasting it's flavour from hungry eyes.

"Taste it Maan I'm sure you'll going to love it. It's so tasty' Dadi spoke excitedly while taking another full spoon in mouth.

"Dadima, you know I don't like sweets, anyway I'm getting late for office. I'm going' saying Maan glared Geet and stood up to go. Geet felt bad and both strange behaviour noticed by Dadi.

"Why Maan is behaving weird?'' she thought. She looked at Geet who was also looking upset. She knew something was not good between them.

"Have something Geet' SD offered her food to make her cheer up but Geet denied. "No Dadima. I can't eat anything today'

Maan heard it while going up to his room. He did his steps slow.

"Why?'' Sd asked eagerly.

"Wo dadima, I have decided to visit temple today, so can't have anything till be back'

"Aree wah Beta, that's good. But why suddenly you decided it! Do you want to wish something for yourself!!' SD asked smirking.

Geet smiled. "No Dadima, now I don't need to wish anything' She looked toward Maan who was hearing everything. His legs were like denied to take him further.

"Because my God is in front of me. Now whenever I want I can ask him anything and I know, he would not deny!!''

She said it with such confidence and love that Maan couldn't keep himself away from looking her back. He had reached up and was away from everyone's eyes but his eyes were only staring to Geet, whose face was glowing in bliss. He felt like to take her in arms and give happiness of this whole world, but he was angry, he remembered it and left in his room fuming.



Precap : Dadi does drama again 😛


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Posted: 12 years ago
🥳 [:D/]
yeee me 1st after ages
Edited by mehak173 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely ud
Maneet in one room
Geet seeing dream and pushung maan and maan getting angry
Geet manofying maan
Geet made kheer but maan giving his royal ignorance
Edited by mehak173 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part...

loved it...but gosh...yeh maan kitna gussa karta hain...now waiting for geet's mission


n what about poor asha...she is in for a heart attack when she come to outhouse with geet
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wowww ..
loved it mini ..
waiting 4 Dadimaa's Drama now
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Posted: 12 years ago

Mai hoon tumhare sath...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww mona both updts r osm ,dekha asha chudail ke bina kitna asha ja reha hei,per tumne khandhani jwelry ki jo kahani shuru ki hei vo kush gadwad lag rehi hei...I lov geets dream,fir se kheer muh mei paani aa gaya...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Mai hoon tumhare sath...

lo mein bhi aaa gayee,baki sab hei kya...??hi sweetpies...😊
babie nd laks blak coffee drinking...😛😉
Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago



Yaar ye Maan bhi buddhu hai...
Kheer to khaa jata...😆 nakhre baad mei dikha leta..😆
Lagta hai koi aur hi sweet dish khayega...spl. 😉😆
Lets see Geet kaise manati hai..😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Mai hoon tumhare sath...



i loved this pic... where r u? aaj tho koi update aur nahi mila

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