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Posted: 12 years ago
hi mona sona babie laks nd priya...jaldi aao, waiting ...
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Hello yaro...
ajjkal Ramadan hai toh bro nahi hota iss time...
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main jhanki marnay ajati hoon...
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi mona sona babie laks nd priya...jaldi aao, waiting ...


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Originally posted by: LILY111144


<font color="#ff0000" size="5">hi mona sona babie laks nd priya...

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yaar tu hari bati on kar ,varna humen kush pt nehi chalta mam kab aayee or gayee...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey mona ,sona nd priya wts up..?
laks ,babie jab tak aayegii mera jaane ka tym ho jayega...
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hai yaaron


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The Downpour... Part 51


As the candle left its life, a pair of slick arms wrapped his waist from behind and he felt her burning face touched his wet and cold shirt. He could feel the smooth touch of her loud breathing and palpitations of heart.

"I'm sorry Maan'' She cried clutching him with utmost right and the pain she had been experiencing since the time of his disappearing from her sight, came out in form of tears.

After calming her heart she raised eyes to look him. Maan was yet stood all calm with no simulation of anything. It amazed her. She knew he had been waiting for her since long hours yet was not saying a word! She walked around and faced him.

"Maan aren't you angry?'' But Maan was gazing her only with calmness. She looked around. Melted candles and ruined decors pricked her heart. She went near and picked up a candle which was dissolved just a moment back and smoke was yet coming out.

"Maan ye sab'' She looked back to him with sorrow, feeling shame on herself to ruin his wish. She could guess it was for her. More tears welled up in her eyes.

"I'm sorry!!''

She was looking him with extreme guilt that few tears started to come down from but captured by Maan lips in middle way. She shivered with this sudden intimacy, found herself in his arms and his face was very near to her face. Maan kissed her rest tears hanging on her cheeks. She clutched his arms tight in reflex.

Maan looked her, said, "Geet don't dare to shed more tears because you have lost right on them. You have no authority to make them any move without my permission'

She looked him numb. "What he meant!! Was he meant the same which I want to hear from him!!!'' She got lost in deep thought. Her eyes met with his who was yet had gazing her only, to watch her response. He slowly brought his face near to her, and kissed her eyes slowly, one by one. Geet was totally forgetting herself, standing near, in his arms. Her breathing almost left functioning when she found he was moving toward her lips. She looked immediately in his eyes, to find his intension, but found the mystery only, hiding behind his dark eyes. She gasped. She could not understand how to react but then her heart said, it was his right only. She remained stood like that when Maan moved more closer. She could smell his breath, feel it over her lips. She clutched his shoulder tighter and waited to feel him shutting down her eyes.

Maan stared her. Her acceptance made him delight, he smirked. He was glad to see longing in her too, for his love. She was not scared with his proximity but welcoming it. His purpose was completed.

Geet was still waiting for him when suddenly felt lack of warmth around. She opened eyes. She shocked to find it was complete dark all over with no sigh of Maan. She got scared.

"Maan!!'' She called out in fright.

"I'm here Geet. Don't be scared''

"Then why don't you come near''.

"You liked my closeness Geet!' She heard his smile. She knew again he was teasing her but this time she was really scared.

"Maan please don't make fun, I really fear of darkness'' Her voice had shake. Suddenly she felt a hand slipped on her waist from back. she shivered yet had relief finding him there. She felt his face near her ear. His breathes were making her hairs wave. She loved this intimacy. Maan tugged her nearer that her back touched his chest. She could feel his loud heartbeat same like her own. She was losing sense slowly when felt his lips hovering over her cheeks. His hands were caressing over her hands. Suddenly something cold she felt slipped in her hand but was so lost to notice it. She wanted him to say something yet was loving his silence. It was strange. She felt his hands started slipping up stroking her both arms and stopped on shoulder. She felt his lips on her neck then collarbone.

"Maan..'

"Shh''' He cut her moan. "Don't say anything Geet. There is no place of words between us''

And then she felt the slip of her Dupatta!!

She shocked, stopped him doing it. She clutched her Dupatta over his hand surprising.

"You don't trust me?'' He breathed.

Geet removed her hold from Dupatta. She nodded yes, "I do', gave him liberty to do what he wished. She had complete faith on Maan and this was his win. He was so happy. Her Dupatta had been removed.

"Open your eyes Geet'

Geet slowly blinked her eyes, made them open. A candle was been lighten up. She saw him stood before her, her lashes bowed down automatically in shy. Maan walked near. He held her from shoulder and made to turn left. She saw a full size mirror was there in which she could see his reflection standing behind her own. But what made her shock was that she was looking like a new bride. She saw bangle in her hand and a beautiful necklace around neck and then felt a bridal-Dupatta over her head, which Maan was placing from back. Her eyes widen in surprise.

"Maan ye''

But before she could say further, Maan kneeled down on floor. Before she could understand anything she felt metal touched her feet. He lovingly made her wear a pair of gold anklet keeping her leg on his knee, one by one. She was overwhelmed with his gesture that it was impossible to react in words. Seemed her lips had banned words to come out. But this was nothing before what she was to hear ahead and when she heard, she forgot to breath.

"Geet will you marry me''

And her gasp resounded in air. It was enough to control by her small heart. It seemed she was not left in position to react on his statement. Whereas, Maan was looking her with expectations. His heart was also running in marathon, that also without any rules.

"Tell Geet, will you marry me''

And she nodded slightly; it was like everything she was doing in reflex, still not differencing between her dreams and reality.

Maan happiness had no bound, it was going away, far away in fly. His smile was showing his joy. He stood up, cupped her face. He knew she was still in shock and he loved her expression. It was same which he had imagined. He shook her laughing. Geet looked him finally, coming back in sense. Her face was glowing like a new bride, adorned in Maan's gifts. He was observing her beauty with new found eyes. She blushed. It was sudden yet was wonderful to be felt. Everything changed within a minute and she had became his. His name had been written on her palm by God himself. He brought her face closer and captured her lips in him with utmost love.


Precap : Donno 😛


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me first... yehhh....

and the update was just WOW

their trust on each other is simply awesome... he trusted her that she will come where as geet too trusts him blindly...

the way to propose... kya kehne... i had thought he may just express his love but here maan tho ek step aage nikal gaya... seedha propose kar diya... and that too in such a simple cute and romantic way...

aur kya jagah par part khatham ki hai... mona tujhe tho main 😡... aur precap bhi kya diya hai!!! but for the dreamy proposal... yeh sab maaf kar eti hoo... for now am happy with the feel of romance in the air...





Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful n lovely part...

no I Love u...directly will u marry me...

now I am wondering what will asha do if she come to know this...will she die out of shock😆😆😆
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 12 years ago

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