The Locket (8), MG FF, thread 9 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 30

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--Zehnaseeb-- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bechara Maan..🤣 Geet has tested his every ounce of patience... 😆 Rajdhani...dhak dhak... shyamlal..?? Maan's thought also so funny..
Amazing one.. Waise.. Geet ko aur ek baar talli bana do..
😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 29 - superb part...geet still didnt know about maan helping her darji...glad that darji is safe...and now worry about moany also...
after so long time, they met again...loved their reuniting-hug ...
geet misundersood relation bet maan & megha...she is his siter
omg geet ot openly droolin on him behind the pillar...
ufff...sasha ne bhaang pila di...ab dono udne lage hai...kuch to baat aage bhadni chahiye...nahi ye dono vahi ke vahi reh jayenge...
hummm...so sahsa & dev...nice jodi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear👏
awww poor maan 😳 😳
how could he control🤣
atleast get a kiss
thanx 4 the pm
update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

u don't even know how much

full masti😆😆
loving it so much

😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 30 -
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
so beautiful part...i loved it ...loved it very much...
after so long time they are so close...and mainly they talked with each other...
so dreamy part...geet in maan arms...his dream came true...
poor maan how much his thoughts went running wildly ...
shamlal's part was so funny...omg she how much worried about shamlal's married life...and her explanation about parjayji's expectations about rajkumar...its amazing...
but they again back to square one in the morning...again both distant
but I loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Avi I love you for such back-back updates ❤️ 🤗

I came back from office at 11 pm on Wednesday and the scene would not leave my head until I wrote it down. These characters are taking over my brain😆. Once I wrote it of course I had to share it..😃
Piya ke rang mein rangnewali se jiya dhadkane wali tak mast progression 👏

Reading this whole part I was having a laughing fit ... enjoying it so much that I was either smiling or giggling. I loved it 😃 Right form Adi giggling like a girl to Rajdhani express, multiple trains, do do fruits, stinking Shyamlal, Polo, Plomish and ending was like a the final blow to my giggling fit Nakul getting shocked with his wish and being asked for two fruits 🤣 🤣 🤣
I think it is too early for romance and Aashu wanted a talli scene so Holi had to be added in July.
Hayee My Maan's wishes are somewhere somewhat coming true. Having office romance, she being contentedly and safely tucked in his arms. 😳 It actually was the compensation for enduring and living through all that silence, avoidance, longing and anguish form such long separation... he was justly, romantically and handsomely rewarded for all his wait and holding onto that hope never once letting go. 😉👏

I loved his control. his inner voices his simple wishes and his care for her. 😳 I loved her simplicity, unrestrained being herself in front of him uninhibited making him know her better... 😳 And finally the duo lived some moments of sweet intimacy, desires out in the open and actually being aware of the effects caused. ☺️
Bhalai ka zamana nahi hai... Maan dear is going to be tadpao'd by Avi 😆
Naureen 👏 👏Too good girl! I love her shayari. and this one was beautiful and deep. Hayee afterall uski nadaani hi toh hai jisse usse seene se lagaye rakhne ka mann hota hai Maan ko aur uski dhadkane tez ho jaati hai 😉

Maan bechara had to endure the torture of not being able to express his desires at the gain of having her with him not avoiding and in such close proximity. J from dhudhwala Shyamlal 😆😆 Indeed loved the combined effect of heart full of desires and love for her, body wanting release for expression of it all and mind filled with stinky Shyamlal... 🤣

Geet's innocence came out all shinning again. 😊 Even though she was speaking all random yet it did speak of her simplicity and naivety. The two fruits and care for him to have the best (Though i hate papayas... 🤢 But i'm glad uske wajah se baat toh aage badhi 😆) The way she was concerned for Shyamlal's wife's dreams and wishes she revealed her own choti choti dreams and wishes and wants in her life and future. 😳
That was the point of the whole shyamlal part ... so she could voice her wishes to him. The fact that he is already doing all that, she is anjaan to it..
I relived all the GHSP days through this update ... Gitt, his care, her sleeping with his hand under her cheek, Aise mat dekho, ye ladki mujhe pagal kar degi, the forehead kiss... I can go on and on 😳

The whole sofa scene with the song, his desires the bliss and the kiss and even tying of her dupata end to his wrist to not let her go was so romantic and dreamy 😳😳 Loved it ❤️ Loved the song selection its soulful and beauty in words. 😳

Bournvita and spicy Pizaa 😆 atrangi combo 😉 But Maan aadat daal do aise sab cheezon ki 🤣
Bournvita was for Sweety... her midnight bhoot toil Bournvita craving while she was studying..
I loved his care for her likes and comfort. The way he made his workers life hell for getting a packet of bournvita 😊 👏 And also how he related her needs for bike ride, being there for her and taking care not by saying it in words but living it for her without her stating it by his each and every action and deed right from the start. 👏👏👏 ❤️ Also how he voices internally how he will be restless after feeling her so close and she will be blissfully unaware of it and asking him what happened ... 😳

Nakul being added in the end was too good 😆 Finally itna saara gusaa jhelna ke baad kuch toh accha mila 🤣

Ending with him dreaming of her moments with him,. and she being the song of his life was 😳😳 I loved it and was craving for more... 😃

Thanks for updating continue soon... me missing my Dev-Naina 😉

🤗

Thanks Onir for being here..🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

Awesome update yaara

haaye Maaneet

Giit totally dazed and keeping Maan engrossed in her bak bak😳
Maan struggling between his desires and Giit's important divulgence on Shyamlal🤣
Iss Shyamlal ki toh😡
Maan ke dreamy romance mein ghussing😆

Geet was so adorable bechara Maan control kaise kare
chalo forehead kiss toh mil gaya
not that we mind cheekwali kiss bhi par Maan to Maan hain
Man of virtues😳
Thats why a darling, hain na
I am surprised that a lot of people wondered about that. I loved that about him in the show. Gentleman tha banda...

Bourvita is the secret of Giit's non stop chattering
Maan ko fruits ke saath yeh bhi try karna chahiye
then we can get more than just 'hmmm and umm' 😆

Glad Geet understood the whole situation and there wasn't much awkwardness between the two😊
Geet relieved that she didn't behave weirdly but little does she know ke Rajdhani kaise daudi🤣
aur na jaane Maan kab tak uss speed se recover kar paayega ya nahi😳

I can so relate to Geet being a bak bak...😆 I was dying to write some dialogues for her. Rajdhani daudegi na... baahon mein thi...Waise it was for Aashu's request to both of us ... Maine kar liya ab teri baari...


Maan in his dreamy world
shocking Nakul😲 bechaare ke dimaag pe Maan aur Dev kitne shots maarenge🤔
Time for some more karela juice😉

One more addition in Maan's priceless collection😳

Superb update
Thanks for updating so soon Avi
It was really a treat
🤗

Song was just too good and so appropriate😃

Thanks Heytal... for all your support..🤗
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update👏
Maaneet part superb😳
Continue soon
Thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update. Loved it.


I am disappointed like Maan that Geet does not remember anything.


Must say, Maan has amazing self control even under the effects of bhang.
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Posted: 12 years ago


exclusively for maan...

he had plomished geet to have 2 fruits a day...

mere taraf se ek...😳

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