The Locket (8), MG FF, thread 9 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 10

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HeytzMaaneet thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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About half and hour more...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nu thrd,both tsrs r osm,waiting 4 both heros in one frame,nd 2nd tsr...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey hi 😃

THAP THAP THAP!!!

Second teaser mast hai 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
few more mins guys...
lots of pics and coloring...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dqno1

few more mins guys...

lots of pics and coloring...😃

Yayy! 😃
Waiting ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sweetyy 😛
Edited by Loquacious_Aash - 12 years ago
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Firstly so sorry to take such a long time to read and comment on this part, even after I bugged you so much for an update. And when You updated I just couldn't read as was badly held up.

Anyways moving to the update, I as always just loved it. It was again like a sweet tingling feeling left behind that I'm still savoring. You could say its like condensed milk that I'm relishing reading the minute and tender moments between the leads. I was in quite an off mood today but when I logged in and read this part my mood did change drastically and thanks to your writing I feel so much better now. 😃

The distance and its effects with their longing was so well worded by you in the starting few parts. Bang on! Juts few words and everything explained so beautifully. 👏👏 The longing and ache he felt with her absence around him just touched me, I guess I'm just loving this Maan more and more for the inherent nature that he possess... one who is just holding onto that thin thread of hope and unbound love no matter how it is reciprocated because now she is a part of his existence whose thoughts are within his entire being so involuntary as that of taking a breath. I love him for his simplicity in his wait and his determination to be there standing for her so that whenever she comes she will find him there for her where she left him as simply as her Maan and not some MSK. ❤️ 😳

That hug that they shared was like an oasis in parched desert quenching their thirst for each other. 😳 Such soothing and calming picture it presented. They way both of them were having their fill of each others presence once again was so sweet and brought a smile to my lips. Actually "Pyaar hua chupke se... ❤️ " they were having their own quota of each others subtle change in persona and appearance after such a long gap. And Indeed it was feeling of being home for these two souls separated by circumstances. 👏

He being happy for her and being content that though she didn't call him but his small unacknowledged effort for her did help her in tiding over her problems for now was so heart touching.

I loved the gradual change you showed in our very own Bambi. An innocent lamb was experiencing feelings of jealousy, possessiveness and anger. Her place not only as a worker but also in the life of her Ma(a)n was causing some insecurity in her. Jhalli! Doesn't realise that he can't live without her and feels and craves for her in everything around him. 😉 Yet the Bambi in her couldn't be suppressed for long as she is inherently sweet and innocent, and that is showed in her thought of letting go if that is what causes him happiness.

She puts up a wall of avoidance between them again as she feels she has lost out on her chance for love and happiness as she pushed him away form her numerous times, not being aware that he bounces back again each time seeing that small gestures and deeds of love for him in her to stand there itself waiting for her. 😳

The holi invitation and her being blissfully unaware of Maan and MSK being the same, shows that Maan has chosen the best for him who knows and feels for him just as Maan and not some MSK. 👏👏

Her crumbling of misconceptions and defenses on revelation of Megha's relation with Maan was good one and well timed.😃 So Megha is his sweet muh boli behn. 😊 (Wonder what's in store here... 😉)

And then that whole holi scene with him and her having that Mahii eyelock and having those moments of pure bliss in silence conveying their unsaid emotions and feelings without the need for words. ❤️ 😳👏 Loved it!!!! She was made to experience being the Woman for her Man... he made her feel new emotion as he has been making her feel other emotions too, be it of friendship, companionship, jealousy, cribbing, anger and then feeling of belonging. 😳

Dev babu ne indirectly madad ki... to break that silence between these two... 😉😆

Indeed piya ke rang mein rangne wali... 😳 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Loved it AND CONTINUE SOON... 😃


Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RES

GEET WAS JEALOUS SEEING MAAN WITH ANOTHER GIRL
BUT THE MOMENT SHE REALIZED THEIR RELATION IT IS LIKE THE WINDOW TO HER EMOTIONS OPENED
SHE COULD ACCEPT THAT SHE FOUND HIM ATTRACTIVE AND WAS JEALOUS AND MISSED HIM
SHE FELT PASSION FOR THE FIRST TIME
MAAN COULD SEE THE SAME FEELINGS ON HER FACE FOR HIM WHICH WAS ON HIS FOR HER

DEV NE BHAANG TO PILA DI - AB KUCH HOGA KI JHOOMTE RAHENGE

Edited by punam2712 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lambi judaai ke baad milne ki rut aayi😳

Maan missing his Geet
Distance makes heart grow fonder and here Geet rules his entire being leave alone his heart😳
His longing, craving for her one glance, waiting endlessly for that one phone call, happy that she scored so well, fear that Geet has left for good but relieved that her Daarji is fine😊

His longing finally paid off and she returns
Poor Maan not sure wether its his dream or real😕😆
But her tripping and him holding her in a near hug puts all his doubts to rest and not to forget his restless heart is finally at peace😳

Geet feeling jealous seeing Maan- Megha comfortable together
A regret that she lost her love clearly indicates that now that the issues back in HP are sorted out by Dr Siddharth she had been thinking about Maan and her somewhere in the back of her mind

But again the current scenario makes the distance seep in
So close yet so far

Geet trying to mask her feelings and making failed attempts to move on
here Maan totally restless and loosing patience with her indifference and questioning self of her feelings😒
Both struggling within the inner war making them all the more confused and lost
😔

Holi!!!!!
Holi ke din dil mil jaate hain
rangon mein rang khil jaate hain😳

So true Holi did do the magic
The festival of colours brought back colours in their life
Geets discovering the truth of Megha- Maan relation
Geet hiding behind the pillar to looking at him to her hearts content
Maan catching her looking his way and then Dev's prank does the magic👍🏼

Fantastic update Avi
so well put down clearing all the aspects
Geet's HP encounter in brief, Maan's quest in her absence, Geet's longing for him, their drifting away yet again and finally their close moments on Holi day😃
The song was superb never thought it could be used in this set up but it seemed perfect yaar😛

Ab next Maaneet part toh Dev-Tara ke baad milega na😕
not that I mind but ab wait kaise hoga

Thanks for updating yaar
Love u
🤗
Edited by heytal - 12 years ago

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