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Posted: 12 years ago
It's painful to realise what has been lost over the years .." Ek mukammal Saath par Ek Adhoori Mohabbat"... This change in Geet was so beautifully done with love and outmost affection from Maan ... He gave her everything even the gift of motherhood ...the most beautiful relation of a child and a mother ... It's so heart warming to see how over these years they have made a complete family but the warmth in my heart from ur updates is less Ji and I I feel the cracks in my hearts more ...

Geet Ek poori Sati thi... Har pehlu jiyaa usney ek Sati warta hone ka Woh bhi maan ke tasveer ke aks main...
Lekin Aaj Geet Ek adhoori Ardhaangani hai ...Maan ne uski zindagi ki har Kami poori ki lekin Geet ko us wajood ka ehsaas Nahi hua joh Maan se shuru hua ek Sati ke roop main aur Aaj Maan se hi Ek Patni ke auhdey se ...

But this is life !! A complete package of compromise, sacrifice, sufferings,patience,trust and Love !! He loves her just as madly and as much as she once knew herself to ..wished to.. and she probably still does ..but that coldness that she had over her heart earlier i guess was replaced with a blinding curtain over her love for him ...and years later ..the very Ansh of their love: their son, has unknowingly made her realise that she has been living with her eyes closed, not giving a single moment of thought to the Man who is her existence just as she is to him ...

Aaah... I probably sound very emotional and hurt over this painful realisation of hers na ... It is but its such a good read Muskaan.. u have yet again shown another shade of life in the same love we all crave for ! I trust u to show that though her eyes were closed over him but not her heart for him ..and if worst case even if it was then I trust u as a writer and I know that somehow u will give the satisfaction to me as a reader of witnessing that complete togetherness of their relation and love ... Just as how u made us from hating this very man at the start to respecting him now for those same morals he always had ans followed !

Thanks for such a great story as usual ..and the chapters are a delight to read after a short gap from u .. hope ur munchkins are doing well Ji ...
I dunno if you will read this comment but I hope u do ..coz I love writing to u at times when u leave me so overwhelemed with emotions from ur writing ...
And yes waiting as always for the next ! 😳 😃 😃
Edited by mishtimohabbat - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Painful realization on Geet's part.
I do not want her to wallow more in her self-pity, guilt, shame, etc. that she is taking up more energy of Maan's.
I want her to be accountable for her actions and with these new realizations - act upon them...instead of wallowing up in her pain.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the way you describe maaneet their nature ..ohh so lost geet .
But looks like finally romance on way
waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
geet is so lost
sooner or later maan will come to know what is bothering her
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the beautiful update dear ...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
guilty feeling
Poor Geet

I hope they talk now
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Posted: 12 years ago
It is awesome
It seems time has rotated like there was a time Maan is in guilt
N trying to do things right now the vice versa
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update!!!!

So much of realization on what all she had missed... more that that the fact thats killing her is that how she missed it... In all these years she never seemed to think beyond dev.. not that she did it intentionally, but still she did it...

Every event was conspiring to drown her in a heart aching pool of reality. She didn't know what he eats, what he wears, what does she know? She questioned herself.

. She didnt know anything about him while he knew the silliest of thing about her... She is confused as to why she was so ignorant towards him and the guilt is eating her.. she is so lost in the reality of the years that had passed with him beside and her not recognizing it...

And now when she wants to do things for him, but she is too lost.. and to add on, when she tries to do something for him, she finds out more things that she has left unnoticed about him in these years...

This update was just awesome... everywhere she turns and tries, there is something that gives her a reality check... wonder how she would actually come out of it and cherish their togetherness that they had lost all these years...

Edited by Shruthe - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks to her son, Geet has started to realise how she has ignored the most precious relation of her life. She was busy in her own world, her son was her top most priority & her husband was her son's father only so after the realisation comes the acceptance that he is not the father of her kid but her life also.

lt was beautiful😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor geet...she realised her mistake, not giving full attention to her husbadn, neglecting his small small needs all these year and now trying very hard to do those things for him but failed all the time...and she came to know how much she missed doing things for him and how much he was habitual to her ignorance...me loving geet trying and maan again understanding her...now I want maan come to know her guilt and helping her in her mission...ofcource with much passion and romance

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