~sati~ maaneet THREAD 9 last pt pg95 jul19

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

this was such a beautiful part di...
she is slowly realizing what she had missed all thee years, drowned in a pool of self pain and pity. she had dev for her.. to distract her from all the worries while he had nothing but her to watch all the time and still hide his pain.

and so tht she is realizing, she is feeling a lot suffocated...guilty to have not seen her husband actually!!!! she had cherished him so much in her heart in those 4 years but she couldn't cherish him in the last 18 years.
she being so different is refinitely shocking to him because he had learned to compromise and live with it, probably he doesnt even feel the pain now.
am so liking this part now...
cant wait for t next
continue super soon diii

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

nice update
omggg the lines u used them to define as rock and water were sooo wonderful muskan

he always was there with her like shadow nd she was with him tooo
but she never knew about his feelings, his pain, what he eat, what he wears😕😕😕😕😭😭😭😭

ohhh i love the way she is trying to do now what she never did before but
poor her she is failing in each step
like burned paranthas, then tie😕😕😕😕😕

ohhh it's sooo nicely written part muskaan
maan's confusion about her behaviour and her attempts to make up the lost

waiting for next update

wonder what will happen next

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Cyberlife

@Cyberlife

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

This was so EMOTIONAL and heart wrenching !!!!! I found myself silently crying -- especially after reading the last and this episode. 18 years is a long time for a man to live in an emotional "vanvaas".

He has paid more than his share of dues for all that happened years ago. I hope, in Maan's case, "prayashchit ka phaal meetha ho" and his wife pours all the love and color that has been missing from his life and they become true soul mates.

You are an incredible write with a bottomless pit of deeply moving, passionate and touching stories and feelings that one can never get tired of. With each update, you create a craving and restlessness for the next and next update. Hats off to you and your writing skills.

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Ramykrish

@Ramykrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

So realistic presentation of Geet's condition.But it is natural to behave like that way leaving

alone Geet's past experiences with Maan,when we start caring for our kids sometimes we forget the world and people around us.Like even wishing Birthday's and wedding anniv of our kith and kin.That is the undue attactment we posses towards our child.I think that way Geet has done things for Dev like a normal typical Mother.So much Guilt,poor Geet,hope she comes out of it.But it is high time she gives the same attention on her poor hubby who is entirely penancing for her love and attention.

Edited by Ramykrish - 12 years ago

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Geet yaar this is too much.Is se jyada to hume apne pet ke baare me pata hota hai

Koi galati itni badi nahin hoti ki zindgi har uske liye repent karna pade

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

till today wecseen.maan guilt
nw seeing geet
whn they live happily without any guilt

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Brilliant part.
Loved how u described their relationship. Water and rock. 👏
Poor geet she is slowly discovering that she knows nothing about maan.
She doesnt even remember him taking dev for the first time in his arms, ouch that hurts. 😕
Cant wait for more. 😳

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soniaz121

@soniaz121

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

love the update so much geet realization of their relation is very nicely described she has unknowingly made her life unfill with the love she has from maan who was wrong at some time but then he was always there for her but she never cherish his presence in her life waiting to see the love now geet show towards maan bye tc