MG FF : THE DIVINE FLOWER~~ PART 18 :pg128: sept 30th

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#661

oh no yeh kya ho gaya...pls dont make her embarassed this tym...haaate this sasha😡 cant she leave her alone atleast in one story...gadhi...all are behind poor geet...poor geet...would love to read more of the past...one more update plss😊😊

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#662

nice part😊
past wala part was too good😉
when pari knows maan doesn't love her why she is crying looking at maaneet pics😕
when dadi is telling about pari..he is thinking of geet😃
what is sasha upto😡
hope you will be regular now in your updates😆

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#663

Amazing past ...geet n google option lol

ufff sasha arghhh

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#664

awesome part

loved it

crazy geet she googled to know how to behave after kiss...rofl she is such a cutie and antic piece...maan asked her come to his bedroom after everyone gone to sleep geet was in shock with his words...

maan wanted to stay away from geet...he was thinking that what he did with geet was not rite...

oh that evil sasha planned to geet lose her job...

eagerly waiting for the next part

continue soon

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Bindu sharma

@-indu-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#665

geet ka haal be haal hogaya hai...kiss ke baareme soch ke...😆

aur madam ne meera se poocha...🤣

aur meera ka doggy love...sorry kiss🤣

aur google bhi kiya...jai ho google baba ki...

question galat tha...how to respond after a kiss...seriously kuch nahi ho sakta geet ka.

second answer was awesome...'go for a second kiss'🤣

sherni banke maan ka saamna karne gayi aur chooha bangayi...(mujhe geet ka scene yaad aagaya...thank you, i request u to add the dialog where geet asks maan aapko darlagta hai...)

Present...😡

Maaneet pic delhi pohunch gaye...😲

yeh ramona chahti kya hai...usse uska collection pe dhyaan dena chaiye...naki kisi ke life par...i have a doubt.itni adi business aise hi kahda kiya hai kya...😡

sach kehte hain...no ethics in business

i'm ignoring maan part...i' dont want to waste my energy in bashing maan😉😆

sasha aur tasha ne plan toh banaya...lekin kya kaamya hoga...

i'm sure Geet will not come in the dress ramona has sent...if she comes i'm gonna kill u...isse dhamki mat samjh na...mein poori tayari mein hoon ...🤣

nice update...a big hug to. u... and belated onam wishes.😃

advanced thank you for the PM

Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago

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Bindu sharma

@-indu-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#666

Originally posted by: madhubala123

i'm waitin 😃

commented😉

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Bindu sharma

@-indu-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#667

ek hi negative point soojh raha hai...irregular updates...😉

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Pihu

@Parimishty

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#668

nyc update..
Past was sooo blissful..
Thank god Maan ab aur pareshan nai karega geet ko..
N Sasha-Tasha..😡
Lets hope for the best..

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maanshi

@maanshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#669

awesome 👏update

past was lovely

geet asked meera about kiss n then googled ... hahaha
maan words left geet stunned n blushed

present
maan thinking about his old geet ... good
dadi saw maaneet pics in news paper ...
maan decided to keep distance from geet ... also nice

ohhh devil shasa want embrace geet ...hell nooo

waiting for past truth ... n maan come to know that

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#670

first of all i dont like very short update after so much wait
about dress i didnt understand what sasha is planning against geet?
third thing maan specialy come here to show dadi geet is not affecting him
he can remain aloof from her even he will see her,but here thing happen is oposite he is affected by her and if he had truly loved her and know her since childhood he could have given at least one chance to her to explain
herself but he never give her chance and one doubt took over all the good thing of her that he even didnt try to know how is she after his act to humiliate her is he?inspite now he is running like coward from his feeling though he got marry again but atleast he have tried not to humiliate her more by shifting show stoppers dress to maid's dress.
but on the whole i love this ff and ur writing so now please update soon.