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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 6


Mohan whole body had been kept on fire he felt like same. He could not react anything else but to express his shock in silent way. He tightened hold around her and hid her between his arms. He did not want to show a bit body of her to this world, any chance to hurt his little princess anymore.

"Who told you this Geet!!!'' he asked. He had to control his inner turmoil. Already she had been scared experiencing his anger in morning. He had to be calm now.

Geet moved her head little and looked him. "That Rajji was saying that Maan would never come back. I am not wearing my necklace. Her aunty also doesn't wear necklace and she said her husband has gone to God place. Baba Maan has gone for function na, he would come back an Baba.. Bolo Na Baba!!'' She was asking holding Mohan chin innocently, was waiting for her answer but mohan had no answer. What could he say? Neither could he tell truth that Maan would never come back. He has gone very far from here and nor could say lie. He couldn't give Geet fake hope about Maan comeback. He could not make Geet understand the situation she was very small. His lips were sealed with no words inside.

"Who is she Geet?'' He tried to divert the topic.

Geet looked where Mohan had pointed, "She is Panna, Baba. She is my friend'' Geet said smiling, rubbing her red itching eyes.

Panna Said Namaste jointing her hand.

"Khush Raho Beta. So are you in same class with Geet?''

Panna said yes.

"Geet, you didn't tell me about her, why? Did you give her toffee?'''' He kept Geet down on floor.

"Wo Baba I had forgotten to tell you. Haan I had given but you know Baba, she dint gift me anything'' She complained cutely. She had forgotten the reason why she had come here. Panna came running to Mohan and defended herself,

"No uncle, I didn't know today her birthday, otherwise I sure would have brought something''

"Really Panna?? What would you have given me?'' Geet asked excitedly.

"Don't know, I will ask Papa''

Mohan smiled hearing their innocent baby convo. He wish if Geet life could change, forgetting everything. His chain of thought broken with Panna shouted,

"Papa!!''

And next second Mohan saw Panna was in Mr. Vyas arms. He looked them confused.

Mr. Vyas asked Panna how she was here, then his eyes fell on little Geet, wearing a frilled pink frock, reached till her knees, she was looking not less than a fairy child.

"Who is that angle?''

He put Panna down and asked looking to Geet. Geet felt shy and hid behind Mohan.

"Papa she is Geet, my friend, today's her birthday'' Panna introduced her.

"She is my daughter sir'' Mohan said, tried to bring Geet front but she was going more back smiling.

"Ohoo .. so today's her birthday. Come here Beta!!''

But she didn't come out.

"Panna did you gift her anything Beta?''

Panna nodded no. Vyas picked out some money from his wallet and advanced to Geet. Mohan though tried to refuse but Vyas did not hear and kept money in Geet hand forcefully.

"Buy whatever you like Geet, okay''

Now Geet came out and nodded. She looked Mohan who also nodded and she runs to Panna and showed her money.

"Come Panna we would eat Golgappa!!'

Panna asked for permission from Vyas and after his acceptance both kids hastened out giggling.

"Your daughter is very cute Mohan'' Vyas exclaimed when Geet came inside running and tugged Mohan hand in hurry.

"Baba but you didn't tell me, I'm not widow na!!''

"Widow!!!!'' Vyas mouth left opened hearing the harsh word from Geet mouth. Mohan sensed his confusion. He said "no' to Geet "No you're not Beta'' And Geet happily run away out with Panna, leaving her father trapped among questioning eyes of his boss.

"What did she say Mohan?'' Vyas was still in utter shock.

"Nothing sir, she had heard this word somewhere else and was asking me about it'' He answered hesitatingly but Vyas was thinking something else. He had already heard a strange child marriage story the very after coming in this village.

"Is it same Geet?'' His mind questioned. After seeing Mohan hesitation and worried face his doubt started struggling to become true but how he could have been sure that this was same Geet. He forced Mohan to tell truth.

"Mohan you can trust me. Perhaps I can help you''

Mohan knew this matter could not have been kept hidden for long from Vyas and so he decided to tell him everything himself before he hear it from outsiders. Anyway he had seen Vyas kindness and he knew he would not make fun of his condition. With heavy heart he started telling what had happened.

Flashback

One and half month before,

One evening again Mohan met Alka in temple. Everyone was gathered there for evening prayer. Geet was playing with her friends hide and seek and was so engrossed in her play that did not know that one small pair of eyes were staring her from far.

Maan was standing holding his mother Pallu and watching children play but more his eyes were following Geet's every movement. She was the only kid whom he used to know in this village. Mohindar was making Alka meet with few people when he saw Maan.

"Maan Beta, why don't you play with them?' Mohan somewhere used to think about this silent child, he had soft corner for Maan. Alka had told that after his father death, he became like this. Before he used to play with his father, he was same like other children but now, he changed totally. She tried hard to make him recover from his father death shock but Maan was going drown in his aloofness. Alka also wanted Maan to mingle with them but Maan did not show any interest.

Maan was continually watching Geet antics. Her smile, her laugh when she used to catch someone and her pout when she was being caught. Her jump when no one could able to find her and her stamping of foot, when she did not want to be seeker. Her every act started pulling him out from his shell slowly. Did not know when he started smiling but no elder noticed it.

It was Geet turn to hide when suddenly Aarti started in temple with loud bell sound. All started gathering at one place and started singing prayer song along with clapping. Songs started playing on loud speakers also. Geet, who was hiding behind a big mango tree, she also tried to come out when two-three dogs started barking due to loud sound and she got scared. She started crying but no one could hear her sound. She was hell scared. Though dogs were stood little far but still Geet could not gather courage to escape and her cry started increase along with crowd sound. Maan noticed her trouble. He had been watching her cry. He tugged Alka saree to tell her but she did not notice. He looked for Mohan but Mohan was missing in crowd and finally he saw that Geet hit a dog with a stone and he started barking on her more dangerously. Maan runs to rescue her, himself.

Geet stopped crying when saw Maan.

Maan picked up few sticks and started throwing on dogs from little far and succeeded to reach to Geet but by this act dogs became more dangerous. They started scaring both children with their bark when Alka turned to find where Maan is and saw children in danger. She screamed and gained attention of people and with help of them, she rescued both children. In fear Geet was crying loud and was holding Maan hand tight that after escaping also she did not leave him. Mohan also came running and tried to take Geet in arms but she was not ready to leave Maan hand and was crying bitterly. Failing Alka made Maan and Geet sat on a bench and Mohan went to bring water and gave to Geet. She drank it still sobbing, holding Maan hand. She was shivering in fear.

"Mohan she is so scared, I think it would be good if she plays with Maan for some time'' Alka suggested.

Severely Mohan tried to take her home but Geet was not ready to leave Maan. She had fear that Mohan again leave her and go. Finally Mohan had to agree and along with Alka, she also went to Haveli to play with Maan.

Precap: Past Continues.. Geet makes Maan sketches 😆


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
main yahaan bhi first aayi...

with the last precap, i had thought, we will get to know the truth in this part... but yahaa bhi tumne latka diya... never mind... agla update jaldi de dena...

from the present part, i loved how geets dad was trying his best to sheld geet from every sorrow...

from the past, chota hai tho kya hua, maan protected geet ... cho cuteee...

will be waiting for the next...

Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

😊

Awesome...

Love it dear..

Ye kya chakkar hai... 😲

Geet ki shadi and now widow..? No...

uff.. kab past clear hoga...

Where is Maan..?😕

Waiting eagerly...
Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update waiting for maan entry in prsent
precap interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
blowing kisses for u Minnniii


i am jsut loving it ..
i feel like watching MAANEET real :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
where is maan
he wont come back for her ever
has he forgotten her
wonder if we will get to know his side of the story too
if not now maybe later now
how did they end up married i wonder
but what pains me is their separation
will they see one another again
awww maan was coming out of his shell due to geet
but what about geet now
who will help her out
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its interesting to know the past.So Maan became a loner after his father's death.And after meeting Geet he felt connected with her.And then he tried to save fm d dogs that too all by himself.Thank God that SD saw them in time and saved them.Now Geet is not ready to leave Maan.

Gr8 going buddy.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update

geet n mohan talk was fab
love panna n geet cuteness

maan like geet ... nice

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Posted: 11 years ago
awsum yaar waiting for complete past n maan arival
geet question made shiver i read all six part amazing cant wait thanksss for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Feel so bad for geet she have to bear so much at such a young age! So she have help maan get out of his shell with her sweet and cute behaviour! waiting for the past revelation to know how the wedding happen!
WOuld like to know maan point of view also! is he affected by all this? and dadima wats her reaction?

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