Mg ss - My naughty bride @completed

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Ishita Irani

@IshitaIrani

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#451

perfect ending di😛

waiting for ur new stories😉

pls update ur old ones😭

i want waqt ka ye faisala upodate pls update do na😭😭😭

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#452

haii DQ

nice gng red at one go maaneet nok jok was soo funny and our naughty doll haha poor maan kaha fas gaya re

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#453

Oh...!! Geet's cravings during her pregnancy.. bechara Maan.. raat ko sone bhi nahi diya.. Becoz of bad dream he has shifted his room downstaisr... So baby boy Aman.. lil Maan..😳 Complete Happy Maneet family...
OMG!! Secial scene. Maneet talking abt Bulbul & her stories.. 😆 Dekh bulbul ab naughty groom likhane ki hint di Geet ne..😉 Kep writing.. Loved this short & sweet story.😃

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#454

this geet is really kid bahut cute and naughty haha

and maan afraid for her hand made food poor he geet was soo sweet re

and maan's dad god he is soo cool dont have any issue haha pagal ki ghar bangaya ye haha totally soo funny story yaar

and yeah geet at office haha i expected geet to monify him but ye tho romance ke sath padi hai

maan love for her was really well written when he seea her tears in her eyes one scene was enough to understand all things

it was very nice to see you writing that much fynny update and this story was too funny

its me only

with love '

"Twilight sparkle"

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sriif

@sriif

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#455

simply superb 🤣

no words to express

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#456

awesome

loved it

aman loved the name

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kashtilover

@kashtilover

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#457

amazing yaar
Loved the entire story
Special scene awsme :)
Congrtz dr for a lovely ss

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vandana73

@vandana73

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#458

That was so amazing

A naughty bride indeed was very naughty and maan to ser pe sawa ser !!!

What i loved the most was your special scene incorporating yourself in it

trust me i have never read anything like that and i do not believe any writer has even thought of it

so bravo and keep up the good work

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#459

hi thanks 4 da pm bt read n commented! Awesum SS! Loved it! Esp special scene! 👏

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#460

Special scene mast tha.
Superb ending yaar. Lovely ff.

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