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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi babie nd kiddoo,hw r u both..?Get Well Soon


Hyeee itna sexy get well soon ...😳

Hello Lily Dear...🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago



Hello Lakshu , Priya and Sona...
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For Part -- 47


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



Hello Friend! Huggies!

We r fine now...
Thanks for yr wishes dear.
Lots of love ...




hiii babbieee .. u back



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites




hiii babbieee .. u back




Where were u...???
Kab se wait ker rahi hoon.

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The Downpour... Part 48


After the peaceful night for Maan he woke up with fresh mood and the very first though appeared in his mind was of Geet. He smiled, felt delight to get her near, in his own home, just few steps away! He could not have wished for more.

He did his routine exercise and was coming back when thought to have a glimpse of Geet, he turned in direction of her room and stopped when saw door was closed. He raised hand to knock on but stopped thinking might it wouldn't look good, waking her up in early morning. He pressed door slightly and surprisingly, found it was already opened.

"Geet!' he softly whispered and peeped in. room was empty and not even her belongings were there.

"Where she gone?'' He searched around but she was nowhere.

"Was she really here or It was just a dream?'' he was confused, was stood there thinking when his head servant Nakul was passing from there and he saw Maan. Nakul got confused too seeing his master making weird face and he nervously went to him and poked his shoulder, making Maan jump all of sudden.

"Maan sir what happened, what are you thinking?''

Maan straightened up instantly totally changing his expression from puzzled into normal.

"Um.. Nothing Nakul, nothing happened'

Nakul nodded head and started to go when Maan stopped him. He wanted to be sure did he see dream or really someone was there yesterday.

"Um.. Nakul''

"Ji Maan sir''

"How to ask!' He was confused. He couldn't take Geet name openly otherwise this Dadi chamcha would definitely babbled out everything in front of her. So he decided to ask indirectly.

"Nakul, why this room is so untidy? Look at the bed sheet, it's so messy like someone had used it recent. How can you be so careless!!' He said and waited for his reply, impatiently.

Nakul shocked, from when Maan started taking interest in mansion households, it always used to have Dadimaa department. He stumbled with words.

"Actually Maan sir, Geet madam has just shifted in outhouse from here that's why it looking like little messy. You don't worry sir servant would be coming to arrange everything'

"O ho!! So I was not dreaming her and she is in outhouse !!'' His face started glowing within seconds.

"Hmm thik hai!!'' Saying he left in his room to freshen up.

##

"Geet you liked everything na Beta!! Anything if you need just call me or any servant here. You don't need to hesitate okay!!'

Maan was coming down and found Dadi talking Geet over phone. She was indeed very happy and it made Maan feel proud that he was able to give happiness to his grandmother and so he had feel of achievement for Geet, having her in his life.

Dadi kept the phone down when saw Maan was standing at front. Seeing his face she understood he wanted to say something and she guessed it was related to Geet.

"Whom you were talking with Dadi?'' Maan asked, stood with attitude, with crossing arms poses.

Now she understood that she was to see the real MSK for hiding things from him.

"No one Maan''

He glared her.

"Ohh wo.. I was talking with our new guest''

"Hmm!! And why didn't you tell me that 'Our Guest' is coming to stay here with us'

'' Why Beta, is something happened?? Did she trouble you'' Dadi smirked.

"I didn't say it but at least I should have knowledge about who is coming in my home' He spoke.

'So at least I could have differentiate between my dream and reality'' He thought while recalling last night moments but hide his smile.

"Ohoo Bacchu.. Your home!! Don't worry very soon it will be someone else's also'' SD self talked smirking.

"I'm sorry Beta, I should not have called her for staying here without asking you'' SD made poor face. '' You don't need to be worry Beta, I'll go and tell her she can't stay here anymore because you didn't like it'

She acted to call in outhouse and dialled number when Maan stopped her instantly and kept receiver down. SD stared him strangely.

"Wo.. When now you have already given her permission to live here, let it be remain. But next time remember me to tell before something you do like this Dadima''

He knew he was caught by her so wanted to escape from her tease. He turned back to leave.

"Next time you would have lost your authority to take decisions Maan Beta!! Geet will be here to share your every decision along with us!!!'' SD spoke loud, smirking and saw his foot step stopped at place. She chuckled.

Maan could not hide more as he knew it had no use! He turned back and faced Dadi. He was smiling. He came and hugged her showing his happiness,

"Thanks Dadima''

SD was so happy today that it wanted to come out in form of blessing for her children. She caressed his hair dearly, whispered softly,

"I like her Maan, she is nice girl'

Maan looked her and nodded. "Me too''.

He kissed her forehead "Yes she is nice but not more than you Dadima''

"Maska laga rahe hai aap hume''

He chuckled nodded no.

"Al right, now you should go and help her to arrange in her new home' She winked. Maan was really shocked to see this side of her grandmother. He shook head in amazement and left.

##

Geet was struggling with her luggage. She prepared wardrobe and then went in kitchen to have a glimpse and was shocked to see its beauty. It was small yet wonderful place in a corner and was filled with each and every possible thing, which could be used in cooking. She was jumping in joy to have a place like this, could not explain her excitement in words. She wanted to share her feeling to someone and called her mother. She started telling her everything about the place.

Her voice was shaking due to excitement. In her excitement she didn't realize that someone was listening her every word with utmost engrossment and was capturing her every moves, in his eyes.

Maan was looking a new child in Geet which she had kept hidden till now. He wanted to capture this moment for ever and started to record in his phone. Her happy dance, her twirling and jumps in excitement, her twisting curls in fingers and her sweet talks, everything was just wonderful to be seen again and again. Finally her call ended.

"Geet, turn little right, your face is not coming in screen properly'' Maan spoke loud intentionally.

And then she found Maan there and her eyes widen in shock, when saw he was making her video!!!

"Maan what are you doing???''

He smirked, but did not stop recording. Geet was extremely embarrassed and angrier than ever. She runs to him shouting,

"Maan please give it to me!!!''

He also jumped back and runs from there, raising his hand high so she could not have reached to phone.

"Maan please delete my video!!!'' She jumped on him, tried to get hold of phone but he was making it tough, raising hand up more and more. She did not notice how she was clinging to him and Maan was clutching her waist with one hand, tugging her nearer. He could feel the touch of her body over him, and was losing his sense over her intimacy. Her innocent fragrance was driving him crazy. Geet attention was on phone but Maan was staring her only without even getting a blink of eyes.

Finally she got tired. She moved back and turned face feeling really displeasure, when Maan comes from back and brought phone in front of her face but she turned face aside in anger.

"Look once Geet' He requested. Geet made face and looked in screen and found it was her beautiful smiling pic. Pic was so wonderful that she herself couldn't believe it was her's. She smiled and turned to him.

"It's beautiful Maan!!'' She was very happy.

"Not more than my real Geet'', he caressed her face lovingly that made her bow down lashes in gratitude.

She liked 'My Geet' and her heart filled with inexperienced pleasure which never had felt before. She rested face on his heart and slipped hand around his waist, hugged him. Maan took her in his embrace firmly, wishing that if he could stop the time right there.


Precap : His lips were fondling over her smooth face, was repeating same question again and again which her mind was collecting haphazardly. Somehow she nodded in yes.


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Posted: 12 years ago

😊
Me 1st...🥳
Mouke pe Chouka...








Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome so sweet and nice part both love each other like any thing love it thx dear for update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Where were u...???
Kab se wait ker rahi hoon.



sryy mai updt dene gayi thi

pata hai aaj kal koi nahi aata 😭


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