MG-OneShot ~Tumse.. Aae Humsafar..~ Updated.. on pg-60/ Jan2. - Page 29

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohh ji kab milega update😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

Ohh ji kab milega update😳

life is quite messed up right now..so am not in a position to write anything..even i dont know whn i'll be able to update next..am really sorry..dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shonameet

life is quite messed up right now..so am not in a position to write anything..even i dont know whn i'll be able to update next..am really sorry..dear.

aww...koi ni..
take ur time...will wait😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Iss kadar..
Pyaar hai..
Tumse..
Aae..
Humsafar..
Ab toh jeee..
Te hai hum..
Bas tumhen..
Dekh kar..
Tumhari her adaa..
Tumhari her nazar..
Ye kya kehne lagi..
Tumhen hai..
Kya khabar..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Continued here:


They heard the announcment of the arrival of mumbai's flight! His heartbeats rosed to a different level. He closed his eyes to clam his heart & himself. Then started searching for her in the crowd. And finally he saw her..and just kept looking at her..dressed in a white anarkali..looking ever so beautiful.. She too was looking for them..and before he could call her..she spoted him and there eyes met!
The world stoped for them...& they were lost in eachother!

Iss kadar.. pyaar hai..
Tumse.. Aae.. Humsafar..


He has waited for this moment so much when she will be in front of him. How many times he had imagined this particular moment in last few days. But now..as she was actually there in front of him in real..Only now did he realised that how much he has been longing for her! How much he wanted her to be here.
He suddenly felt a rush of emotions ..that it was hard to control. His happiness & contentment on having her there, was clearly visible in his eyes. His lips curved slightly as he witnessed his own emotions reflacting in those brown hazels. She noticed that curve of his lips and her lashes diped for a second breaking the eye contact..and a shy smile appeared on her anglic face which made his heart to flutter.
These two souls were so much lost in their own little world..that they almost forgot that there were two more people also with them.
Their revive broke with annie's excited voice as she welcomed geet & naina. They broke the eyelock instantly and looked away..trying to control themselves.
After that both avoided looking at eachother directly as they greeted their respective sister-inlaws.. But they were unable to stop that smile which kept lingering on their lips, showing their inner happiness, no metter how hard they tried to conseal it.
Exchanging inicial greetings they moved out..with annie & naina walking ahead.. Geet tried to take the laugage trolly but looked up startled when she felt the accidental touch of his hand as he too held the handle at the sametime. Both hearts skiped a beat. He gesture her through his eyes that he will take care of that and she nodded moving her hand back slowly. Her cheeks were flushed and he was amused to see that.. as he couldnt helped compairing this shy-shy geet with the one who doesnt leave any chance of teasing him during their phone & sms chats! It seems that both are two totally different personalities. They would have been lost in eachother once again but unfortunatly were disturbed again by annie.. "arre bhabhi..jaldi chaliye..ghar pe sab aapka wait kar rahe hai.." ..she dragged geet with her..and winked at maan naughtly.. who shooked his head at her as his sweet lil-sis can be so annoying sometimes.

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Hello guys..
Wish u all a very "Happy New Year" 🥳😊
I know the update is really short..but what to do..was writing this one after so long...it was difficult to write even this much...but i'll be back with my usual updates really soon. Till then read it and do tell me hows it.
Lots of Love..
-Shona..😊

Edited by Shonameet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Happy new year.
awesome upd.
loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
such beautiful update...
spell bounded... 😳
loved it❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi dear! Happy New Year! Fab update! Well written! Annie interrupted Maaneet's romantic eye lock! N teased Maan! Poor Maaneet! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
kuch kuch hota hai...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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