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awww this is the best n complete story of urs aishu which i have read
i have no words to describe
n in the end when the ss ended i had tears not bcoz geet left maan but bcoz the story ended
the first part where he sees her dancing n cleaning her stick n the way he was awed by her was sooo magical
then after many years he forgot her n her name but still she existed in some part of his mind n was reminded when he remembered hoshiyarpur
first i thought when his family n all were there this must be a story with all the characters alive n something
n i tell u when i read 2 part n u described that he was pulled towards the gazebo i just remembered aaja nachle movie... the auditorium was what came in my mind n in the next part u played the song o re piya
i really loved the mysterious feel the first few updates had when maan tried to see geet's face but he could never see them n the way he was drawn n lost in her music at the show
their marriage was fixed n he didnt even know her except that she played beautiful flute n her name was geet
i really loved how maan's character was written he knew he would never be able to give time to his marriage n his wife n so didnt want to get married but fate had different plans n his marriage was fixed
the backward gave me a feel of korean n japanese movies where their historic gods n few stories have the goddess or the god this mysterious feel to them n also how close to nature they are
n i really like 1 thing in this ss the stars they were like geet's friends n understood each act of her
loved how geet n maan thought about each other after their marriage was fixed n they accepted each other without knowing each other as well
the engagement party was really different n nice
the mystery continued but still they knew who the other was n the dancing was awesome
the submission geet had n maan's determination not to leave her was awesome
n when she saw maan worried she felt something was really long n a fear gripping her that was indication of something to change in their life
i really loved the lines geet said people come into our lives to go away... n then when she said i will be waiting for u that was just awww
life throws surprises at us when we expect them the least n the same happened with maan... he lost his family in a blink of an eye n then there was no geet or anyone to stand with him or hold him when he was too weak... that made him cold n dead at heart
n then 5 months later entered geet again as sunshine in his life
at first he tried to hurt her bcoz he knew she may go away as well n he didnt have it in him to get hurt once again...
but geet never felt the hurt... she always smiled n let him remove his anger
loved the night scene where maan sees geet for the first time... she brings the diya close to her face n he looks at her face for the first time that reminded me of devdas
after getting a face to his the image of his love maan couldnt stay as if he didnt care...
felt really bad when he shouted on geet when she told him to accompany her for shopping
the way he felt empty when geet didnt come to serve him his dinner n when she didnt play her flute to sooth his heart n help him sleep peacefully n the words geet told him that reassured him that she had come for him
the next morning was like a new morning in maan's life... the way he was staring at geet shamelessly n then he told her to get ready in the evening to go for shopping but her insisting him that he would go with her
later him hugging her n geet understanding his vulnerable state n holding him was really awww
then the loved filled moments came n along with it came the rumors n gossips which they didnt care but till when will anyone be immune to them... when people start pointing at their character it hurts
n if u see ur loved one look at u in disgust n hurt that hurts the most... maan being obivious to all these but when he sees it in the tv channel n understands why geet was so sorrowful the prev night
when he tries to handle the situation hears something really painful that geet's dad tells to her... which pushes him to the edge
his proposal n geet's acceptance n their marriage was awesomely written specially the part where rain comes to celebrate their wedding
the happiness geet feels n the way she goes to make the day even more special shows her love for maan even though she hadnt ever told him that she loved him...
after few months geet disappearing n maan getting angry on the flute n throwing it away... then finding geet again n geet giving him her saneyeeka... n also giving her saneyeeka her place in his life...
he slowly starts getting dependent on saneyeeka but geet doesnt tell anything for it n then their first wedding anniversary...
she does all the things which he wanted n i felt that this was good bye from her side n indeed it was
the way u wrote it was realllyyy beautiful n the final words she told maan before leaving n she left her saneyeeka as well with him
the last update was more like a filler where maan fnally finds that geet has gone away n then he realized the meaning of all her words which she used to tell before
maan trying to find her but doesnt n finally after a year geet is declared dead by the police n soon even mohinder passes away...
i really loved maan's last dialogue that geet is still here somewhere n she will come back as she has left her saneyeeka with him...
a really beautiful incomplete story n a very beautiful ending...
n this story many times reminded me of the japanese story of the stork who came back as a lady to return the favor of help a guy had done by saving her life... n geet's words were also like them...
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
Veer Hanuman
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