Iss Saneyeeka ki dhoon adhuri reh gayi,
She left a lingering ache behind.
Yet the melody of the story was just as beautiful.
I felt every emotion the characters went through while reading this story.
His pain just got to me and I couldn't help but wonder however was heever going to come out of it.
And then she came.
The part when he hears the flute and goes looking for her and finds her on the lawn, that moment for me was the whole gist of the story.
It was beautiful, and ethereal and I felt that not Geet but hope had finally come into his life.
The way she gave and gave of herself, and drew him out of his shell made me awed at your ability to weave magic with your words.
The Geet of this story was surreal. It was as if she was not even there. She was like a "Mmidsummer night's dream" The fact that you did not share her side of the events made it more so.
Ritzy's epilogue rounded up the ends very nicely. We did not really get answers, however we did get the hope of a happy ending.
Aand Saneeyeka for me was all about hope.
Sanayeeka reminds me of a quote that I think is perfect for this story.
Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for a while, leave footprints on our hearts, and we are never, ever the same"
Extremely sorry for the late, late late comment but I had never forgotten this story and was waiting to come back and finish it.
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