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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all the parts
awesome story loved it
plz update soon
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Waqt Ka Ye Fasilala

chapter 24

Important note

Many readers is not bothering to comment well fine, I will see this some day after it will shift FF in my blog and give link only regular and loyal readers thanks and no need to comment just for sake and crush me, comment if your heart want to only and yes one word commenter no need for this as its hurt me more. and i will not say this every time as seriously i got enough comment and like, will only write from now on for myself and my regular reader no matter if they are 1 or 300 and already i am mission on cleaning and i delete many already, thanks to bear this note

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Maan checked her doll house by removing roof of the doll house, his eye widen to see all full house is filled with random objects like newspaper, bangles, tie, specs, spoons etc.

So he caught km thief who is 9 month old and enjoying her new game mission filled her doll house with random shinning objects and made other life hell.

"Dadi!!! Km mai chor nahi chorni hai vo bhi aadhe (half) foot ki" maan shouted from near stairs only so all can come here and see themselves their ladli new naughtiness.

All saw each other in little bit shock and then cracked up, from morning all are busy to finding every stealing things that they not even noticed what is mansi doing, only they knew, she is happily playing in her own self but here this little pie is always up to something now meera knew this will become mansi daily routine as she learned one more mischievous, god knows from where she got such unique ideas.



Maan went stand between mansi ways who now quietly moving with computer pen drive, she got it from table. When mansi saw maan standing, she shrieked with a smile to see her dadaa than again continue to take step to her doll house but maan lifted her in air and took in main hall with proof as pen drive is still in her small chubby hand.

"Lol!!!! Dadi here is your chor and just make your heart strong before you see your specs again" maan chuckled and kiss mansi with his all might.

Maansi made face and bend in his arms trying to tell him to left her on ground again as he is disturbed her in mid of the game.

Yash eye widen to see his today presentation pen drive in mansi hand, he took slow steps and with leopard speed held maansi hand to take pen drive but maansi is not ready to give up on her new toy and starts to cry her lung out and made yash to left her hand in reflex and she is annoyed to throw pen drive down and yash face is worth watching.

"Maansi!!! What is this? You become so naughty" maan glared maansi and scold her which made her eye leaked to see his dadaa angry expression and loud voice.

All felt bad to see maan scold maansi as she is their heart beat and just starts to walk so naughtiness is also will come as per her age.

But one pair of eye spitting fire to see maan again scold small baby, if yash is so concerned about pen drive than he have to kept somewhere safe from maansi at least, we cannot expect maansi to understand right and wrong.

"Apko kya jarurt hai choti sii bachi ko daatne ki, bas bacho or ladkiyo per hi apna saara work out dikhana" geet blasted on maan and pulled maansi in her safe arm, she didnt know in emotion what is she blabbering and to whom, but her eye is glaring him to the extent that he is feeling hole in his skin.

Maan gulped his salvia "mere ko bhul gayi but mamta nahi bhuli".

"Nahi shona dont cry baby!! I scold your dadaa again he scold you naa than I will show him also my skills" geet is consoling small soul in her arms whose sobs turn into hiccups.

Mansi nibbled geet suit from shoulders and her kajal come out from her almond hazels which made her cheek slightly black, maan wants to hug her to his rabbit who is looking super cute even in this status also but geet, maan sighed.

She took mansi upstairs and said nakul to come to their room with water for mansi, her heart is naturally flowing for mansi which she just thinking a attachment as mansi is lovely child and maan sir did a favor to save her from her monster cousin.

Meera also went upstairs in geet and nowadays mansi room.

"Nahi bas sona, abb nahi rote" geet spoke animatedlly and showed her some toys so she will be distract.

But mansi wants water so she bend to side table of bed where a glass jug is kept, geet understood that she is thirsty after crying so took water slipper from meera and made her drink which she rewared with her baby burrr.

"Today geet showed many signed to be cure her internal wounds now this is the second step to make her remember her own family, first I made mansi and geet closed so her inside mother start to live for mansi now the time to wake up her inside wife soul and he knew his closeness had a great effect on her, especially when their marriage is love marriage but still all knew its arrange marriage, this is their little secret, so this the time to face your lost forgotten husband Mrs.khurana, I will make you crave to the extent that you ran back in my arms, and this is my sweet revenge also for all sleepless nights of last 8 month, every craving of your love, a small wish to sleep in your arm after tiring day, you didn't had slightest idea how painful it is to get the news that your love is dead, its feels like a dream only, sometime I thought you will just come back from nowhere and said maan we were just stuck see now your geet back" maan thought to halt when he felt a warn tear slipped from his black captive eye.

Maan went to study after getting good scolding by his wife.

And just kept looking her pic in longing which made him again to past just 15 days before, how happy he is, how he delayed priya stay in abroad after finding geet.

That day when we are coming back my heart is dancing and singing but still weeping to see my love just next to me but still miles apart from me, but at least she is alive which is not less than a miracle for everyone, now maan first stayed in motel for night as still a work is left and first he had have to prepare everything for geet arrival in Delhi.

Maan dialed a conference call to dadi and adi after make sure geet in deep sleep and he is out and had safe distances between them.

"Maan... sir" dadi and adi said in concern at same time.

My tears flow down and words are choked in throat, I didn't know how to say that my geet is with me fit and fine, but just forget me, forget to her own small baby. She forget everything about us my love but I am here naa, I will help her to gain her memory back.

"Maan.. say something beta.. are you ok?" Dadi concerned voice makes me come out from my own world.

"Dadi .. adi !!! Geet is alive .. and with me right now" I whispered.

But both gasped with the new information, geet is alive and that to after 8 month of accident many questions run into their mind but how maan found geet, why she not came back to her house.

"I send a email to both you check it, there is all information and yes do call me after reading my plan also" I said but both bombarded their questions on me but again I made them cut the call and check their email, I was not in the situation to explain everything to them on phone without choking.

I kept watching geet whole night, she didn't change just little bit thin and pale but her glow and a positive energy is still around her. Now I have to think about "what happened in that accident". But what about priya still my detective is not able to collect enough proof against her and I married to her also, how will geet react after hear this news, she can't even like to share my little finger also.

But this is not big deal as after little paper work this issue can be solve but the main thing is how to protect geet in Delhi where everyone knew her as mrs.khurana and above of all this I and mansi has to spend time with her so she will be able to remember us, but how?

I said in mail to adi that delay priya arrival as much as you can, I don't want geet saw her before I awaken her dead desire for me again or else may be she back off, to think me as married man. So many questions are eating my brain but once again I glance to my geet who is sleeping on motel bed and my all tensions flew away with wind.

If this is a dream than I dont want to be wake up in this lifetime.

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Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i started. Reading your ff from yesterday i loved it and like the cutie pics a lot
I wish she get her memory back
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prioyank

i started. Reading your ff from yesterday i loved it and like the cutie pics a lot
I wish she get her memory back



I am glaf u like it
U missed many pics as I always delete them after 4 or 5 days thats why I always say follow me if u want to read story with pics and music, about memory Its depent on time only
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update ...
Geet bossing maan...
Lol... Bechara maan do baar sab k samne daat kha li... ;-)
Y priya k baare mein detectives.find out nahi kar pa rahe...
It's really strange...
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Originally posted by: SweetestPari

Awesome update ...
Geet bossing maan...
Lol... Bechara maan do baar sab k samne daat kha li... ;-)
Y priya k baare mein detectives.find out nahi kar pa rahe...
It's really strange...



Yip this is strange but I liked mysteries 😆 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oye sherni jaag gai. Ye cute chorni ki copy mere ghar me bhi he di haha but the only difference is that my chorni shoves all things into the garbage can
Awesome update di
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Originally posted by: itzzdmg

Oye sherni jaag gai. Ye cute chorni ki copy mere ghar me bhi he di haha but the only difference is that my chorni shoves all things into the garbage can
Awesome update di




Hehehhe than u have to give ur cutie pie a doll house 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVED THE UPDATE SO CUTE WHEN GEET WAS SCOLDING MAAN BECAUSE HE SCOLD MANSI SO CUTE AND THE FLASH BACK SO SAD HAD NOT LISTEN TO DADIMA HE WOULD NOT MARRIED THAT WITCH PRIYA AWESOME UPDATE LOVED IT
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Posted: 12 years ago
cute update
maansi grabbing things and keeeping in doll house
Maan getting scolded by geet
continue soon

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