MG FF: A TORN RELATION #2 LINK TO th 3 PG 1 - Page 38

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Posted: 12 years ago
this is for creating flood on my thread

will be updating tomorrow


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Posted: 12 years ago
we r not kids ki u r giuving us chocolates
update do😡
Edited by IshitaIrani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

~A TORN RELATION~



PART 18

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The feeling of being neglected by the girl whom you find most important for you was eating maan.. he was looking at geet who was silently eating and arohi was serving her . geet was finding suddenly homely at a starnge place arjun was very soft and polite that was making her to look forward towards them she actaully liked the way with which she said that she was baby's aunt.. till now she was successful in ignoring maan and keeping him away from her..even his close proximity scares her.. she was like a wounded prey who couldn't have the heart to have a tiny bit of faith on him.. he was looking at her in her direction his eyes were just noticing her every small gesture .. arohi with the help of the servants set up the dinner and the most of the things were which geet mostly eats… maan all of a sudden had found all those things interesting which are related to her…

Geet when saw arohi coming with some dishes she got up and try to took them in her hand when arohi sushed her saying that she a guest and right now she is pampering her niece or nephew…

Arohi : are why will you do it bhabhi main hun na..aur main nahi karungi toh ye dono hai na kaam karne ke liye..aap aur main toh aram se baithenge aur saari batenge discuss karenge… I actually don't know anything about you… aur waise bhi I need to learn all those pampering techniques and the ways with which I will spoil the baby after all its my birth right …

Geet was getting shy and embarressed by her words..she was new to this kind of look after however today only she got the news that she was having a little one whom she could make her life she was having a visible reason to live and start with a new phase ..but the cruel fate has even played with her just because she couldn't relate to her baby just because it is his part too and anything related to him makes her to shiver ran down her spine… she couldn't bear anything that makes her to realise how her baby was formed how his existence came in their lives..

Geet suddenly got lost in her thoughts ignoring others she couldn't even have thought how life will turn upside down when she doesn't even have to do with anything..what did she do to deserve this kind of life..is it too much to expect a loving husband and a mark free life ..she was already having a black chapter in the form of that night in her life and on top of it she was made to be his life partner who was made to destroy her…

Geet : babaji kyun unki aakhon me wo dard hai jise dekhar khud ko khatam karne ka man karta hai.. why does I have to bear again this pain..why cant I see his hurt and hurt.. why this life is cuursed I want to live.. arohi unse baat nahi karti babaji..kyun ..aisa kya hua hai.. unka dard nahi dekha jaata mujhse..

A lone tear escaped from her eyes .. she was crying for his hurt..he was hurt and his pain she was feeling the feeling that once was having no base were now having a strong bond of pain and hurt..dard ka rishta hai unka and this relation of enduring pain and the lonliness is something that no one can explain…this is not anything that needed to be explained verbally or words are enough to make them ensure that they are right but right now the emotions are needed to be expressed in the form of care and concern that he was actually having for her but needed to be shown to her … she was having his part uska ansh in her womb and that deadly truth she needs now to let him know his sin is not something that can be forgiven still the damage that was unknowingly done can only be mended by their words and the balm of love..

Maan was looking at geet she was in an other world her eyes were blank a fear was gripping in her soul .. strangely he knows everything about her so clearly how can he forget that how he had been noticing her and her every single move since the next day ..may be it was in an attempt to prove him correct when he had a strong feeling that woman can only destroy relation but right from the next day he found a new human her small smile..those small gestures the sense of being beloning to his family always make him to think many times about her.. the day she woke up frightened when he covered at night , right from the day he had been observing her.. he need not to tell anyone why she wait for him at the supper even when his behavior was just worst then anyone could endure …

Maan : geet why cant you just rely on me..just once sirf ek bar keh do .. I cant see you in pain… this blankness in your eyes kills me… somewhere I am the reason of your condition..why didn't I had asked you earlier…I was so much drowned in my own miseries that I had completely neglected you… why didn't you confine me geet…

Maan saw her chocking in a repulsive moment he got up and made her drink the water she was stunned with his quick moment ..and diverted her eyes..he knew that this was bound to happen after all his recation had made her to turn away from him..he patted her back..his touch was making her nervous and something was making her to remind that night how his dominance made her to lose herself..she was hurt when he didn't even heard his cries.. he was punishing her but for what she was having no idea… they were strangers and how can he do that heinous act with her wasn't her respect and dignity anything..ieven if he was runk does that mean that he was having the license to molest her or any one…

Geet with a rough push tried to pry his touch off her and he had already sensed her discomfort and parted himself away from her.. they were aloof yet they were so close when every thing every second thing of their was related to each other even it was filed with hae fom her side and guilt filled love from his side…

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Maan had brought geet back she didn't said anything but just followed him maan was waiting for the right moment to ask her the whole truth but she was so tired that she had already slept in the car itself..geet was cuddling all by herself..she was covering her self with her hands in an attempt to hide herself from this mean world least maan knew that her biggest fear is him and his proximity … maan couldn't help to get lost himself in her she was just like a small kid who was lost herself in the tide of time and her every small moemnts were filled with so much innocence ….

Maan was driving safely even in a fit of moment he oculdnt even dared to hurt her..she was already suffereing mentall and his actions always had hurted her in the most worst way .. she endured his every tortue without any complain ..in these two months of their relation they had never even a heart to heart talk ..his aloofness and once betrayed by ayesha had made him to keep him self away from her but she still never complain… but the actual truuth was that his keeping distance was actally the benefit for her since the unknown piece in their relation which was actually the storm before their already torn paradise that was needed to be look after.

Maan reached KM and without even dared to wake her he gently took her sleepy form in his arms and as sensed that its him she flinced in his arms ..her stiffness made him realise that to what extent she was withered ..her forehead were having strange kind of tension .. she was doing the attempt to be pulled away from him but still she couldn't when he was the reason of her hurt then how can be he was the reason of her withdrwal and he wont let her to withdraw herself from him…




Like geet sensed that its him she wake up from her sleep and looked at herself she was in his arms..maan was comfortably taking her they were near their room she didn't knew how to be him now..she knew that he will definitely question her ..and family how will they react…

Maan made her comfortable on the bed..when she tried to move away..but he hold her hand..geet couldn't dare to move ..and looked away..maan was hurt the mistake he has done was still there and now he had to admit that he was wrong in understanding her…

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I am tired now..

Give me 110 likes and will update the rest of the pasrt…

Its just the starting…

Next:

why was he.. he was responsible for her condition..seeing her terrified eyes.. her demanding gestures were making him weak he was not able to answer her innocent questions...

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geet : why did you played with my emotions .. tell me you cant keep quiet..please i cant bear your silence..bolo kis galti ki saza di hai... i hate my own baby..and its own because of you... why did you R**** me maan.. kyun kiya tha...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
Poor Geet
If Maan is so gulity now what will happen when he'll come to know that its him whose raped her

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum updt...loved it in tons...what will be maans reaction when he finds out it is he who raped her????continue sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey thanks for updating...😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊oh! finally maan is realizing something is missed by him...😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 love to see thaat she is feeling homely with arohi nd arjun...😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 poor geet she is all worried for him...😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 same is with maan both r in same boats...🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 precap is interesting that means soo maan is gng to face the truth the truth of his dark deeds... 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 waiting eagerly...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part.. hope maan geet relation will improve soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet feeling guilty as well asfear by seeing maan.loved how arohi took care of geet. waiting for maans reaction after knowing the truth
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
It was very painful
Poor geet...
She's suffering so much :(
Eagerly waiting for maan's reaction after knowing about his sin!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely ud
Let maan know that he was the one who destroyed geet's life her innocense

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