MG FF: A TORN RELATION #2 LINK TO th 3 PG 1 - Page 28

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Originally posted by: suhaaana

updating anyone here


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~A TORN RELATION~



PART 17

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Maan: dare you' kuch nahi hoga MERI GEET KO'. Kuch bhi nahi' how dare you arjun'

Arjun smiled' he knew that it was difficult but not impossible ' maan was a hot headed person and needs this kind of rough behavior with him to make him understand'

Arjun: kya hua..nahi sun paye' jaante ho kyun .. just because she is yours' sirf tumahri you have made her an indispensable part of your life' maan it's the time to move on' you have to be with her she needs you at this time most' and what have you done that she was aloof in this rain.. jaante ho na kahan thi wo'.

Maan : I am sorry.. arjun I wont let anything touch her 'I wont'I will give her all the happiness that she deserves .. arjun I will make sure..

Arohi was sitting beside geet and was looking at the girl lying almost looking lifeless but still there was a small smile playing on her lips..she was looking divine yet so innocent she was supposed to be her sister in law a per her relation with maan.. she always considered him as her brother and he had actually always abide by this relation' but things were still not same and why it has changed she was still not aware' it was all good and happening with maan came into her life and they bonded perfectly like a brother and a sister he cared and protected her ..then came ayesha in his life she liked his choice and he always comply to her demand but things didn't shaped correctly ayesha destroyed his life .. she was actually the scape goat in his and ayesha's revenge and it resulted in her loss of her baby.. she was kind of cut off from all the things relations and even from arjun in the loss of her child but today seeing maan and specially geet he found something snapped her..did he took all his anger and rage on the innocent girl..

Maan entered the room and saw arohi looking intendly at his wife .. she was trying to conclude something he could see from her eyes he knew his little sister too well but its him who is responsible for her destroyed life' ayesha did all the things to destroy arohi just because she is related to him' he look at her just like his sister and this made ayesha to play with arohi and her baby's life ' making her loose the same happiness before it could come in her and arjun's life' however some things are still hidden from arjun on arohi's request .. arjun just knew that arohi had a miscarriage but it was maan and arohi who knew the truth that ayesha was responsible for the same'

Arohi looked at geet and carressed her face and smiled..

Arohi: you are so sweet geet ' maan ki geet.. maan bhai ki wife and now I am going to be an aunt .. she smiled and wiped that lone tear that came out of her eyes '

Maan was shocked to see this , arohi still consider him as her brother after all what occurred in her life he was solely responsible for the mishap that occurred in her life but he forget that even if they were not related by blood but if a relation Is tied with the strings of heart than too the bond is too strong to break'

Maan : arohi still care for me.. if not for me then for geet and the baby' par maine jo kiya uske baad how could be so lineant to geet .. she is my wife

Arohi saw maan staring at her , she immedaitely hide her tears and masked her blank and strong face ..she was not talking to him but that doesn't mean that she doesn't care for him .. she was just angry ' and frustated .. but that doesn't mean that she wont look at the things around him or geet now specially .. they were almost the same age and she knew that something was terrible with her '

Geet slowly opened her eyes he was adjusting to the light her head was throbbing with undue pain and she wanted to cry but tears dried off in her eyes .. arohi looked at him and his eyes were on the two most important persons whom he had hurted the most '

Geet looked around and found maan standing on the door and arohi was looking at him..she was confused .. was she related to him by any kind of means was her first question..she was thinking about him . for the first time she was looking at him and his deep eyes which were fulled with remorse and guilt ' she looked away and stiffled her cry..she was feeling miserable ' his pain for sure she couldn't bear '

Arohi looked at geet and geet immediately tried to sit ' she was feeling strange and weird among some starngers including maan ..she too even don't know the man infront of her ..her husband..

Arohi hold geet and she placed two pillows behind her ..geet looked away guiltily she knew that she had scolded her when she was feeling alone.. but seeing maan she was surprised ' she didn't remember maan ..after he told her to leave and she left KM..

Arohi: abb theek ho.. and why were you committing suicide .. agar tumhe aur baby ko kuch ho jaata toh' no first tell me what were you doing there at restricted area when it was raining heavily .. water logging dekha hai'

Geet smiled a little she was defintely caring and worried for her even she was having some kind of emotions for a stranger like her and when she was on the verge of loosing herself and baby she was saved by this girl whom she don't even know ' but wait suicide ..who was commiting suicide , she looked at the girl infront of him with a panic..and tear filled eyes' arjun had also came to see what was actually going on' maan and arohi cannot be left alone knowing how much they are similar and geet she was too innocent to understand what this brother sister duo will do to the baby mother to be'

Geet: I was not committing suicide .. wo toh I was feeling not well and'

Arohi: and you left alone..jaanti hona you should be careful.. I should tell mom and dad to look after you.. I cant leave you to your dear husband..he cant even look at himself and his needs how will he look at you and the baby '

Geet looked at maan , she was listening to the girl who was kind of warning her and this was actually finding it quite amusing with all the things shaping particularly but maan why was he now here ' wasn't he the one who told her to leave and she left him and his life leaving him all alone with her worries with her '

Arjun looked at the need to stop his wife frombeing going on and on but the sudden need to first introduce him and arohi to geet was must ' she must be feeling extremely odd amongst the bunch of strangers '.

Arjun came and hold arohi by her shoulder she looked at him with a frwon and a pouty face which made geet to giggle making maan to snap his head at his wife who was looking like an innocent baby and her one hand was rubbing her tummy over her clothes'

Arjun: aru calm down.. you are telling her all the things but ye toh bata do who are you..introduce yourself first '

Arohi nodded and looked at geet with a small smile' bu it was maan who introduced arjuhi to geet'

Maan came towards her and geet's heart beat started to raise with his every coming step .. she was shivering not knowing how his rage will come out on her and the baby ' maan's mind was just ringing the words that she was forced and mis handled' he had already feeling terrible by the fact that he had tortured her by his words and even he slapped her ' he need to apologise and make her comfortable so that she will tell him the entire thing' he need to ask her'

Maan was just looking at her and she was finding ways to get away but it was not possible as arjun and arohi were there..she had an idea that they knew maan and by arohi's words she had an idea that there will be important relation between them'

Maan stayed away from her seeing her restless filled eyes '. He knew her.. he can read her discomfort this well was new to him..she was a fragile doll' and he knew how much he was relieved listening to her when she said that she was not killing herself'

Maan: geet ye arjun hai my best friend aur arohi' my sister aur arjun ki wife '

Geet looked at maan with questioning eyes he was having a sister but why she was not aware of this ..she just knew that vicky was his sibling ..she wanted to ask him but again she couldn't got words to come out '. Maan sensed her unsaid words and cleared'

Maan: I met her in school geet..

Arjun: aur arohi ne maan ko pehle hi din rakhi baand di thi ' though he is almost three years elder than her aur tabse they are together '.

Geet smiled '

Arohi : toh issliye you are my sister in law' and I am baby's bua..

She acknowledged all the relations except maan's which pained him.. feeling ignored that too from the girl whom you care is something to take care off'and he should have to get the things done correctly '.

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Next : to be continued'.


i am thinking to write a two shot...

ye samaj lo mere pagal dimaag ka ek aur phitoor

title
" DULHAN HUM LE JAYENGE"

KAISA HAI AUR KITNE READERS HAI MUJHE BATA DO JISSE AAJ HI LIKH DUN...

hiii these are my new writings ... if anyone is interested do read them...


1. MG FF : MENDING HEARTS ...


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2. chod ke na jaana

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3663398/four-shot-chod-ke-na-jaana-final-part-pg-16-nov-27

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