The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 14

Originally posted by: paponecon

Finally she took his token of lv n he too saw it...lvd th whole scenario...geets little bit realization...maan determination...geets learning to read his eyes...so they both knew abt each other feelings...

Originally posted by: Onir

Hey Sheen 😃

Congratulations !!!!

You sizzle Sizzlerz ... 🤗

Originally posted by: mayyo13

I like the title of the chapter because it is something which gives you a reality check and somehow, I have always felt connected with this proverb.

Oh Avi! Can I tell you how much I laughed while reading Maan and Nakul scenes? It.was.hilarious! Especially Maan ka Nakul pe 'wo' hone ka shaq karna. And that shoe-throwing was something out of Maan's character yet it suited the situation so perfectly that I almost choked! Is there going to be a day when Maan and Nakul will be in harmony? 🤣Haan honge na... once Geet comes home as a bride...or maybe not even then...😆😆

And I love Maan's choice of colour for the special day. You know it, don't you? 😳Yup... but I needed it for his feelings... how he always feels... fading into black...

The song has always been the sweet kind of song since I was very little and I have always enjoyed its softness. A good choice for this chapter!

Geet's conflicting emotions, her fight with her own budding feelings I something very relatable. Someone like her, who has a sense of responsibility towards her only family would be unwelcoming of such emotions in herself...

I recongnised the tomboyish girl who slapped the guy and I noted that she called him 'gadha'. He is going to be the one for her! 😆She laughed when I made her read it before leaving...I got my comment on PM... which is all I could ask for..😃

The just-on-time fall and catch scene was... ☺️ And the eyelock and the detailed feelings of each of them were sone pe suhaaga. Plus, the pictures added a whole new dimension to it. Ask me and I think no one could've written this scene better than you! 👏 Oh yes, sliding down the body and realising she shouldn't have done it and then seeing Maan's reaction was quite.. ermm... well-described! 😳

@underlined: I am sure 200 other FF writers here would disagree but thanks a lot. It is always a fine line which I try not to toe, so that it does not end up feeling vulgar.

I could so feel Maan heartbeat stopping with every petal that fell off the rose while the professors played passing the rose with it! 😆

Even though Maan hadn't said a single word to Geet and only made a gesture to say what he felt, she understood it all. Eyes talk or hearts converse? Either way, hum toh khush hain! 😳

Their is a silent story from the start. I struggle each time to write them because there are no words, every gesture has to be described and mean something. Once the MU part is over, it will be easier..

I did feel a little setback when she refused him but it was what was sane and logical. She wouldn't have accepted the rose after knowing what it stands for. Especially with the situation she is going through. But the fact that she came back to get it when she though no on was around and that she will now (hopefully) preserve the rose in a book, is a ray of hope for Maan and for us. Her gesture shows how much she wants to accept the rose yet she doesn't want to do it publicly.

Loved it Avi! 🤗

Originally posted by: sona-rai

mindblowing awesome update Avi muahhh...

Sorry for late cmmnt u know my problem na...

love u...muahhh.

Originally posted by: sweetkj

Thankyou for the dediction avi...🤗 ❤️

I like the title of the chapter because it is something which gives you a reality check and somehow, I have always felt connected with this proverb.

Oh Avi! Can I tell you how much I laughed while reading Maan and Nakul scenes? It.was.hilarious! Especially Maan ka Nakul pe 'wo' hone ka shaq karna. And that shoe-throwing was something out of Maan's character yet it suited the situation so perfectly that I almost choked! Is there going to be a day when Maan and Nakul will be in harmony? 🤣

And I love Maan's choice of colour for the special day. You know it, don't you? 😳

The song has always been the sweet kind of song since I was very little and I have always enjoyed its softness. A good choice for this chapter!

Geet's conflicting emotions, her fight with her own budding feelings I something very relatable. Someone like her, who has a sense of responsibility towards her only family would be unwelcoming of such emotions in herself...

I recongnised the tomboyish girl who slapped the guy and I noted that she called him 'gadha'. He is going to be the one for her! 😆

The just-on-time fall and catch scene was... ☺️ And the eyelock and the detailed feelings of each of them were sone pe suhaaga. Plus, the pictures added a whole new dimension to it. Ask me and I think no one could've written this scene better than you! 👏 Oh yes, sliding down the body and realising she shouldn't have done it and then seeing Maan's reaction was quite.. ermm... well-described! 😳

I could so feel Maan heartbeat stopping with every petal that fell off the rose while the professors played passing the rose with it! 😆

Even though Maan hadn't said a single word to Geet and only made a gesture to say what he felt, she understood it all. Eyes talk or hearts converse? Either way, hum toh khush hain! 😳

I did feel a little setback when she refused him but it was what was sane and logical. She wouldn't have accepted the rose after knowing what it stands for. Especially with the situation she is going through. But the fact that she came back to get it when she though no on was around and that she will now (hopefully) preserve the rose in a book, is a ray of hope for Maan and for us. Her gesture shows how much she wants to accept the rose yet she doesn't want to do it publicly.

Loved it Avi! 🤗

Tera jaise comment koi nahi kar sakta...

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Avi 🤗