MG (OS):Unfinished (A slice of 'Love from Across') - Page 2

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

beautiful song

emotional and beautiful

thanx for the pm

Thank you darling!😃

Originally posted by: aanya84

😃stupendous update frosty👏 aww ur creativity literally stole my heart😉 these words were amazing"

Has it ever been that morning brought with itself the dark?

Has it ever befallen on mankind that rains turn dry and spring blooms black?

Or that winters yield heat and summers splash cold! 👏

these words created a new atmosphere all together i could actually connect with maan through these words 😃

"So go and screw our love."-while reading these words i just wanted to slap geet

but i know her fear and concern was speaking such barbarous words.😭

A lifetime?-this simple word was enough to tell maans anguish.u explained his inner emotions and retrospection on his togetherness with geet brilliantly😃

"love from across" was actually unfinished without this frosty hats off to u for penning down such marvellous os 👏

waiting for more and more 😳

love aanya😃

I take a bow!

Originally posted by: Shefali16

uski link to dedo!!!!!!😛😃

Sawaar loon VM Maaneet http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AluFbdizqNY

Hey!
Sorry i couldnt comment on the main story! But i'll do it nw on this Os.
Its a really beautiful story. Though it has a mix ending..like u feel sad that they couldnt live together.. But at the same time u feel happy & contend that atleast they are together in another world..as this world was not meant fr them & their pure Love!
And its provend fact that this kind of endings are more appealing & heart moving.. Jaise.. "Kayamath se kayamath tak"
..
Everything, every feel was described n portrayed beautifully.. Be it that pull towards ur lost love.. Or stopping ur self frm reaching it! The sense of betrayal, hurt & pain.. The helplessness, guilt & fear of geet.. That hidden desire & hope against hope to ur love back & find ur peace in ur luvs arms..
Fear of parting away once again & knowing that u might never meet ever again..
And then clearing of misunderstanding & knowing the whole truth.. That ur love was returned with luv only..that it was always ur's.. Nd its still is ur n always will be.
That was just perfect!
..
And this Os as maans point of view was the finishing touch for the beautiful story!

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

this is emotional...

wonderfully written...

and the VM was beautiful...

thanx for pm...

Thank you darling!!

Originally posted by: Shonameet

Hey!
Sorry i couldnt comment on the main story! But i'll do it nw on this Os.
Its a really beautiful story. Though it has a mix ending..like u feel sad that they couldnt live together.. But at the same time u feel happy & contend that atleast they are together in another world..as this world was not meant fr them & their pure Love!
And its provend fact that this kind of endings are more appealing & heart moving.. Jaise.. "Kayamath se kayamath tak"
..
Everything, every feel was described n portrayed beautifully.. Be it that pull towards ur lost love.. Or stopping ur self frm reaching it! The sense of betrayal, hurt & pain.. The helplessness, guilt & fear of geet.. That hidden desire & hope against hope to ur love back & find ur peace in ur luvs arms..
Fear of parting away once again & knowing that u might never meet ever again..
And then clearing of misunderstanding & knowing the whole truth.. That ur love was returned with luv only..that it was always ur's.. Nd its still is ur n always will be.
That was just perfect!
..
And this Os as maans point of view was the finishing touch for the beautiful story!

Thank you dear!😃

emotional os