MG : WHY CANT ME JUN 19

hiii me again here with a new figment of my mind

this time a newer version of parchaai


hope you will like it''continuation depends on no of readers

else

dont know 😕😕😕

MG WHY CANT ME

PROLOGUE

Loud sobs erupted from her throat she looked at him with her wide opened hazels..angry tears came from those eyes..looking shattered… he knew that she was too sensitive an d this over sensitivity was on the verge of him…

Maan looked at her she had refused to see him.. he put his hand on her shoulder ..she snapped back….

Maan: look sweetheart … please you know that your maan cant see you like this..you know you look so……

Before he could reply she looked angry and glare at him…geet pouted her lips twisted…

Geet: I should have known sab jaanti hun main..you are no more interested in me… that's why..you… you..never loved me…

She cried loudly maan looked helpless ..he love her only her how can he prove and she was saying he doesn't love her … how is it possible she has gone nuts and is making him same….

Maan: baby please listen to me … how can you say I don't love you.. you are my wife ..and I am very much devoted to this relation..you know baby doll I love you only you..my cherry geetu ….

Geet wiped her tears with her palm roughly ..she smiled at her husband….

Geet : really jaanu .. I love you..she smiled and hug him close her knee length skirt turned all up..his hands embrace his cute wify..well this was the time he never wanted to end her innocence ..she was his wify he cute wify..maan ki geet … his sixteen year old wife…. They were in school ..but married….

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It was another day when he entered his room..he looked at the lights closed of his room ..looked around and saw something that make him to realize the hard truth ..and reality of being married….

Geet sweetly came towards her hubby …. A satin chiffon knee length nighty her curves were all visible ..he for a second closed his eye stop thinking rubbish ….

Geet : jaanu .. love me na…

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. geet was crying she yelled at him…

Geet: why cant me… tell me… I knew it , it was all farce… you don't love me… I want my all wify rights….

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Bold version of parchaai tell me how is it ….

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oooh ! geet iz only 16...all innocent...

lov 2 read more...

soo geet is only 16 nd married to maan

nd maan is in school

interesting prologue

continue soon

aww Geet wanted Maan to love her but he is stopping himself because she is just 16 yrs old...

what is Maan's age then...because he seemed mature than her...

very interesting...

what to do with you..

you are having so much ffs

starting new one..

how could you make me crave for all..

prologue is captivating

i want to read the story now..

what ffs will i ask u..tr.dlp.sl,..

the line is going nonstop..

waiting for updates

thnx for pm

loved the concept

please update soon