Saathiya #3 Part 24/pg95/Sept 26

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JeevanaP

@JeevanaP

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
waiting

so am I

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

few lines

saath to hum

pahle bhi the

par ab ,

yeh kya naya

khumaar sa hai !

saath hai mere

par aur paaas aaye

iske liye

yeh dil bekaraar sa hai !

hum mille the

kyoki milna tha hame !

har kadam

saath chale the

kyoki ,

dost banaaya tha tumhe !

par

is kadar

saanso main

bas jaauge tum

yeh to nahi

bataya tha tumne !

ab yahaa aa kar

chalo

kuch to behisaab

kar jaaye

aao

itne paas aa jaye

judaa hone ke

har derwaaje ko band

kar aaye

hope you like it

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

congrats for the new thread

awesome update

like is not working

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 18

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

few lines

saath to hum

pahle bhi the

par ab ,

yeh kya naya

khumaar sa hai !

tu

saath hai mere

par aur paaas aaye

iske liye

yeh dil bekaraar sa hai !

hum mille the

kyoki milna tha hame !

har kadam

saath chale the

kyoki ,

dost banaaya tha tumhe !

par

is kadar

saanso main

bas jaauge tum

yeh to nahi

bataya tha tumne !

ab yahaa aa kar

chalo

kuch to behisaab

kar jaaye

aao

itne paas aa jaye

ke

judaa hone ke

har derwaaje ko band

kar aaye

hope you like it

Wow lovely lovely...

beautifully done.. thanks for this awesome poem dear...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

how are you dear..?

shifting ho gaya kya...?

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anky_s

@anky_s

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

When will you update next part? It's been ages since you've updated. Waiting anxiously

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

congo for the new thread...

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

awesome part...

i loved the way he said "u love me" 😆... he realised it now...

the initial ff showed us a responsible geet trying to have a grip in maans uncontrolled life too... and she herself was portrayed as a matured gal ... but now its all ulta pulta... maan for a change has turned so responsible that he is doing all what he can not to make geet regret this trip whereas geet on the other ha wants to enjoy with maan... i loved this change...

the trust geet shows on maan is really commendable ... i really wish maan now loosens up a lil and be with geet as her maan ...