Maneet FF: Lost, Part 4, pg 32 on July 28 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: singh24


Me Babbie .. 🤗 ...n urs...??


achhhaji...issliye u didn't chat with me yest (tera copy kiya😆)

Hey Babbie😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: angel-ki-shona

Mein sach kehrhi hoon mein masoom bach never lies huh


haan haan Babbie mein sab dekh rahi hoon...oye SB lazy kisiko kya lazy banayegi, kyunki woh bhi toh ek kaam hai😆😆😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Hiii...congrats on da new story...Awesome intro...Loved it...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm


thanks for the wishes..glad u liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waiting...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cherishh


yes dear...thanks for making it at such a short notice


Thank u so much guys,
i am so glad u both liked the banner 😊😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76


(thanks jyothi for the banner)


PART 1

Maan

I, Maan, am here to let u know a part of me…hope you will be there through this phase of my life where I want to share my thoughts, relations and changes they undergo.

A very pleasant winter morning with a very warm weather, birds chirping around, where everyone wish to snuggle close into their beds for that "5 more minutes please" sleep, just not willing to get up from their cozy beds, except me Maan…Maan Singh Khurana…for whom the weather, nature or say anything for that matter does not hold any significance, except trying to do my chores with no emotions yet shedding all the burden in this period of the day where I do not need to pretend, where I do not need to suppress my agony and where I can unleash my anger on myself rather than turning into a cold and stone hearted through tai-chi, my constant companion, which allows me to not pretend.

I, a very successful person as all say, who people think has everything in this world on his fingertips, a career, richness, power, attitude, respect, name, fame and what not, but does this all fulfill a person's heart…does this make you a perfect and a lucky human being I wonder.

At the same time, I could not forget the bitter truth that this is what all one needs to do whatever they want to, to a great extent, but again it means nothing.

This is what I always do…trying to accept and digest my life's biggest truth that this is what life needs to live in this society, but again fighting with it that it is not true and end up wondering can I ever win this battle where I can openly accept, appreciate, differentiate, fight and stand up for the rationale things which my heart believes and mind accepts

They say I am arrogant, rude, strict…but did anyone wonder why I am so

With all these thoughts he completes his 2-hour exercise breaking ice, planks, kicking and boxing making him look breathtaking and the Greek God for one single glimpse of which girls would do everything.

After it, he takes shower and comes down from his room all ready to have breakfast with all after his formal good morning wish.

My family, it is always a chaos when one will be with them, but around me it is as if no one exists…do I miss all those chatters, banters, teasing…well I really don't know

I am looking after my family business, Khurana Constructions, along with my Dad, Yash Singh Khurana, who along with my grandparents and mom say that I play a major role in its glory

I have a 24-year-old younger brother, Rishab, who joined our office recently and a 21-year-old sister, Riya, doing interior designing.

(Guys I do not know whats the correct age to complete these courses, so I am taking liberty here)

Rishab is a very naughty person of all of us… carefree, fun loving, down to earth, caring sweetheart (that is what everyone call him), handsome hunk (yup me Maan saying that) but at the same time very responsible and dedicated to his work and a strict boss when comes to wrk.

The same is the case with my little sister, Riya. She loves playing pranks on everyone knowing her ultimate savior, Rishab, would not allow anyone to say a word against her. She is a chatter box. I always wondered how can she talk so much and again how she controls in my presence

Yeah you got me right they don't speak a word in front of me, not even any eye contact with anyone around…same is the case with my grandma, Savitri Devi Khurana, and mom, Mamta Khurana.

But my grandma does not leave a chance to pull a stupid fight with me which ends with her smirking and my glaring.

My mom and I have a very different relationship, which is anger and hatred from my side and love and care from her side.

My Grandfather, Ranjveer Singh Khurana, and dad, Yash Singh Khurana

Well what can I say about them…they are my role models. Whatever I am today is because of them, but I hardly speak to my father, if I do its mostly business.

Grandpa and Me are on a very different level of relationship

I respect him a lot as I do with all my relationships. He is the pillar of our family. If I am comfortable to share a tiny bit of my personal self is with him, though it holds restrictions in my own way…he was the one who guided me throughout my hard work and success

And there are a few more people u need to know, but I will tell about them later as I have to go to work where my turmoil halts for some time as I try to indulge myself into as much work as I could in order to avoid my wayward thoughts.


Finally, I updated the first update of my SS. Hope u all like it.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice dear😊

maan's pov nice⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
omg, , first part u have updated...
going to read it anu...
will be back...
will try to give u comment like u used to do on my thread...
if i fail then pls pardon...okies...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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well well well...
first of all i really liked his narration about his life...
the way he was telling everything about himself and his family...
those things which he is not able to share with anyone. he shared here...
why people never think that why this rude behavior,, why this coldness towards everyone... there must be a reason behind all this...
but now thinking about the reason... is it related to geet? their separation is the reason of his rude behavior... the pain he is having in his heart, never share with anyone...
loved his big family... he has grandpa too... the lovable bond he shared with his grandmaa and grandpa... his siblings scared from him...though they are jovial but still didn't have guts to say a word in front of him...
loved his cold nature too...
the way u narrate everything, loved it...
finally u too started ur story...
hope u'll get a good journey from a reader to a writer...
all the best dear and yeah will be waiting for the further parts...
can't wait more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyothikrish


Thank u so much guys,
i am so glad u both liked the banner 😊😃



hey jyothi...
loved it...
how r u?

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