MG (OS): Victory's Song

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frostedstarlit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Thesaurus
wow just awesome loved it so much...

Thank you darling!

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frostedstarlit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Onir
Hey I read both the previous & this present OS together... and it was a treat. 😊

Loved how love helped him tide over his anguish, pain & past wounds.

A happy family made the place a home again that was abandoned years ago with just painful memories and aches.

You really tied the loose ends together in a splendid manner. It was like a smooth destined flow of events causing a smile to be ever present while reading.

Well portrayed that unconditional & ever present support from loved ones is enough to soothe the deepest of gashes 👏

Kia's innocence &; Geet's support & understanding being the pillars that held him together to prevent from breaking or sinking again & only to emerge out victorious...

Lovely OSs... ❤️

Welcome to my little world darling!

Glad you enjoyed reading both the parts...😃

Actually, Immortalize my Victory was the whole and sole story until I'd posted it. Suddenly I realised there were these lose ends that needed closure and then came in the whole plot for this one.

Took me a while but I did a meagre job with this one!😳

❤️

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: hermoso
that was so beautiful and heart warming and heart touching os
simply wow and loved ur way of writing .

Thank you Thank you!!!

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: punam2712
I AM FALLING IN LOVE WITH YOUR WRITING PROVIDED IT IS HAPPY
WONDERFUL AND EMOTIONAL STORY

Thank you for falling in love😉😳

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.OneDirection.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Very Sweet Os 👍🏼 very Sugary 😆

Just loved it , a sweet happy Family .. 😳

Keep Writing ..

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frostedstarlit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: yappingduck
that was incredibly beautiful...couldnt have asked for a better OS👏

Thank you darling!

See, it's a happy one😛

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

awesome one dear...oh you already proved that you can write very happy ones too with the 1st happywala os...😳😳 now this was one was a very very happy one...very happy to have you here dear...

Kia Maan Singh Khurana, loved the name dearie...

loved the way you converted all his old bad memories to new good ones thru his happy family...

few years bk the sight of those marbles brought the bitter memories for him , n now its not the same anymore...😊😊

awesome story my dear...keeep writing more n more n many many more stories...😊

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frostedstarlit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: .bloom.
Very Sweet Os 👍🏼 very Sugary 😆

Just loved it , a sweet happy Family .. 😳

Keep Writing .. Very Sweet Os 👍🏼 very Sugary 😆

Just loved it , a sweet happy Family .. 😳

Keep Writing ..

Hahaha!

Thank you darling😃

Will surely write more..

You needn't spam for that😛😉😆😆

LOL

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frostedstarlit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: honeygrape
awesome one dear...oh you already proved that you can write very happy ones too with the 1st happywala os...😳😳 now this was one was a very very happy one...very happy to have you here dear...

Kia Maan Singh Khurana, loved the name dearie...

loved the way you converted all his old bad memories to new good ones thru his happy family...

few years bk the sight of those marbles brought the bitter memories for him , n now its not the same anymore...😊😊

awesome story my dear...keeep writing more n more n many many more stories...😊

Hi Purvi!

So good to see you here😃

Thank you! Thank you!!

At last my image is altered from the tragic writer😛😆

I too loved the name Kiara, since that was his mom's name I thought Kia was perfect for his daughter