Mg FF- ABHI NAHIN AANA THREAD 1 - Page 51

part 5
nice part...
only if Maan comes to know that Arjun has not so nice thoughts for Geet...
wow nice dinner...

part 6
nice...
oh ho she doesnt know his name and also Maan doesnt know Geet is a Handa...
how will they react when they come to know this?
cont soon dear...

haii choti wow update at last i was missing ur update much

nyc updt
Geet gussa on maan n missin him only...
Loved it
Cont soon

so , missed each other . lets see how they r going to meet agn must b very dhamakedaar . geeet will bring toofan and maan will b ice to break . kaun kya gul gilatha hai . lets see . continue soon

Nice part... :) thanks for pm sweety & update soon :D

Awesome Update Ash di🤗🤗
I loved loved Geet! I want her to give back something to that Khurana guy! But then at the same time, even he fell for her! And even helped her against himself!!
That was beautiful!!

Part 2

Just loved their first face to face encounter...Maan is a confident player but so is Geet...

I just loved the way you described the entire ambience and the scene at the disc...you really have a way of explaining and penning these parts about disc and dance (just like another update in Vivah). So yes enjoyed it a lot. Geet has piqued his curiosity with her actions and can't wait for their next encounter...

Part 3

So Gee babt wants to go to Paris...btw isn't Mohinder in same league as Maan because otherwise why is he struggling to get a deal signed off...well but he is a smart cookie of giving this task to Geet.../

So yet another encounter...this time more of a mYra-Geet...encounter with words to Maan...LOL. I just loved their silent talks...

Part 4

What a build up...so Maan met Ana and she seems to be very dear to geet...Arjun is a flirt and friend of Maan...interesting. Dinner invitation sent and accepted...that was prompt and cool...but so much like serendipity...kismat mein milna that oh milte chale gaye...

Part 5

What a date...it was romantic in lot of ways...the anticipation...courtesy...food...talk...dance...had tinge of sexiness but more of romance to it...and then offcourse the last part...a kiss. So Maan took liberty which is reserved for him...isme ki hai kudiye...waise bhi next meeting coming up soon...

Part 6

Oh Geet's project rejected...but here i got a little confused Ash. Maybe because you tried to change the story. My initial thought was that it was something Mr Handa wanted...a deal he wanted to broker with Maan but here it came across as her project on which she had worked. And also it did not gel either way that Handa's as a professional company or Geet as a perfectionist and a good business woman will ignore a fault 5 times...every professional or business man knows that deal if rejected needs to be improved to get chances next time. Sorry but that bit did not make sense to me as companies are run by a team of professional people and no one does the same mistake 5 times. It would have been better if the issue was that he was just not interested or his father's team forgot to plug in certain info which Maan helps her in finding a resource to work upon...

My own view baby doll so don't mind...at the end, it is all writer's liberty. Story is going great and it is very interesting...alraedy waiting for next encounter between Geet and Mr Khurana (he has drummed up more interest than Maan at this point.)

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

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