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nia24

@nia24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

1. Saneyeeka: I think saneyeeka was beautifully written, although I was not extremely fond of the ending, I have to commend you on your writing skills. I can understand how hard it must be to write such a story that everyone may not agree with. It is your IF account, it is your story, you have the right to explore and end your story the way you want it to be. Personally, I was captivated by the story as it was a different genre. Good job 👏

2. Translations are not needed for me 😊

3. I absolutely love this story, I think you are doing a fab job 🤗 Your stories are literally my favourite, please don't even think of quitting, sometimes when I am in a bad mood I find myself going back to 'Fairy Tale' (probably one of my top favourite maneet stories ever written) or 'Parineeta', I'm sure this will be another one of those great stories and I hope the list continues. You're doing a wonderful job babe, sorry I haven't been able to give my response until now!

A massive thank you for making me smile and taking me on a journey through your stories, it means a lot.

Edited by maneetislove - 12 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#282

part 3
awesome dear...
interesting characters and their attitudes...
Geet is such a brat and arrogant...
is she a virgin?
well Maan isnt...
wow this Myra idiot is insulting herself again and again...
cont soon dear...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#283

hi thanks 4 da pm...firstly regd ur note! Sanyeeka was different n something beautifully written! Translation - I may need translations pls, sorry 4 nt informing earlier! Pls dnt quit writing! I love the way u write...u r talented n creative! Write the way u want! Awesum update! Geet is truly spoilt! so they meet again! Myra totally angry! Maan intrigued! Maan nt interested in Myra's rant! update soon! Superbly written!

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#284

I didn't read update so will give comments on update later but when I read ur note so giving separate reply for that...

no yaar we are restricting u to any genre...but if u want to know truth then I will say yes I liked some initial parts of ur Story SANEYEEKA... but later when it turned into mystery and it was not solved in the end then I was really disappointed...keeping story hanging in between gives too much tension...I don't have habit to watch serious movies I love to watch simple movies and comedy...I believe when our life is already so messed up then why we add some more tension to it...so in the end it is my POV and u wanted to write unending story it is ur choice...chalta hai na...jaroori nahin ki what u like we also like and what we say u have to oblige...zaroori nahin hai...

but I love ur other works...u very well know that I say what is in my heart so sometimes I am disagreed with some twists in ur story PARINEETA...but I know twists are needed to make a story...so I love ur other stories...

for giving translation so for me I don't need any translation because as North Indian I am good in Hindi and English both...so no problem for me in any...yah leaving translation will reduce ur time consumption to type whole update and it will help u in studies also...this will be good as u should concentrate in ur career also...all the best for ur career in future...

may I ask u one question----do u have literature as a subject because ur style of writing is one of the best...not many writers possess this quality where readers won't find any flaw in flow of scenes and words...they are so much in sync...

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Zeal-DD

@Zeal-DD

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#285

OMG thankyou 4 such long update... Maan remembered her even after so long and Geet too... I dont know but i feel mysterious about Mohinder anyway he asked geet to sign the deal from maan wow that will be interesting how geet-maan interaction will be ... I m loving Myra-Geet scenes 😆

About translation --- it will be ok if you dont translate (for me ofcrz)

About Saneyeeka - i loved the story... I enjoyed reading it... I have some questions about geet but i assumed she was some Angel and you are one fab writer... Keep on writing and i will be there to read every concept n story only thing is it should be Maaneet's story 😆

Edited by Zeal-DD - 12 years ago

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saro

@saro

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Hey don't stop ur works .it is always awsome work...

Regarding translation i would prefer English if its very grammatical Hindi

Otherwise I'm fine with ur Hindi.

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#287

Beautiful update.

Maan still cudnt get his mind off
From Geet. She was always there
In d back of his mind.

Loved Geet's bindass attitude in
Home. The Bonding between her n Nisha
As well.as her dad was sweet.

Geet behaving rude... Usko itna bhi
Indifferent nahi hona chahiye tha..
Seeing Maan. There's a spark inside
Her eyes while seeing him. Is she
Is attracted to him.

Loved the way she insulted Myra.
Maan enjoying the scene.

Wants a bday present. Waiting for her
to formally meet him

Enjoying reading this story. Pls do
Continue it. No need of translation.
N I loved Sanyeeka. It took us to
Another world. It was simply out
Of ordinary.
Pls don't be sad.

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#288

myra n geet.. wow.. kya scene that... loved it

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#289

awesome part ...i m loving geet character in this ff ...

maan is started feeling something ...

uff ye myra kab peecha chodegi maan ka ..i guess geet hi isko kick out karegi maan ki life se...

aish i love ur writing tujhe ye batane ki jaurat nahi ...i really loved to read sanyeeka too...bahut different he .i really like the concept aur abhi nahi from the begining ...

tu jis genre me likhna chahti he likh ...i dont have any prob .aur kiisi reader k negative comment ki wajah se dont hurt yourself ...apne loyal readers ka to soch ...

i have read many ffs aur kai baar sad ending wale ffs bhi read kiye he ...har ff ki happy ending ho ye jaruri nahi he ...