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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

maan sounds such a flirt, casanova and full of life

but how did geet get involved with him

was she drunk

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

what maan is kissing

nice update

thanx for the pm

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Sudha

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

hey, very very interesting concept.
And you presented the beginning very well.. Geet is contemplating an
Abortion, but seems like she's gonna take the risk of going ahead with the pregnancy. Maan is also aware of the pregnancy, but din't give a damn 😲 nice concept, I love your writing style in Good Girl and Bad Boy and have become a fan of your writing, looking forward to this ss as well 😊
PS : PM ME TOO.

Edited by sudha_gc - 12 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing update! Past n present well incorporated! Poor Geet! Past was fab! Maan is such a player! Geet engaged den wt happend? update soon

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fantesy

@fantesy

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

awsuum update..so geet is pregnant wid maan's child n engaged 2 aarav ..maan is such a player ...poor geet now confused wthether 2 tell dis 2 aarav or nt,..

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singh24

@singh24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

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crazyfanofdsdv

@crazyfanofdsdv

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

loved the update

waiting for the full past to reveal

kind of confused that if geet was engaged what happened that she slept with maan

can't wait for the next update

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take_a_hint

@take_a_hint

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Thank you all

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take_a_hint

@take_a_hint

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

MUST READ NOTE
This story is nothing like what we are used to in the forum. I have been reading American e-books of late and inspired by that so please bear with me. Don't be judgmental about any character read with open mind. Don't accuse Maan or Geet they both are drunk and not in their sense. Since it was Geet's POV it may seem as if she is sober but she isn't. I don't know how much convincing this chapter proved but i will request you to be patient with the story. If you have any disagreement PM me i am just going on with the flow and there are 99.9% i miss logics as i have not planned anything.

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take_a_hint

@take_a_hint

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

PART 2

PAST

Shopping not something I love but it's necessary especially when you are going to attend your fianc's colleague's birthday where you have to look best for him. I ignored the buzz of my phone as i know it is megha i have been ignoring her since shopping with her is like walking in hell. She can be so girly at times no all times. It took us ten days to come in proper terms after total player fiasco. But i am no one to blame her that is her personal and first rule in friendship 'don't judge'.

Sitting in CCD sipping a coffee i checked my texts. Two forward messages, one from Aarav saying that he will pick me up at 5 which is interrupted as 4:45 as he is always early. Then one from Megha with lot of crying faces followed by we need to talk. I rolled my eyes her biggest problem could be a small pimple in cheek. I don't have time for that.

I dressed in purple sari since i am going to get married i need to look traditional. Well that stupid logic was one of my friend's i have no clue about it.

"i am here" i heard Aarav's voice. i rolled my eyes can't he be late i am not yet ready fully.

" ten minutes " i said, interrupted as half an hour.

Finally we walked into the party at 7. I know most of Aarav's friends though not in person yet it didn't feel less awkward. I m not a party person at all. It seemed less of a birthday party and more of some teenager freaky party. Everyone was dancing like maniacs holding alcohol and probably consumed more of the same. The house was a complete mess. And i could see a couple making out in a corner. I looked at Aarav accusingly.

" sorry i didn't know it would be like this. I thought he had his family over" he said apologetically

Aarav was not a fan of parties like this in fact he never used to drink until he joined the camp. He told me that since they all work so hard and are exhausted and drained out of energy physically and mentally and all, they tend to take help of this freaky parties and alcohol. The logic somehow made sense and i didn't judge him or stop him from doing anything. He knows his limits and i believe that.

" happy birthday" i said once i spotted his colleague umm... officer siddique. He was boosted and i wonder if he realizes i wished him.

" Hey gorgeous " i heard the annoying voice after about a month.

Aarav made a pleading face nudging me to talk to him. Aarav meets him often though i smartly escape.

" hey player " i gave my most possible fake plastic smile. Making Maan chuckle.

" Enjoying? " he asked. From his voice i could guess he is already high and must have emptied at least two bottles single handed.

"Bye player" i said grabbing Aarav's hand and walking away.

" What? " Maan asked i guess he frowned but we just walked away.

I felt relieved when i saw what we call ' officers' girlfriend club'. There are some genuine officers who have serious girlfriends that i am friends with.

" Ah so finally found ya friends " Aarav sighed. I know he wanted to go and catch up with his friends i can't blame him for it.

" now you are free to go. I will be safe" i said

" sure? " he asked

" yes. Go get wasted i can drive us later" i said tapping his shoulder.

" call me when you want" he said before walking to his friends.

I joined my friends. ' congratz' they all shouted. They all didn't attend my engagement. Shame. But anyways they can be present at the wedding its more than five months now.

"So now can we discuss how an officer is in bed" sasha giggled poking my arm.

" shut up" i said my usual answer.

We all as in me sasha, haasini, neha and Arjun's new British girlfriend Sarah, sat in a round couch with a table in between after getting ourselves some drink. I opted for orange juice as i don't prefer drinking in parties like these.

" what you both haven't done anything yet? " Neha asked shocked

" yeah! I mean we are still working" i said sipping my drink.

" i will not be surprised when i get the same answer next year " neha said giving Hi-5 to Hasini. I rolled my eyes.

We were gossiping about latest hook ups and break ups when my eyes caught Maan. He was leaning over some brown haired girl and i didn't know expert knowledge to know what they are doing.

" lucky girl" Neha sighed deeply.

" oh please " i made a face.

" come on Geet. He is the best of them all. Raj told me that Maan recently got promotion and is recommended for some award. He is filthy rich, some ancestral property and all. Trust me seeing him in a uniform is like a boon to eyes" Neha added.

" he is the cheapest creature i have seen. I mean with every girl he lays eyes on seriously!! " i nodded disapprovingly taking third glass of juice for myself. The juice was different because it gave me a wired feeling in the stomach but i ignored.

" He is very hot " haasini said

" in bed " Sasha added. Al our eyes turned to her in shock.

" what?" she shrugged

"you and him?" haasini asked

" well years ago, one night though. You can kill to know what is under that shirt. I love my boyfriend and all but i can't deny Maan is better. He had very sad eyes that wanted me to go for him. His eyes held strange pain, he never slept till i woke up the next morning. That time i thought we were meant together but later i realized i was another fling for him. No regrets now i am happily engaged " she said flashing her ring.

That was strange. Sad eyes,huh? Some trick of him to get girls. Who can deny sympathy does for many girls. Not too late to realize what a jerk he is. Finishing my forth glass of juice i felt my head spinning. Am i hungry or something?? I excused myself to washroom. It was locked. Damn. I decided to go out to get some fresh air. I felt wired like fainting. I was walking but really couldn't know where i am going or why the floor is dancing. I took my phone to call Aarav when i read his text.

' some a***le has spiked orange juice don't drink it'

S**T it was sent 90 minutes. Great now what will i do? I can't handle this. Generally i don't go beyond two glass but now i have already had five glasses including the one i had in the way from washroom to lawn. I can't call Aarav he will be high maybe i should call Megha. I dialed a number from the contact. Pick up, pick up.

" Why are you calling me? " i heard a familiar drunk voice from behind.

What? I turned around to see the player walking towards me with dancing steps. Why am i calling him? I checked my phone. Maan- megha ok confusion everything starts with 'm'. Moreover i see two names wait no same names two times. Why have i saved two names in the same screen? I felt someone poke my shoulder and i turned to find Maan with narrowed eyebrows.

" i was calling my friend " i said

" oh" he said thoughtfully " i am your friend "

" no. You are a player you are not my friend " i said pointing my index finger at him.

"why?" he pouted cutely.

" because you are bad" i said

" am i? " he scratched his head confusedly

I began to walk to the parking, when he ran behind me.

" where are you going? " he asked

"Home" i said

" why? Can you be with me? " he asked " please i don't have friends"

" liar" i stared at him accusingly " you have friends "

" no i swear " he pinched his throat to promise.

" yeah?" i asked

He nodded.

" okay but i need to go home" i said

" i will drop you " he said

I shrugged and we both went to my car. It was very dark as it was way away from the town.

" you know where my house is? " i asked

" yes straight, right, straight" he said pointing directions with both his hands.

" no stupid right, straight, right" i said

" you are stupid i know the route " he argued

" turn right" i said turning the steering.

" no straight " he tried to get steering from my hand.

We rehearsed the same until we heard a loud noise making the car stop. We glanced at the huge banyan tree that the car has hit. Oops. I turned to look at him accusingly.

" i hate you" i said

He pouted again " nobody likes me " he made a crying face

" i don't like you yeah but megha likes you " i said giggling.

" who?"

" Megha my grey eyed friend" i said

"ohh" he said remembering her. " but she likes only my body "

" why?"

" i have six packs all girls like it" he said childishly

"no"

" yes you wanna see? I will show you" he said effortlessly tossing his t-shirt off his head. " see" he pointed at his. Perfectly chiseled body.

" you have one...two...three...four...five...and six " i said counting the packs by poking them with my index finger. He giggled.

" but see mine is flat " i said making a unimpressed face slightly moving my pallu to expose my belly.

" it is cute" he said examining

" yes?" i asked looking at myself.

" umm... can i touch it? " he asked

" no" i said

" please " he made a baby face

" once " i said after a pause

His hands slowly caressed my belly reaching the side of my waist then again moving back.

"Ticklish " i laughed

" it's so soft" he said.

I smiled proudly.

"Your whole body must be soft " he said

I shrugged.

" can i kiss your lips?" he asked

"why?"

" i don't know " he shrugged

I made a thoughtful face before leaning closer to him. " once" i whispered. His hands travelled to my waist making me giggle. God it is ticklish. His lips were placed on mine effortlessly making me gasp with the sudden contact.

" you taste so good " he commented before chewing my lower lips.

His hands went to my back removing my pallu completely. While his other hand snapped the hook of my blouse. Something inside me screamed 'stop' but i was too drowsy to identify the voice. To add up to the effect of alcohol his touch was taking me to different level before i could realize what is happening i was carried a long way ahead.

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MUST READ NOTE
This story is nothing like what we are used to in the forum. I have been reading American e-books of late and inspired by that so please bear with me. Don't be judgmental about any character read with open mind. Don't accuse Maan or Geet they both are drunk and not in their sense. Since it was Geet's POV it may seem as if she is sober but she isn't. I don't know how much convincing this chapter proved but i will request you to be patient with the story. If you have any disagreement PM me i am just going on with the flow and there are 99.9% i miss logic as i have not planned anything.

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