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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Shika 😊
Its been such a long time that I have again read a WOL update. It took me time to recollect the story and the current context but then did catch up to it.

Whispers of the heart: He was the one who divested her of her veil at the start of the and yet her flying veil was the one that caught his attention at the terrace. Loved his whisper "Geet" and how sure he was that she would most certainly be running towards him 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Hi Shika 😊

Its been such a long time that I have again read a WOL update. It took me time to recollect the story and the current context but then did catch up to it.

Whispers of the heart: He was the one who divested her of her veil at the start of the and yet her flying veil was the one that caught his attention at the terrace. Loved his whisper "Geet" and how sure he was that she would most certainly be running towards him 😳


Doc🤗

I finally see the good old days coming back with all you guys out here. I missed you so much😛

That was the closest one to kiss. So do with it for now. Sending you kisses through another medium soon😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Acceptance: ❤️ the music selection here
Beautiful writing 👏

Her acceptance of her own follies of judging someone with a perspective within her own frame without realizing that perspectives can be biased and also very individualistic. She accepted that he can be a completely different person than what he presents in front of her or the one she has been subjugated to.

The whole scene where the same kid was the reason to being a lightness and smile to her after what she experienced with him at the dress shopping to the continuation where he softens up in his kneeling position while interacting with his nephew was so complete and made a very sweet picture. They say that a child can bring about the best qualities in a person and that is exactly what Geet experienced happening to Maan.

Vicky Though the part was from Tweesha's perspective yet he was the one who was highlighted ❤️. He did keep his promise to her of always being there for her. Kiss 😲😲😲 It is bitter sweet one for me here. 😭

Loved this line in particular "He found the darkness that was pregnant with many secrets more comforting..." 👏👏


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.


Doc🤗

I finally see the good old days coming back with all you guys out here. I missed you so much😛

That was the closest one to kiss. So do with it for now. Sending you kisses through another medium soon😆

Noodles 🤗
Kisses toh nahi hai ye le lo ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

I missed being here
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Posted: 11 years ago
That's a fast update. Thank you so much.
We are ready to share popcorn with Tanvi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Updated my comment.. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ripples: Shika a question... will I ever be able to feel anything at first after reading your update that I can instantly describe in words. Ever. I'm always transported to a different world... I love being there but just don't understand how to come back leaving that feeling there itself.
Loved her introspection and contemplation of the changes in her as well as him. It just affirms her awareness of him and the resistance she is fighting, but somehow is giving it up.

The dance and the whole scene where she discovers him being an audience to not only her dance but also her inner self , turmoils as well as her joy. 👏 I could so imagine it. her hand being raised in the dance posture, her laborious breaths, yet the joy in her step and a sense of liberation in her steps ... very much devoid of her struggle and conflict form the last dance he witnessed.

The whole play of emotions in between his one single sentence "I made an effort... now... your turn" 😳😳😳 The sizzle in the touch, the stumbling and awareness. What a package 😳

He is asking for her to make an effort like him... but somehow his small efforts have indirectly caused her to take her steps towards the change. 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
I will comment when I am sure I can make some sense 😉 but it was awesome!!!
You know whenever I read one of your titles I feel something stir within me... You write in a way that can make anyone thoughtful. I can never comment anything about any of the characters because the moment I think I finally figured out the characters you show another layer of them. I just know that once I had a naina in my life, a friend who was more like a soul sister to me. Just like naina and geet. And i lost her, and I can understand Geet's pain, tweesha's pain so much. it is hard enough to lose a friend and to lose the one who had meant so much is painful. I loved the thing between Maaneet. It is something that always keeps you at the brim while reading. Tanvi seems an interesting one. after all who ever said love was easy???
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Posted: 11 years ago
HAD A FEELING TANVI SENSES SOMETHING BETWEEN MAAN AND GEET
SHE WAS NOT ONLY TALKING ABOUT THE BOOK CHARACTERS
SHE IS WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART IN THE MOVIE ALONG WITH POP CORNS
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

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i dont know how guys manage to get such good titles for the chapters.. its soo apt and such in-depth meaning it holds... awestruck!!! ⭐️

Back ground mein Lootera Bgm 😳.. and Ahaaana.. what an update Maggie ji 😃

Yami is soo apt .. she fits as Tanvi.. soft.. gentle.. caring. yet vulnerable.. fiercely protective about her brothers.

North and South .. OMG 😲 Mannu ka kya hoga

Geet-Rey bond.. .. yet one more beautiful picture you painted Maggie.. I loved it when geet was chasing rey .. and even now...

Tanvi Khurana Mathew stood with her arms crossed, and her lips drawn into a full smile at the sight of the girl who had been sitting in the swing, humming slowly, more like a lullaby to the little monster who was sleeping with his head on her lap. Tanvi marvelled at the beautiful picture they painted, the girl and her very own two-year-old son, Rey. With a book in her hand she looked quite occupied, yet her hand that passed gently over Rey's soft hair occasionally told an entirely new tale.

It was surprising to see the little monster lie so peacefully, who otherwise would bring the entire household with all the servants to their knees, but what was more surprising was the immediate liking he took for the girl.


Geet. It was her name, she remembered from the introductions her mother made, and by the affectionate tone her mother used, she knew the girl had stolen a part of her heart.

A small stirring from Rey was all it took for Geet to snap her eyes away from the book she was reading, to pass her hand through her soft brown hair and croon with a gentle voice.

Tanvi saw as Rey mumbled some childish gibber making Geet give a soft chuckle and kiss his cheek with affection.


awww 🤗 i totally loved it...


@italic.. 😊


am i missing anything?? 😕 Why all of a sudden Tanvi is mentioning about "someone" here?? Did she see any of their interactions?? or the way maan stares at her.. or is it tooo obvious that even Tanvi got to knew about their inkling ... or just like Tweesha even she thought Geet is perfect for Maan??

Uff too many ques...😆

The door to ... Naina ..

but i feel its a knock on Maan's Door which leads to his heart... Geet already knocked one too many times on his Door.. Yet few more Knocks are needed. 😳







When Did Tweesha think Geet is perfect for Maan? Wait, are you talking about Tweesha's retort of Geet suiting Maan more, when Vicky challenged to charm her?

You did read it a lot of times, didn't you Kittu?

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