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Posted: 12 years ago


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The Downpour... Part 20


" Geet doctor is waiting"


She heard Adi was calling her standing at door. She still couldn't understand as why Maan was doing all this. She did not like this much attention from her boss. Though she had accepted Maan as her friend but it was her secret only. What he was doing was too much for her to accept but as he said, 'not to take it personal', she agreed.

"Miss Geet please lay down comfortably" Doctor spoke while Adi helped Maid to show kitchen place. Geet was feeling uncomfortable, being alone with a doctor. She was very nervous.


"Why are you so nervous Miss Geet. Just calm down"


Geet nodded. She prayed to Babaji and then Adi phone buzzed who was just entering inside. It was Maan. Adi excused and came out of room, Geet stared him going. She was sure, it was Maan call.


"Adi just be there till they finish their job. Don't leave her alone okay. By the way, how is she now?"


Adi was so sure, his boss cum friend had little secret. He smiled. Said, Geet is very nervous and then he hears Geet scream, he runs inside.


Adi what happened????" Maan also heard her scream and got scared.


"Nothing sir, your employee is fearing with injection" Adi chuckled and got a glare from Geet. He coughed.


Maan sighed. "So Geet, who doesn't even fear facing MSK, is scaring with an little injection!!" He chuckled, imagining baby expression of her.


'Oh God! How I wish to see her" He signed.


Adi was about to cut call, when Maan stopped him and said to keep it near Geet, as he wanted to hear her, all the time. He was so much in wish being near her, see her.


Adi smiled and kept phone near Geet, on table. She did not notice that it was on. She was still requesting to give pills instead of needle and Adi along with doctor were enjoying her mumble. Maan also was joining them through phone.


After finishing check up doctor called Maan and said that she is absolutely fine, just needs some rest. He left.


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Few hours later, both Adi and girl also left. Geet was now alone with her resumed thoughts. She had excitement, when Maan would come, how would she behave with him when she knew, the emotion she had been carrying for him, had been transformed into a precious bond now but how she would handle this new feeling toward him, that also without making him know, was giving goose bumps in her stomach.


She wanted to give him surprise, something special which he would not have expected from her to get. Of course she would tell him truth and apologize for her rude behaviour but more than this, she had wishes to do. But what, she had no idea, nor any resource she was having in this unknown city and this small home.


"What should I do Babaji, please help me!''


And suddenly she had got an idea. "I would make something for him!!'' she jumped in joy but than again, worried thinking 'what' as she had not idea about his likes and dislikes.


"But Geet who doesn't like 'Kheer' Everyone likes it na , so I am sure, Maan would also like it!!! I should make it for him''


She was very happy with the idea. She tuned FM radio in her mobile and placed it on fridge. It was her old habit to do any work listening music. She prepared "Kheer'' for Maan with lots of fondness. She was happy she did something special.


After preparing Kheer she cleaned house, arranged furniture at suitable place. With lots of effort she made home look really so better and after getting satisfied, she thought to take shower as any time Maan could have come. She was selecting dress to wear when got call from Maan. He said, was just about to reach.


"Omg!! Run Geet run!!''


Without giving much effort in selecting dress she rushed in washroom and took immediate shower. She came out wearing a simple red colour suit. Her hair was wet and water drops were drooping from it. Radio started to play a song which unknowingly she begun to hum while combing her hairs.


"sajna hai mujhe, Sajna ke liye

Zara uljhi late sawar lu''


She wore a small ear-ring, drew a thin line of kohl in eyes and slight gloss on her natural pink lips.


Ha rang ka rang nikhaar lu

Ki sajna hai mujhe, sajna ke liye'


Suddenly she realized what she was singing. Uninviting blush appeared on her cheeks making her all embarrassed and then suddenly, she remembered how Maan had kissed her cheeks, she could not even handle the sight of her trembling body in mirror itself. Her heart started beating in much speed and at right moment, doorbell rung.


"Babaji, he came!!''


She startled all of a sudden.


"What I do, I'm not ready yet!!!!'' She tried to comb hair in hurry but again doorbell made sound. Throwing comb on bed she rolled hair in loose bun and runs to open door. She remembered radio was still on and song was playing in full volume.


"Ohh!!''


She runs in kitchen to make it off but then continuously bell started buzzing in frustrated sound, like visitor was being so much impatient and then he started banging on door.

"Leave radio Geet, first open the door!!!''


Tripping in doormat, somehow she reached to door and makes it open and found Maan, in raised hand form as he was just going to bang on her head. She was panting heavily due to all romps.


She moved aside to give him space to come but Maan was still stood at same place unmoved. Geet got confused. Finally she whispered "Sir, please come inside''


Maan though heard her and stepped in also but his position was not much changed. He was still in numb state and was staring her with less blink of eyes. Geet peeped him having doubt and her eyes met with him and his eyes fell on her neck. She gasped suddenly; remembering she had forgot to wear her Dupatta, immediately she turned around, crossing arms around chest. She was damn embarrassed, could not even move from her place or run.


Maan cursed himself mentally to stare her like this. He also turned face other side and closed eyes to turn off the quiver of heart to get some relief but it was going more wild. Her wet hairs, glowing fresh face and innocent look were making his heart impassioned.


In frustration of not keeping control on his own sense, he opened eyes and found her still there, in same position and the door was still open. He immediately closed it. Hearing door close sound Geet drawn sense perhaps came back and she runs toward room while Maan eyes followed her till she gone disappeared across walls.


And at same time radio started playing a romantic song..

"Roop tera mastana,

Pyar mera diwana

Bhool koi humse na ho jaaye''


Precap : "Maan I want to see this rain, smell it, to play in it but you know here inside, of this walls i can't even hear the sound of it properly"

Maan saw a restlessness in her, a kind of like a child desires for her favourite thing.


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
o teriii me ist
Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Why U update so late NIGHT 😆😆😆😆

I am going to sleep after readin this !!

Before reading

clappingg 👏👏👏👏

as i know it is a MAANEET FULL UPDATE 😳😳😳😳
Edited by URME - 12 years ago
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Fir se dance dikhaau kya 😆 😆


Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeh MAANEET ko thoda akkeel de do GEET ki babajii 😆😆😆

They r bhving like a teenage lover 😆😆😆😳😳😳

Hayee in love with FM RADIO😆😆

Kya timing pe song baj rahi hai 😳😳😳

Edited by URME - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites



Mai aa gayii sonaaa daarling jaldi jaldi

hi sona .hw r u nw??mona asee badii eyes karke rd looks more wide kya??...😛😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
babie nd laks hei kya??
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Posted: 12 years ago
cute update buddy
haha m loving this radio playing all d situational songs fr maaneet
do cont soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Mona ,N Lily...🤗

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